Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2014 7:11 AM Title: I- Woman of Wealth and Taste

This story is way out of what I usually read and I enjoyed the heck out of it.

I was especially impressed by chapter 1.  You did such a great job of setting up your fantasy world and giving just enough information to make it feel distinct while not wallowing in world building.  It can be so hard for stories like this, and I think you remembered that the point of the story was not to write long and detailed histories of kingdoms and geneologies.  You used the tropes of fantasies that we're all familiar with to fill in the blanks and get the story moving, but you also didn't rush through the opening section so quickly that the world felt like nothing more than the setting for some shrinking.

I greatly enjoyed each chapter, and found the character progressions and dynamics both fascinating, suspenseful, and hot.

Great job. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 7:56 PM Title: I- Woman of Wealth and Taste

I shoulda known what kinda story this would be when I saw you borrowed a character from Kaneda. Not that it's a bad thing, it's well written and entertaining!