[Report This]Date: March 17 2015 5:54 AM Title: The Discovery
Great Story, I want to see more.
Date: July 08 2014 2:52 PM Title: The Discovery
I like your story too. We have same tastes.
Keep it up and write some more!
Date: June 26 2014 9:55 AM Title: The Discovery
Wonderful story! I love the "in the sock" stuff!
I'll bet, at some point, something will be introduced that causes him to be stuck at whatever height he currently is..forever! That's my prediction!
Author's Response: We'll have to see :) I'm glad you liked it!
Date: June 20 2014 1:52 PM Title: A Friend Arrives
Much better! You added some good detail which is great. Now I would focus on writing longer chapters and slowing down the pace a bit. Everything's happening so quickly. This story has a lot of potential though. Can't wait for chapter 3
Date: June 19 2014 5:06 PM Title: The Discovery
Decent start! I would work on adding more detail. Specifically more about Alexandra. Also, the formatting was a little odd at times. Otherwise, it was a good start. I'll be waiting for the second chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will definately add more detail and yeah, I don't know what was up with the formatting. A second chapter is coming soon!
[Report This]Date: June 19 2014 3:21 PM Title: The Discovery
I like it. Just need more descriptive details as to what she looks like, her foot size/smell etc. Great start tho!