Date: June 21 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Honestly, I am loving this story. Keep it Up!! I like it :D
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much =D
Date: June 21 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Things We Do for Love
I would be a fan of Sam if not for him being effing racist. You know, India, unlike so many other nations do not allow their faith to impede politics?! FU to hell Sam.
But in all seriousness I liked the chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I managed to depict Sam as the asshole he is then :D
ThX
Date: June 15 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Close Encounter of the 3rd Kind
nice story
Author's Response:
thx ;)
Date: June 15 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
@vgiv... I agree. Something ted me that if this story's headed where I think it is, Kyle, Ashley & Sam will all have to set asside their differences
Date: June 15 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Homecoming
I missed this chapter, not to much occured that could not have been spread through the previous chapter and the next.
Author's Response:
true, it links the 2 chapters
Date: June 15 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Close Encounter of the 3rd Kind
I do love the interaction between the two. I only wish the stigma of a break up was not hanging over their thoughts and choices.
Date: June 14 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Just one more thought... After reading through a little more closely, something tells me my idea May fun it's place... I have a feeling Tina's got something to hide, & although Kyle may be reluctant to help at first, I have a feeling he may have to if he wants to save his ass :)
Thanx for reading my story btw... Glad you liked it.
Date: June 14 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Well, sorry to reveal any spoilers to other readers who are browsing the reviews section... That was not my intent :)
If it's no good in this story, that's fine... Maybe something to keep in mind for another story, or maybe another student Sam meets (other than Tina, Ashley & Kyle). Also an idea ton pet in a sequel depending on how everything plays out
Sorry if I sound like I'm ranting/repeating myself, but ya, a guy who's just friends with another guy was what I was going for... I find with these shrinking stories, it's not always the sexual stuff I'm into, so that kinda stuff is sometimes nice to throw in... Even if Kyle isn't such a nice guy, it'll be interesting to have them there as a giant... He'll, just look at Ryan from Life is Funny that Way... Having a giant guy as the main bad guy just seems to add depth to the story.
Anyway thanx so much for taking my ideas... Love it when authors interact with their readers, and are willing to be open to new ideas.
Author's Response:
I'm half way through the second chapter of your story, as it just so happens. I must say, Madeline seems like my kind of girl XD
Nah, neither of us revealed any spoilers =P and if readers guess anything about the plot by reading the reviews section, it's simply because they're too smart :D
No, I totally got what you're saying. I'm cool with that too, it's just the sexual stuff I don't like, same as you.
It's quite possible to have another male student taking Kyle's place, but I need to think about it for sometime, only because it wasn't included when I was generating ideas and developing the outlines of this story. And that's a problem with me, for not having thought of it. Probably because it's not that prevalent in giantess/tiny stories.
I do enjoy our correspondence here, and appreciate you taking the time to exchange ideas with me =)
Date: June 14 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
The situation you've got between Kyle & Sam (where the giant guy knows the tiny one well) works perfectly... That's wh I sighed ted it in the first place... Plus, depending on how I predict things to work out, he may need someone like Kyle if it doesn't work with Ashlry.
Reading the stories I suggested explains my thoughts a bit better m, but that's pretty much a summary of what the other stories describe.
Author's Response:
I guess I'm getting the picture here. So basically Sam would approach Kyle to keep him as a plan B, in case Ashley decides to screw him over?
I like it that way, just a guy helping another guy, no weird stuff in between. There's one problem, though. I started out the plot with Kyle actually betraying Sam, and choosing his new girlfriend over him. I also furthur developed the idea of Kyle being a no good friend by making Tina, Sam's archenemy, his new gf. So now if I make Kyle suddenly betray Tina, and choose Sam over her, I'd be ruining the rationale of the plot.
THe idea is good, and one that I'd never have though of on my own. But my hands are tied by the plot here, about Kyle helping Sam out.
However, like I said I like the idea, and I'll definatly try to include a Sam and Kyle encouter in the story to adress it.
Again, thank you for taking the time to share your suggestions with me, I welcome and enjoy them all. Please keep it up. =)
Date: June 14 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Well, like I said, it your story... But thanx for taking the time out to check out the other stories, and taking time to reply.
I know what you mean though... If it's not done right, the giant male things a real turn off, but depending on how it's pulled off, it really adds to the story IMO.
Date: June 14 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Well, as I said before, I'm fine with Kyle as a giant.. Actually find it interesting and more realistic to mix up the genders... Just as long as it's not really sexual or anything.
Read Ultradude306's Adam's new school, or RandomStoriesHQ's I Wish I Was Normal for examples of what I've liked in the pas.
Author's Response:
Hmm never really been interested in the presence of a giant male, even in the background. But I guess when Sam goes to triple H there'll naturally be some giants as well as giantesses. And like I said, Kyle will have a role in the future, and since Sam is shrunk atm, he'll naturally be a giant to him.
I will read the stories you mentioned the first chacne I get, thx for the recommendation.
Date: June 14 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Close Encounter of the 3rd Kind
This was a great chapter...
Just a suggestion... Not so into giant guys (in an explicit way... As a character is perfectly fine), but any plans for Sam to get back to school & meet Kyle?.. Was kinda thinking it might be a good idea... If things turn bad w/ Ashley, @ least he's got somewhere to go.
It's your story... Just a suggestion/idea.
Author's Response:
and I welcome your suggestion.
In fact, the plot requires Sam to go back to the triple H. As for an encounter with Kyle, I've had some ideas about it. Now that I see you're also interested, I'll definately try to impede it into the plot. I'm not a fan of giant dudes either, same as you and many other people here, so the interaction between Sam and Kyle won't exactly be a normal one, with them chatting or anything like that. I do have a vague idea of how their encounter will be, and I hope you'll enjoy it too :)
I appreciate that you kept reading the story, and thank you for the review and the suggestion.
Cheers mate =)
Date: June 12 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Homecoming
Awesome... Not as into unaware, hoping the rest of this story goes good!
Author's Response:
hopefully there'll be less unaware stuff now that Sam has been found by Ash! ;)
Date: June 12 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Pain and Pleasure
I love this story really easy to paint a picture of what's going on :). Kimda feel sorry for the poor guy but I get the feeling it's gonna get a lot worse for him hehe can't wait to see more!
Frankie
Author's Response:
thanks for the review Frankie :)
Yeah, he has been shrunk for only a couple of hours so far! he's got a long way to go =D
Date: June 10 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Awesome chapter!... Just reading the summery, I thought this would be yet another generic story... Turns out I was wrong.
Keep writing this one!
Author's Response:
thanks, will do!
Date: June 09 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
A nice start! Ashley's reasons for the breakup seem kind of vague, either that or Sam neglected to tell us some things. I wonder by the title if it means that he and Ashley are going to reconcile, or will it be someone else?
I'm interested. Keep going!
Author's Response:
since the story is from Sam's point of view (for now), we get as much as he remembers, and he just as he said, he didn't pay much attention to what Ashley said afterwards. But there will definatly be more elaboration on their past relationship.
Thank you for the support, will do!
Date: June 09 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Really good start, I'm looking forward to how things progress from here!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment, I'll try to develop the story the best I can
Date: June 09 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Continue, please. I like the character, and am interested in seeing his development.
Author's Response:
Will do. thank you very much for the review!
Date: June 09 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Shitty day, failed a class, girlfriend broke up with him and now shrunk with her as jis only hope, triple punch to the gut.
Author's Response:
True, he'd better not get on her ex's bad side if he wishes to change that :d
Date: June 09 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?
Neat, looking forward to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback