[Report This]Date: February 09 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 14: Another World
Hey there !
First time I've ever seen your story. Although it's not really what turns me on, here I am reading you.
Your writing is amazing for writing fictions. No kidding, I love the way you write. The only reason you are not getting a lot of reviews is because I don't think you are making it "sexy" enough for the audience you have here. And maybe the universe the characters are set in doesn't meet what one would expect from a giantess story here.
That sure doesn't mean that it's bad. Again, you're really good. The story just doesn't fit with what we are used to here, and therefore readers can't get into the story. Maybe you should try posting it somewhere else ? I don't know. All this work deserves to be read though.
Anyway, I see that you're writing a book. Great. From what I've read, you sure do have the potential.
Cheers !
Author's Response:
Thanks mate. The part about the "sexy" not being appealing enough is something that I'm still improving upon. Otherwise, thank you for inputing your criticism and it explains quite a few things about my story which I appreciate greately.
Good day to you.
Date: January 29 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Backstory and morning
Thank you much. :) your story is now on my reading list but i gotta catch up.
Author's Response: No problem, in fact I should thank you. I've been meaning to change the title for quite a while, but not only have I been unsure of what to rename it, I was kind of unmotivated until you commented. Also, I'm glad you are reading my story (that was on hiatus for literally half a year)
Date: January 26 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Backstory and morning
"Trap" has a very very negative conotation towards trans women. Implies they are trying to trick you somehow. Just something worth mentioning.
Author's Response: Oh, really? Didn't know/ think about that. I was just thinking about the term (Japan related) typically used to describe a male who REALLY looks like a female. I had no ill will in using the word 'trap' as any negative connotation against anyone. With that in mind...