Date: August 05 2014 9:19 AM Title: Julianna's Web / Sam & Marie
That last bit seems out of character for Marie. Is she that afraid of telling Sam about who Jim is being held by?
Author's Response:
Marie is afraid of what her 'self-centered', egotistical, older sister, might do to little Jimmy, and if she doesn't tell Sam that Jim is with her, and something does happens to him, then she wouldn't have the burden of telling him about it...after the fact.
She is just hoping that nothing happens to Jimmy, and Julianna brings him back to her in one piece. Then she will have both of them together with her... that's what she really wants, is to have both of them, two miniature men, all to herself... ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oops. Forgot to rate this chapter.
Also, I like the title. Julianna's Web. And Jim is definately trapped in it.
Date: August 04 2014 8:39 PM Title: Julianna's Web / Sam & Marie
Julianne is definitely having the time of her life.
Wow, she would tie men to her bed and leave them?!! Now thats awesome.
I hve no idea what will Julianne do with Jimmy next, but I hope its sexy. He promised to do anything. :)
Its a great setup for future chatpers.
Im not sure if Marie is just gonna clean themsleves, or if Marie has a few other sexy ideas up her sleeve.
Sams question of Jim probably gave Marie the idea that Julianne is having fun with Jimmy. I think thats why Marie decided to have some fun.
Since this was a setup, and a very good setup, I hope that the next chapters have very detailed and sexy outcomes for Sam and especially Jimmy.
What I like about mid-story setups is that they give the reader some info and then we can use our imagination to guess what will happen next.
Im guessing Julianne is going to keep Jimmy inside her panties for a while. Then she will take him out and play with him. Then she ties him back to her panties.
Well, thats not really my guess, but rather my wish. :)
As for Marie, I think she is going to use Sam like a bar of soap. Then this soap may accidently slip inside somewhere.
Man, I love setups!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, Jimmy is in trouble. Julianna has become infatuated with dominating him, and she's not going to want to give him back to her sister anytime soon. Unfortunitly for him, he's going to be her 'plaything' for as long as she wants...
Marie hasn't 'ever' been with a male, or ever really known one, and she is, (like most of the women on this planet) fairly 'naive' when it comes to her actions around the tiny men... She doesn't have the experience that her mother, or her sister has, and her feelings toward a man will be something totally brand new for her...
So, I'm not sure that Marie will be anything like her sister...
Thanks Tom! Always like your reviews and suggestions, keeps me more interested in continuing with this as long as I know that someone is truely enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: August 04 2014 8:23 AM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
A glimmering of hope? A rarity in this sub-genre.
Author's Response:
As long as Captain Jim Strum, can still take a breath,... all hope shall not be lost! ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 11:46 PM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
He gets somewhat of a break for now. At least it won't be like last chapter. Plus he sucks at escaping. Can't wait, things are heating up in a good way.
Author's Response:
Thanks! F.H. , "Sucks at escaping".... Funny! ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:23 PM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
Ann seems all nice but I think Bill may be in trouble with the lust she is feeling towards him. Also will be fun to see what Becky does since Bittany doesn't feel she can be trusted *weg*
Author's Response:
Becky's the 'mean one', Bill had better keep his head down around her!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 9:19 PM Title: 'Condemned'
Now thats my kind of torture! So is that what Brittany promised to due at the end of last chapter? Suck on him? Thats more enjoyable then what I thought was in store for him, ha.
Author's Response:
Yea, you don't know how close he came, to getting devoured alive... but, I reconcidered, when I thought of a little something else that I wanted to try....
[Report This]Date: August 03 2014 11:41 AM Title: Condemned~Part Two : 'Breakfast at Brittany's'
Ok, this chapter, although not much happened, had some good ideas for the future.
Ann seems so mysterious that I cant tell what she is going to do with Bill.
Brittany seemed to change from an obsessed teen, to a "whatever" kind of teen.
With her attitude, i thought for sure that she was going to bring Bill to the dentist with her.
Then again, you mention Ann's thoughts a lot so its obvious that she was going to have some fun with Bil.
Becky mentioned going to her mom's house later. You probably already know that Im a MILF fan, so I got a little interested there. It doesnt seem like Bill would go there with them, but I hope they do. ;)
Next chapter, I hope is a return to the sexy Julianne! I hope Jimmy stays tied up for the entire chapter! Julianne could do her daily activities with Jimmy in her panties. She could drvie, go shopping, yoga, go to work in some tight outfit, and a lot more activites to spice things up. :)
The story is getting deep! I just cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Wow, Thanks Tom! Yeah, Brittany just likes to be the one 'in-charge' of everybody. Once she had captured him, and had Bill in her possession, the thrill of the hunt was over. But, she's the one 'still' in charge.. and she calls all the shots! Ha!
Okay, Julianna's next up on the 'Porn channel', and if there was a tag for 'XXX', it would most likely have to be used!
*I've already got most of the next chapter roughed out, and it might be up later tonight, no promises though...
Thanks again Tom! ;`)
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 9:06 PM Title: 'Condemned'
Looks like the fun is about to begin. :)
[Report This]Date: August 01 2014 1:03 PM Title: 'Condemned'
OK! So let me see if I have it straight, now. Billy Bob was not stolen from the salon at the end of chapter 8. Merely taken, for a short time, to another part of it by the daughter of the snobbish customer who had paid to have some "extra time" with him. Once that time was up, Valerie got him back from those two. Which makes this trio a whole new kettle of fish. Correct?*
*Hey! At least you know I'm paying attention to the story.
Author's Response:
You're right, I re-read that part, and I could've made that scene a bit more detailed. The mother quickly rescued him from her tormenting little girl and revived him in the sink, (at the Salon) and he was then returned to his 'Mistress' Valerie....
