[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 9:38 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith
Maybe this Faith women is Brian's daughter
Author's Response:
Maybe! Who knows??
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 8:21 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith
Weird conversation, alright. The silvery eyes bit makes me wonder if Faith might be the _ghost_ of Julia Mack!
Author's Response:
Now that would be quite a twist. No ghosts around here, at least not literal ones.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 8:16 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 1: Jennifer Sheller
An ominous cliff-hanger. Classic! :-)
Author's Response:
And as it turned out, slightly less ominous than it appeared.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 7:48 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith
So Julia has been mentioned, after all. This means that we're going to go up against someone who's already established as a scary person, when Techilogic is already most unhappy with Howard. It'll be interesting to see how you talk about her without spoiling Julia.
Confirmation of Faith's identity would be quite satisfying.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Further mention of Julia is going to be pretty understated in the final chapter, though Howard is going to keep on looking. And Faith's identity will receive confirmation in future chapters of Julia.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 6:23 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith
Isn't Julia from your other story and will this set up a sequel?
Author's Response:
This actually isn't so much setting up a sequel as just making a connection to my other story and its eventual ending.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 6:11 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 2: Faith
I don't want to spoil but is Faith who I think she is?
Author's Response:
Hehehe...
Date: July 06 2014 11:41 AM Title: Report 1: Preliminary Findings
Great story, Do you know when you'll post next chapter???
Author's Response:
Very soon.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2014 1:28 PM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 1: Jennifer Sheller
Two chapters left? I expect great things after all this build-up.
This is the opposite of the Tania interview, in that they're both hiding something, but Jenny is hiding something she feels bad about...unless there's a facade behind the facade.
The smartest thing to do would be to give copies of everything he's found to Shelby and Jenny, in case he finds himself unable to publish...
Author's Response: I'll do my best. I think it's safe to say Jenny is hiding her part in it out of shame rather than plotting.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2014 7:46 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 1: Jennifer Sheller
Blackmail characters making an appearance, Jennifer didn't mention what she dic to Jack now did she and how it led to her breakdown.
Author's Response: And who could blame her?
[Report This]Date: July 04 2014 7:33 AM Title: Report 7: “Stand Tall” Protest Rally, Interview 1: Jennifer Sheller
Awesome to hear from Jenny again, can't wait for the home stretch.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 9:17 PM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - Second Notice
Somebodies balls are this close to the bansaw...
Author's Response:
They're about to get even closer. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 7:17 PM Title: Report 1: Preliminary Findings
If only they knew how far TC had gotten in his investigation but shit's now flying towards the fan.
Author's Response:
Things would probably start flying toward the fan even faster, then.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 6:45 PM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - Second Notice
"I am no longer in a minority discussing this". That's an intriguing hint of something larger. Is it the supporters in the last memo? Other Techilogic executives? Shrink Act caretakers putting pressure on them? It's pretty clear that there's a large conspiracy working against him. This also makes it clear that his efforts at privacy are working, because no mention was made of Shelby, Daniel and Karine.
Author's Response:
My lips are sealed, though you're reading those hints fairly accurately.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2014 3:38 PM Title: Special Memo to Mr. Howard Taylor, Research Analyst in Human Relations Dpt. - Second Notice
Things are definitely not looking good for Our Hero. :-(
Author's Response:
You could say that again.
Date: June 29 2014 7:56 PM Title: Report 5: The Lindon Family, Interview 2: Claire Lindon and Corey Lindon
Jack! I cant believe how many reviews you have. You are very popular. I really like this story and your idea. I especially enjoyed the claire and corey story and look forward to seeing more of them.
I imagine with so many reviews, you arent desperate for more fans but you got one so I figured I would let you know that I am enjoying your work. I love comments on my stories so I figured that it was only right for me to send kudos to you after enjoying it.
I look foreard to more installments and I hope you will read my new story and comment on it? If you have the time.
hertinypal
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing! I'm glad you like the story. And if you want to see more of Claire and Corey, I suggest keeping an eye out for Ackbar's name, since he's going to be expanding their story at some point. I will check out your new story when I get a chance; I've enjoyed your past works.
Date: June 29 2014 3:19 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton
@Jacksmith: Yeah, he'd have to have his face altered to get in with Tania. Now let's see where he goes next. My guess is that in the next memo he's going to be fired, and then he'll be fighting this on his own, and then...
Author's Response:
Well, you weren't that far off!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 7:55 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton
I fully suspected something like that was going behind the scenes.
Now it's up to Howard to right these wrongs somehow.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 2:06 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton
Ordinarily, one would want a detailed description, but in this case, glossing over the events conveyed great unease with it. This chapter would not have worked at all if Karine just casually described a "seminar" in detail.
You've also left some good opportunities to follow up. Obviously, a second interview with Daniel and/or Karine is possible. There's also the possibility of Howard going in disguise as an employee, and recording some truly damning evidence. How easy would a wire be to spot on a three inch wearer?
Another question is, how much of this is going on with the people we've seen previously? We already know that they were not saying things they weren't supposed to reveal.
Author's Response:
Thanks; I figured subtlety made more sense than going in-depth with description here. That's not a bad idea about going undercover. It's not something that'll be happening in this one, but it definitely makes sense for him to try with a boss who doesn't recognize him already. And that's really up to interpretation what's going on behind the scenes, though I would guess not many people are being quite as sinister as Tania.
Date: June 28 2014 1:46 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton
Way to go, TC! Link up with the drummer and the flute player, and hold that flag high.
Author's Response:
Oh he definitely is.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2014 11:20 AM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton
Howard's heading into dangerous territory now.
Either he'll succeed and take down the system, or get caught and shrunk down himself. Whichever it is, I'm sure you'll deliver. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I'll do my best!