Date: November 06 2016 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
I have to admit I was a bit unclear here, on exactly how much Janna's mind was being manipulated. And whether any of it was new, or just the lingering results of her first encounter with Furio.
I don't like to see either of the giantesses being submissive but it was an interesting chapter and a nice set-up for the future direction of the story.
Furio continues to be the most endearing male character, and the tragi-comic final scene was great.
Author's Response:
Furio did cast the Bannbaladin when Janna chose to interrupt the meeting but obviously the effect was over at the end of the conversation.
Thanks for your reviews. I wish there were more readers like you.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Two chapters in one weekend....omg omg omg omg. :) very nice! This may be tip jar worthy sir.
[Report This]Date: November 04 2016 5:03 PM Title: Prologue
Man, so many good things to say about this story.
First, despite their "psycho" tendencies the girls actually seem human and feel like they have their own motivations and points of view. They don't feel like just puppets of the author like in a lot of violent stories.
Second, just the right amount of world-building and character development: enough to make the world feel alive, but not so much that it gets boring.
I love how you handle the interactions between Laura & Janna and the tiny people. You really nail the contrast between their amusement & whimsy and their toys' desperation. Whenever they start to pick up or otherwise interact with a character you like, it's sooo wonderfully tense (Poor Rayades!). The writing really helps the reader identify with both sides I think.
I have no idea how you do this so well but I am super happy that you're still writing.
Date: November 02 2016 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
An excellent conclusion to Laura's trip to Thorwal. I genuinely had no idea how it was all going to turn out.
In the end it was their own faults that cost the humans most, which was particularly tragic given that Bera at least was beginning to realise their mistakes before the end.
The depth of characterisation continues to be unsurpassed in giantess fiction, and I love the way the girls are portrayed. Laura is both sympathetic and monstrous, naive and cruel. In other words a believable human being, given the circumstances.
At first I was pleased to see the obnoxious Thorgun get his comeuppance, but if he's to become a major adversary then so be it. Hopefully that just means his fate will be all the worse in the end.
Date: October 04 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Laura is really moody.. but also smart and playful. She's definitely one of the best GTS I ever read of. XD
Anyway, this story is one of the best (if not the best) GTS story I ever read.
Thanks a lot for your hard work, for the tons of details, for the amazing GTS action and for the devotion that you put in continuing it. :)
Date: October 03 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry to not have commented or reviewd it anymore.
Crap, I never imagined that you already written 2 more awesome chapters from the last time i passed by. ^^;
Anyway, I'm glad you did it and I'm glad you're having fun in writing this, cause I swear you that I'm having even more fun in reading it. :)
Now, with both the titanic ladies out of sight, it was time that someone came out in search of Vengyr. Though.. it seems to me that they are taking a little too much time.. and that's not healthy at all. ^^;
Thanks a lot for your amazing work, it's simply awesome! *thumbsup*
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hahahaa was a fun chapter. Fun seeing the people work with Laura
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap. Possibly my favorite chapter. You take a monster, make the character completly inhuman or morale in any way, and are able to make the reader almost feel as if that character feels remorseful and human again. I wish I had even a fraction of the lliterary ability that you have. Brilliant my man brilliant.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
You're so productive lately, it's amazing, thank you :)
Author's Response:
I write barely anything because I am so busy. I just post shorter chapters after proof reading.
Date: September 19 2016 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
Probably one of the best written chapters so far, even though there was next to no giantess action.
I didn't know where the whole plot thread was going, but the final reveal of Troutman's plan was very well handled. And now suddenly I find myself feeling anxious for an evil, murderous giantess - who in the last chapter I was cursing for killing one of my favourite new characters.
Fantastic writing, as ever, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
I left another messagae at GiantessCity, so please do keep in contact there or via email.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 9:25 AM Title: Prologue
This looks like one of the all-time greatest stories on this site :)
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poision,...........very clever. I like it.
Author's Response:
It's more of a drug, really, but the Thorwalsh do not quite understand the difference. Their ways are too direct and physical to be adept in such.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is such a fun story. :) Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: September 16 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok caught up. I really do love this story and I love Janna and Laura. All the skipping about in this story can make it hard to read at times, but it is still amazing. Whatever happened with Steve and Christina? Is this story going to stay on this planet or go back to where they came from?
Great story! I cant wait until you can get to posting more!
Author's Response:
Wow, you are a quick and determined reader. Kudos.
Steve and Christina are stuck in Lauraville for now.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy crap to see how much Janna has changed since the start of this is amazing. Both girls just do what they want and I love it :)
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oooohhh this Ludwig guy has Janna under his spell! What is he gonna get her to do? A little hard to do the back and forth, but it's neat to get both sides
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
This chapter is fun because it shows that both of the girls are smart. Laura just wants to keep herself amused I guess. I wonder if the origin of these people will be explained in later chapters? Loved what Laura did at the end.
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is the best story ever written on here most probably, please do not stop expanding it. Your unique style and core idea are amazing. I'm sure there are thousands anticipating readers craving after every new chapter you add to this masterpiece
[Report This]Date: September 14 2016 5:32 PM Title: Prologue
I've been a lurker for so long finally decided it's time to review. I love the start of this. It sets up everything pretty good. The characters are good and they balance each other out. Would you mind if I go on a review spree?
Author's Response:
Knock yourself out. :)
[Report This]Date: September 14 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I mean, I don't know how many times I can say how much I like this story. Its fantastic that it is more than just, "A short, do the job kind of story". It a well written thought out scenereo that happens to involve the fetish. I have to admit there were a few months there where I really thought this died and went to great story heaven to be left like an unfinished diamond like so many others. I checked daily for months waiting for updates. And on literally my birthday this year you came back :) I will say I thought Rayades was surely going to survive and we were going to see a more human side to the monster. It makes me really curious whats going to happen with Steve and his surviving compatriot. Surely their disappearance has been noticed where they are from by now. I'd personally like to see some sort of communicae or additional characters possibly from the rescue mission (giant or otherwise) introduced. Possibly some repercussions for their behavior or the threat of some and how it would impact things. I mean, there really is no going back from what they have done. In any case I am sure you have this thought out already so not much more I can really say.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have a lot of ideas floating around my head about your suggestion, one crazier than the other. I don't dare go there yet, but I must eventually.
Steve and Christina went on a similar mission to Laura and Janna's and Valerie was their pilot. They were sent to a planet nearby where they picked up the distress call and went to help. Back on earth nobody would miss them yet, think how long it would take for them to get back. But as you mention it, I don't know, might be other class mates on similar missions picked up the signal too. I don't know yet.