Reviews For Powerful Girls
Reviewer: Highman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2014 7:24 PM Title: Taken
Date: June 14 2014 7:24 PM Title: Taken
I was wanting to ad more tags but it wouldn't accept it.
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2014 2:25 PM Title: Taken
Date: June 14 2014 2:25 PM Title: Taken
You really need to work on your paragraphing. If you haven't already, you should take a look at the "Writing Tools" section of Giantess World.
Secondly, you should add more tags to the summary of this story. I suspect you plan on including more than what is currently listed in the tags section of the summary.