[Report This]Date: January 03 2015 11:39 PM Title: Offworlder
Well, this was a pretty interesting and exciting read. I suppose I could call it karma that Friarre's hard work got undone so easily, and there was [almost] nothing she could do about it. Though I was kind of expecting a mutual death at the end, I guess that that wouldn't have been as satisfying as the giant winning in the end.
Now, we just have to hope that someone else doesn't hire him to attack the race that hired him in this story. ;)
Great story!
[Report This]Date: June 16 2014 6:27 PM Title: Offworlder
Well, I now have a new favorite story on this site! Heck, this is probably going into my top ten favorite sizechange stories list.
It’s not just the fetish parts that are excellent, either. You created a solid story with a complex universe that could easily be the backdrop of a serious sci-fi novel. And I adore the whole symbolic and actual duel between Friarre and the giant. There are many sizechange writers who write about subjects that I enjoy, but I really respect you as a writer.
Author's Response:
I keep coming back and reading this comment. Thanks so much for your words, and reading what I wrote here, Nyx. This comment will continue to make me feel good for a long while. I truly am humbled by your words. You're such an amazing writer. The respect is wholly mutual.