Reviews For My sister Zoey
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Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really great story to read I'm really in to vore so was perfect for me. I think you could of gone in to a bit more detail in places and make the story last s bit longer but other then that it was good :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, what do you think i should of done diferently? where should i have shown more detail? i was going more for the demise of an older brother by a little sister then i was a lot of other things but email me some ideas and il try to make more stories out of them for you id like a good fan email me at jcook5699@gmail.com

Reviewer: Sora Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked it! Little sister eats older brother is my favorite. Thanks for sharing! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing its one of my favorites to

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