[Report This]Date: January 18 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I mean I know this is a fetish site and you don't speak English...
but good god this is hard to read
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent smut and hilarious english. Try-hard fags trying to write long-winded literary masterpiececs on a fetish porn site are deluded.
[Report This]Date: October 28 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Some authors work very hard to write coherent well developed stories with realistic characters and engaging plots. I understand that everyone wants to be a nice guy and give everything 5 stars but that is fair niether to the readers or writers that contribute here. This piece in no way deserves 5 stars. It has no decent plot structure, nor basic paragraph structures, its characters are absurd caricatures, there is no extended description nor any attempt to set anything remotely resembling a scene and the grammar and spelling are both nonexistent.
The point of a rating system is not to give author's self esteem points but to objectively rate the quality of a piece of fiction.
Date: August 21 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am going to try to review this story;Ben bu hikayeyi yorumlayan denemek için gidiyorum;Merhaba.
Tyson is the name of a famous boxer ,very interesting.
ChapterTwo/Bölüm iki,I love the gradual shrinking effect.
Third Chapter/üçüncü Bölüm,I like the bodily shrinkage genre;
I plan to read more of your material and this story more to study it.
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[Report This]Date: August 20 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this, but the language barrier is obvious. It can be really difficult to learn a new language, let alone write a story in one.
The content and subject matter of the story is excellent. I hope that you'll continue to expand your vocabulary and keep writing. Try to keep your story organized in paragraphs, and use a little less spacing.
Author's Response:
Once again thanks for the ideas and your support.This will be my main story as im afraid to say that shoesaler's story is over.I'll try make this something very big and i will try not be slacky with all my best.Thanks again survivor aka jimi jamison/burning heart fan haha =D!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
want to see more. keep going...
Date: June 09 2014 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I dont know what to say.I was hopeless and thinking that this story will be leftalone in the darkness...Thank you so much!
Means a lot to me.I'll try my best and write 5k+words per day.
Please keep following!
I love speck sizes as well
Thank you again!
Date: June 09 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Man, I only readed the first chapter and it's absolutely amazing, the concept is very interesting and refreshing, it changes from the shrinking ex or something, really like the characters in the story and the less than speck size, it's my favourite!
So enjoyable to read, PLEASE continue here on this site, I understand your feels bro but people are lazy here, I'm following this story until the end hoping it will be long, good continuation, artist.