Sorry 'bout that, Cary. *But thanks for pointing that out... after editing these chapters several times, It sometimes becomes camouflaged within my scene, and it takes a fresh set of eyes to catch something like that....
I'm sure that you know what I'm talking about... ;`)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 9:16 PM Title: Stultified
I bet these teens have no mercy for Bill. Brittany should be more careful since there are not that many tiny people out there.
If only Bill knew that not many men are on the planet. That way, he could threaten the girls saying that he could kill himself or do what he wants. But thats no fun, lets have the girls have fun. I love dominant girls, especialy to tinies.
Since Marie lost Jimmy, she must be really paying attention to Sam to make sure that he doesnt leave her. Once Marie leaves, Jane may give Sam a few surprises up her pants.
Also, Im in love with Julianna as well. I dont see her actions being cruel, but rather sexy! I want Julianna to keep Jimmy in her panties forever!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Suicidal thoughts are always lurking in the back of these poor space traveler's minds. They lost their ship right off, and before the first day was over they had lost most of their crew...
Capt. Jim thinks that there might be others whom have crash landed on this giant planet before, and that's one thing that keeps him going. He thinks that just maybe, that there might be another ship... But, all he has is an instinct, and that's very little to go on...
Yeh, Capt. Jimmy's up to his neck in it.... ("Lucky Bastard") b.t.w. thanks for that suggestion Tom! (sewing the man down inside her panties) Great stuff!
;`)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 9:02 PM Title: Stultified
Uh oh! Bills situation just went form bad to worse. I don't know what Brittany promised to do but probablly something Bill doesn't want to happen!
Looks like Sam is the only safe one at the moment, assuming Maries mom doesn't get a hold of him. Last cupcake at a weight watcher convention, funny :)
Thanks for the kind words on my last review, there's not many of us that share our taste, have to stick together!
Looking forward to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks Max, I can't say much about what's happening, because I don't want to give anything away....
But, (as modestly as I can...) this is really, Really, GOOD STUFFF! ;`)
Date: July 30 2014 2:29 PM Title: Stultified
The tail end of chapter 8: "The little girl had stolen Bob from Valerie's foot bath."
Or, something to that effect.
Author's Response:
Oh Yeah! That's right... his name's Billy Bob, and you can call him Bill, or Bob, Bobby, Billy, Robert, Robby, Willy, Will, Will-I Am, or whatever ya want to call him... Capt. Jim just calls him Dude...
;`)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 12:11 PM Title: Stultified
So, I _was_ right! There were only two initial crushees. The survivors are Bob, Bill, Sam, and Capt. Jim.
I can't wait to see if Marie decides to become pro-active in rescuing the latter (instead of waiting for Julianne to be considerate*).
*Again, I'd probably win MEGABUCKS FOR LIFE, on the first try, before anything else unlikelier happened.
Author's Response:
Odds are... you're most likely correct. Although, (I've messed up with character names before,...) I don't recollect using 'Bob'? Which chapter was it? ;`)
[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 8:17 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two
Just got caught up on this, thanks so much for writing this, Wildcat! There is a serious lack of stories that appeal to my taste right now on this site. This was probably my favorite chapter so far, I think I am in love with Julianna, shes everything a giantess should be! Jim is going to have a tough time surviving this, I envy the poor bastard :)
Honorable mention to chapter 6, pudding scene was amazing. The only crtique I might have, and I hate critiquing your stories because they are so awesome but it just felt like she should have ate him but it was still damn good.
Yes, please, definitely keep writing this!
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks a lot Max! You've no idea, just what your view means to me! I know we have a very similar taste in the fantasy, and... as it is, there's very few of us out there...
Thanks so much for the comment. I was starting to get bogged down, but now... after your encouragement, I suddenly feel revamped! ;`)
Hope that you continue to follow, and as aways, I look forward to your opinion and input!
Date: July 28 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Part of me wants to trade places with Jim. :)
[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 11:40 AM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two
WHOA! Fantastic!
Yes! Keep going with this!
I think the next chapter should be with one of the other tinys, but I love what Julianne is doing to Jimmy.
Sexy girl, sexy ideas. I like it.
As for cruel punishments...stepping on a tiny and living is worse. This panty trap on the other hand is much better, in terms of comfort and sexiness. (but thats just my opinion.). :)
I hope Julianne keeps him there for a very long time. He wanted to eat muffins, well he should eat her out. There is plenty in there, hehe.
I wonder what happens when Jimmy blows his load? Will travel far inside her? Perhaps not. She might flush it all away on him with an orgasm soon. haha.
Anyway, im glad you are back. Computer problems are indeed annoying.
I once was writing a chapter, and i lost connection for 20 seconds, so when i tried to submit it, the page refreshed, and I lost the chapter. :(
Im glad your computer is fixed now. Must have been quite a relief for you. Im also glad this story is back and running.
These chapters are getting sexier and sexier!
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! I'd hoped that I didn't disappoint... I put alot of effort into that chapter, and there were several 're-writes'. I must have changed that chapter five or six times before I felt that it was just right! ;`)
[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 9:01 AM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two
WHOA!
Author's Response:
Yee Haw! Thanks Cary! ;`)
[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 8:52 AM Title: Bath Time with Julianna
Oh, yeah! She's completely broken him in. :-(
[Report This]Date: July 28 2014 8:49 AM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'
"Out of the batter bowl; into the purse." Not bad. That expression could really catch on!
Author's Response:
Bitter Batter, Butter... or, Butter Batter, tastes so Bitter? Peanut Butter, Batter Better? Naw, just Good ol' chocolate Pudding! ;`)
Thanks Cary!