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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Tight Spot

I like how this turned out to be honest. But when I have a chance I'll read and review the other part. I'm really digging this Tina girl. I just hope her attitude stays like this.

aaron
PS what color were her toenails? And can Sam maybe paint them per Tina's request of course.

Author's Response:

thx for the review.

 

Since her nails were painted black, her toenails were (probably) painted black too.

 

sure, it seems like her to have sam spoil her toes =D

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?

I'm surprised Tina still wants sam so badly (that is, if she's not lying). After their falling out, and her being with another guy, this was the last thing I'd expect from her. Maybe if Sam has a chance, he'll be able to getaway from Tina by trying to get Kyle's attention next time around... That is, if he's not trapped ith in Tina's bra or panties.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Tight Spot

I doubt Tina will keep her word. Not if she feel so empowered! But, assuming I'm (GASP!) wrong, Ashley had better start carrying a sponge inside her backpack. So, Sam can use it as a port-o-potty.

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 18 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Run for it...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

I'll pass. I don't do Writing.com-style cliffhangers as often as I used to.

Author's Response:

you aren't supposed to write anything you just choose which chapter you'll read after this one ;)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hot and Heavy

Yes, worshipping your giant girlfriend's behind can be a real pain-in-the-Ash.


Ba-DUM-boom!

Author's Response:

:)) nice one

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Reaching Out

Whoa! :-O



Never saw that one coming.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Check

Hmph! Julia has curiosity the way soap opera characters have cancer: incurable.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Ride of Your Life

OH, FRIG!

Why do vindictive ex-girlfriends always seem to have loyal best friends in these stories? I mean, does company really like to help inflict misery?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Second Chances

Thanks, to you, for keeping on posting!! :-)

This chapter was suitably poignant.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 6 - A Knightly Deed

Eh! Sometimes, non-interaction helps build suspense. Even if nobody actively reviews to say so.

Author's Response:

and sometimes it adds variey and re-reading value! (let's hope its the latter about this one...)

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Well great chapter, very interested in the changes. With adding the interactive story. Still confused with the "class" and "similarly class".

Author's Response:

class:leave means you want Sam to leave the class

Class:stay means that you want sam to stay in class, waiting for Ash to find him

 

thanks a lot =)

Reviewer: MrTiny Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Wish I had a following like you, though I only got one story started... :/


But, good stuff, can't wait to see what comes next. I wanna see what happens if he leaves the classroom AND if he stays, lol

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Nice! I cant wait to see how this interactive story will go! Good luck! And as always, still an amazinging story. I like how you made Sam to act like a human, being stupid sometimes and all. Some stories don't have that, and it takes away the reality of the situations.

Author's Response:

thanks a lot, me too!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Awesome chapter. Seems like il be tougher for Sam in the outside world than I thought.

As for what I think should happen, I think his best bet is to try and get back to
Ash. If not, have a feeling he should try and get to David. I still have a feeling Tina's got something to do with the shrinking, & David, being here's, might know how to help.

That being said, he should try and Avoid Tina at all costs.

Author's Response:

thanks bro, yea the possibilities are exciting, even now that I have so many characters to work with!

Tina's gonna have a role for sur!

thanks again ;)

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Making Decisions

Though an interesting idea, going interactive puts this story at the whims of the community.  I've liked this as a love story and a gentle one at that.  I realize that in order to do justice to the characters that you've created and to introduce conflict to keep the story interesting, Sam is going to have to encounter some difficulties.  I'm just worried that the array of readers here with their own kinks and interests will take this story in a totally different direction (vore, crush, butt, scat, etc.)  To be true to the plot, I don't mind if he encounters his female enemies and has a period of difficulty/torture.  I just don't want to see something badly permenant and gross.  I would prefer he stay shrunk but end up with Ash in a loving relationship.  But these are long term concerns and I hope you will maintain the quality of your story despite people's input.

For the immediate future, my vote is that he tries to sneak out of the classroom.  Encounters a couple of close calls, and just when he thinks he's home free, he gets caught by someone he doesn't want to be with.



Author's Response:

thanks for sharing your thoughts.

By 'interactive' I meant that the reader can 'choose' one of the different paths I've laid in front of them, not that they can actually 'dictate' what they want it to be. (it would be impposible!) The gentle giantess theme was the foundation upon which I created this story, and I have spent 12 chapters creating and developing the gentle relationship between Ash and Sam, so I can safely assure you that there is no way the original plot and the possibilities it could bring about will be sacrificed here.

Basically Sam will take different routes, each with its own adventures and challanges (and possibly enlightenments) but the story and the characters are still the same and it can't possibly be very mach off the mark.

THink of it as a plus re-reading value, rather than as the story being changed and drifted into a different, harsher category of macrophilia.

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hot and Heavy

Please don't stop updating this story! It's absolutely amazing! Nothing good like it!

Author's Response:

I won't
thank you for the feedback :)

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Hot and Heavy

Great chapter! Can't wait to see how Sam fares in the outside world!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?

its funny cause triple h is the name of a hentai

Author's Response:

Really? I thought I was being original! :-/

Reviewer: Kaminayh Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bad Day, huh?

I am waiting for the continuation of this story :(



Author's Response:

Sorry dude, had aton of stuff going on but now my life is more stable and I can hopefully write more frequently :)

THanks 

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