Date: June 16 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
A year late but I agree with Blueapple's last sentence about the SF girls being good all over.
Yes even Poison.
This was really an Ibuki story but the trio had their parts too. Poor Elena was pushed aside. I guess you just tend too much to violence and Elena is too pure for such things. That moment were the phone was ringing was all kinds of fun though.
I like how you managed to show Makoto's softer side for a bit.
Now I not only want more but an Udon comic about this story.
Needs more feet. Crossover with the Chun and Juri story.
Date: May 18 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was an excellent story.
I liked the details that you went through as each character had to deal with around them.
My fav was makoto.
Man,This story reminded me that street fighter's grils have the best feet in the VG world.