Date: February 21 2016 9:25 PM Title: Prologue
i really like your story and how these two brothers bonded, so i think you should continue on with this awsome story:) !
Date: July 16 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
Hey, loving the story so far! I hope to see more of Kyle. I think his relationship with Marcus would be really interesting to see progress. The way the brothers interact is nice to read too.
Keep up the great work!
Date: July 11 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter once again.
Date: June 28 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Glad to see that your still updating this! Wasn't sure what was going on with it now the other story's out.
Date: June 25 2015 6:28 PM Title: Prologue
Just wanted to say that this story is truly adorable. I really enjoyed it so far. Also, I don't think you should worry about the G/T contents. This isn't the first story like this, so I think it first here just fine. Thanks again for sharing this and hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback. And yes, Marcus is pretty adorable as a teen ^^
Date: June 25 2015 4:57 PM Title: Prologue
So, is Minime an alternate ending to this story, or will it just pick up where this story leaves off?
IMO, would be great to have the two stories with separate endings, simply because there's so much unexplored stuff and unanswered questions I have with this one.
Author's Response:
Minime is basically the original story that IWIWN was based around, being Thomas and Amy's struggles together. IWIWN is the prequel to this, where we go into much more detail about Marcus and Thomas's old friendship together before his mother went to prison and he changed his ways. It is set three and a half years prior to Minime. I really should have posted Minime first, I know, but I really needed to edit it (I wrote it years ago and the quality was terrible).
Basically, when I finish IWIWN, it will fast forward a couple of years, to the start of Minime.
Hope that makes sense... thanks though for reading!
Date: June 25 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thought I'd take a peek at one of your works since you've reviewed mine before. I admit I didn't read straight through, but I got the gist of your storyline. M/m isn't really my thing, though nonetheless I can appreciate that you're putting some effort into creating some authetic relationships for your characters. You're targeting a particularly niche audience on a site that's pretty heavily focused on F/m, so kudos for still doin' your thing.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 2:41 PM Title: Prologue
Cool to see this story back! It's crazy now, knowing that Marcus is gonna get killed at some point. Will this story show that or will the other one flashback to that?
Date: June 25 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Glad to see this story updated :)
Date: July 17 2014 10:21 PM Title: Prologue
Keep up the awesome work, & hope Kyle returns.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2014 9:48 PM Title: Prologue
As someone who just finished writing a story where a giant character was blind, I'm real interested to see how Kyle's relationship with Marcus developed.
Date: June 01 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Their father seems to be absent. Is there a reason for this? Unless of course I seem to have missed where he is mentioned in the story.
Date: June 01 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm curious as to whether you've thought of how to conclude this story. It seems like it could be one of those that goes on indefinitely until the author gets bored of writing it. Have you thought of an ending?
Author's Response: This story is actually a prequel for one of my other g/t works called Minime, which I'm currently editing. Once I put it up you'll understand what this story is about ;)
Date: June 01 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well he could be good at dodgeball (as well as gymnastics). Dance too. Still, it does seem strange that the school would make him do P.E. Oh well, moving on.
Date: June 01 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
That must really suck (being Tom Thumb) but on the upside he could get a lot of money from acting if he's good. People with Dwafism are always saught after so I see no reason why he can't be a movie star.
I know that there are actors with dwarfism who want to known for casting as humans rather than dwarves, Umpaloompas etc. and they set up their own theatre company. However I can't remember the name. If it comes to me I'll post it.
Date: June 01 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Here:
“Nothin much…”
If you're missing out the G in nothing then there should really be an apostrophe after the N.
Date: June 01 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
I didn't know braces could be different colours. That's news to me. I wonder if Cameron will become jealous of the attention his brother has been getting.
Date: June 01 2014 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter is exactly the same as the last one. You should either remove or replace it.
Date: June 01 2014 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
You should really add the "Giant Males" tag to this story. That way peope are forewarned and can avoid the story if they wish. I like the story so far but other people may complain.
Date: June 01 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
The line spacing is a bit excessive. Have you tried the "Paste From Word" button. That may solve the problem. Anyway good chapter. I didn't see anything problematic.