[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've read your other stories and honestly I see much more potential for manuever with this one than all of the others combined.
I like how the regular sized people have the potential to be either antagonistic or even indifferent to the miniaturized people and still be quite capable of ruining many innocent lives.
Perhaps an old doting grandmother might take to the pleasure of collecting the afflicted as a hobby to suplement her boring life regardless of how it impacts the lives of those so abducted. Or a young girl might decided to stamp out an entire colony of them just because she can and has not yet developed enough morals to know right from wrong.
I'm left wondering if the two factions will cooperate to some extent with each other when circumstances permit or if the afflicted have learned through fatal trial and error just to set up defensive perimeters and do the best they can with various ingenuitive means to disuade the curious Giant/ess from stepping foot within their fortified zones.
Or is subterfuge the only option left to them? (rhetorical)
Whatever you decide, I'm glad that your avenues are so wide open here.
I also hope that you will write the bulk of it here at this site rather than at some others that would severely limit your possibilities of creativity due to their hyper paranoid terms and conditions in contrast to Giantess World which seems to be one of the only bastions of free word expression around catering to this genre these days.
In any event, I'd like to commend you once again and give my highest form of praise as well as hope that this story will see many more varied chapters to come.
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to write such a thorough comment, I really appreciate it! You've got lots of great thoughts here, and I can tell that you're really enjoying thinking about different scenarios that could play out here. I just hope whatever I wind up writing can keep your interest and doesn't let you down.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing, I hope you enjoy where the story goes and I look forward to hearing your thoughts on future chapters!
Date: June 05 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
World building is always nice, sets the scene for the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's good to get the foundations laid out before you get too deep, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: June 05 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm interested to see where this story goes
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds!
Date: June 05 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I will admit even though this is just the intro you have me hooked I really wan't to see what you have planned for this world of people both normal size and shrunken. I will admit I enjoy your word choice through this it varries a lot which is great.
Anyway I really would love to see another chapter soon. Less a request more a demand, I am kidding.
-Chloe
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for giving this story its first review! I'm glad to hear you're looking forward to reading more. Also glad to hear you enjoy my word choice. I try not to use the same wording often. Saying practically the same things over and over again makes things boring to write, and if things are boring to write, I believe they'll be boring to read as well.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing!