I'm not trying to discourage you.  I think it takes lots of courage and patience to write and post a story here.

When I see inconsistencies, it disrupts the flow of the story and ruins the experience.  In Chapter 4 you dealt with my concern, that all the men in the world shrank and the women didn't notice, all but clumsily (3 days?!).  Another inconsistency was the flight to Tampa.  I'm not sure what the balance of power between the sexes is in your world, but in reality, most pilots in the world are men.  I don't think there are enough qualified female pilots to fill in for all the missing men.  

In a word, chaos!  Take men out of the equation and the world stops.  You missed many opportunities to show the reader what life is like in a world with shrunken men.  That's why myself and my fellow reviewers suggested you slow down and take your time developing plot and characters.  Your overall plot is good.  But if plot were all it took, then I'd have hundreds of stories posted here.  Keep writing!  You could even keep refining this story and show us a polished masterpiece one day!

You need to work on your paragraphing. If you haven't already, you should check out the "Writing Tools" section of Giantess World.

Also, what is this?

a33;a33;a33;a33;a33;a33;a33;a33;

And what is this?

a33;**a33;**a33;**a33;**a33;**a33;

I'm sorry, the premise is good and caught my attention, but the execution is a mess.  You're jumping from one scene to the next within a paragraph.  No exploration or discovery.  And the characters seem to know what's happening without giving any reason for them to have that knowledge.  NASA and the General know what the Villians are doing.  The Villians know what the Earthlings are doing and knows everything about Dylan and the threat he represents.  Dylan adapts too quickly to these situations.  Then we get to women.  An entire day goes by without wondering where all the men went, or even finding any shrunken ones?

You basically have crunched more then 4 chapters worth of action within 2 pages.  It just seems like you're rushing through the story.  There's so much that could be done with this if a little more time and thought were put into it.  Keep plugging away at it, and I'm sure you'll improve.  You're certainly imaginative.