[Report This]Date: June 24 2014 1:56 AM Title: How I royally screwed up
Probably the sexiest dialogue of a sadistic girl I have ever read!
The best is that the main character is Tom. Haha.
I hope she literally puts him in the front part of her panties.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Writing the next chapter as we speak!
[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 7:30 PM Title: How I royally screwed up
An excellent start and a refreshing take on the teenage loser shrinking scenario. I love how aware Marissa is of her assets, charms, and overall sexuality, and I hope she milks them for all they're worth while humiliating little Tom and his friends. The shrinking has barely started, but she does a great job already of making the reader feel small, and I hope that continues.
I'd also like to see her relationship with her boss explored a little bit more. How is it that he got the shrinking formula in the first place? Is he aware of or even participating in how Marissa will be using it? This story has a very promising premise, and I hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! And don't worry, Coolie will stop by next chapter for a bit more explanation.
[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 4:10 PM Title: How I royally screwed up
I'm happy to be the first to review this great story! This is an awesome start. I can't wait to see what this chick does to Tom. Will she be cruel and sadistic, or maybe have a bit of a heart? Can't wait to find out what goes on next!
Author's Response:
Thanks! And there will be more than one giantess, and more than one tiny guy, so we'll get to see some of the different attitudes.