Date: February 14 2017 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 28
If you're concerned about readership have you considered posting new chapters on DeviantArt? Or a general use writing forum?
Giantess World is quite obscure I would imagine, and I'm sure there are many people who have no idea your story exists. And yet would be amazed at its length and quality.
As usual this chapter does not disappoint and I can't wait to see what the ramifications are. It seemed like the ability to use magic has been removed? That's only going to make things easier for the girls, and harder for Furio.
I've just sent some more money to your tip jar and urge you not to lose faith in your creation. Although do make sure it doesn't adversely affect your studying.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
May not be worth a salt but, I've been following this story from the get goand it's great. Four chapters in one month, I feel like a fat kid in a candy store :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I think I flunked an exam today because I was writing rather than studying. Can't be helped.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my goodness. Your worldbuilding really is impressive. I enjoy Dari's character and I enjoyed Xardas as well (RIP Xardas).
Date: February 13 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Woohoo!! You're really doing things seriousluy! :)
First of all, I really loved this chapter.
Xardas was a cool character and I'm a little sad that he died. Though, as always, your way to "dispose" of the characters unfolding more questions and a deeper plot at the same time, is simply is great!
I thought that for this whole story you had a plan from the begin, instead, as far as I understood, you are building the plot in real time.. That's simply amazing! :D
As for my last comment, I agree with everything you said and I wouldn't change a single word in your story so far. (except for the very few typos like "son" instead of "soon" ;) )
Now the "fighters" are back to Lauraville, but it's quite clear that something bigger has happened and that we are still far from the conclusion of this epic novel.
Please don't stop going on with this story.. and read your PMs. XD
Author's Response:
Thanks again, really, but...where the fuck do I read PMs??? Are there PMs on this website? That would be news to me. Do I use a skin that doesn't support them perhaps? Please help me, I need to find those damn things.
Also, quick update, I'm skipping continents again so it migh be a while before I upload anything. New chapter is comming great though, having loads of fun writing this stuff.
Thanks again. Your reviews make writing worthwhile.
Date: February 12 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
It's hard to pity Nagash considering the start of this chapter. But I can't help thinking that if Daisy had lived she would've been a positive influence on the giantess.
As it is I agree with your reasons for not showing Nagash's death, which definitely enhanced the storytelling. In fact I'd say this was probably the best written chapter yet. I particuarly liked the phrase "chalk off a stone", if that's something you made up it.
The only issue is that I'm not sure there was really any justification for why Dari would bother to save Thorsten and Léon, given the additional risk involved.
I liked the new character Egon though, which I assume means he's got a painful death waiting for him. I can only hope the same is true of Steve, as I share Dari's view of the two Earthlings.
Author's Response:
I probably should have explained that. The idea was to use Thorgun's and Leon's status to make saving Christina and Steve, both unimportant to the Andergastians, believable. Slipping them by while their captors were still stunned by the realization over what they had. They were a means to minimize the risk, not a purpose in and of their own. It failed to sufficiently fool the priest but luckily Egon was there, making something up out of thin air, using the queer spacesuits the earthlings are wearing. Without the setup of Leon and Thorsten it might not have worked in fact. Also, Dari saved Leon and Thorsten before, and her original motives still stand to some extend.
I like Egon too, though he's really getting it on with the wrong girl. Thank you so much.
Date: February 11 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow! I can't believe it. Another update. :D
Okay, I'm happy.. very happy to see that Dari, Steve and Christina are still alive.. for now.. XD
I really didn't expected to see Lauraville conquered and Nagash dead without "seeing" it happen. Now it seems it's time for the two mighty giantesses to come back home, but I guess there are still some more things that have to happen before that.
I'm not sure that revealing the truth about Steve and Christina to such a weak man was a good idea.. I have the feeling that when the two ladies will come back, it will end with the Andergastian trying to use them as human-shields.
Finally, I am really curious so see which role Hafthor and Lèon will have in the forthcoming chapters.
PS: Thank you so much for this masterpiece. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews, they're always wonderful. :) It means a lot, it really does.
The whole conquest thing happened to spice things up and make it easier. Think about what might have happened if they hadn't come. Then Dari would have had to leave Lauraville and hike through the forest without any idea where to look. Not good reading. Perhaps if Nagash hadn't abused her and they would have killed Stonetree and Bruin together, but then Dari would still have to take Vengyrs body and leave Lauraville far enough so that Xardas could appear according to plan. Boring. You can't finalize a plotline by having everything play out exactly as you were hinting it would in the story. To do that would be to be predictable and being predictable is dull, a thing creators of comics might do well to remember as well ;)
As for Nagash's death, well, it would have been quite mundane. Village is attacked, men scream, she curses and crushes people, they feather her with arrows but it's not enough and they finally slay her from up close. Exactly what you would expect. By keeping her death a secret, I tried to build more on what Dari felt like as she slowly discovers how the village has changed over night. It doesn't come out as much as I wanted it too because I do not have enough time to write those 30k words chapters anymore, but that was the way I intended it.
I'm currently a little conflicted over how much to explain and how much to leave open to interpretation. The reviews tell me that people can follow the plots fine and get subtle hints and all that, but sometimes while I'm writing I'm thinking there should be shed a little more light on the background here or there. On the other hand, a story that doesn't make people think and explains every detail easily becomes literature for children. Not good.
What will happen to Lauraville, Léon and Thorsten before Janna and Laura return I have no idea what so ever. We will see. I noticed I made a mistake though, I wrote Thorgun instead of Thorsten while I was still feverish from the last chapter. You should point those things out to me, any errors, please!
Thanks again for your great reviewing routine!
Date: February 10 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 26
Another fantastic chapter, giantess content or not. Lots of good fantasy action and some great tension, especially given the fact we know how easily even prominent characters can be killed off.
Very satisfying to see the end of Thorgun, and just as you think there's going to be a happy ending you slip in another cliffhanger last sentence.
I'm not going to make any more predictions about the plot as I realise I'm just saying what I hope will happen, rather than what is actually likely.
But as a fan of nothing but violent (and preferably lesbian - so your stuff is right up my alley) giantess content I find myself increasingly wanting the three main giantesses to redeem themselves as good, or at least not quite so flawed, people.
And that’s even as I thoroughly enjoy their rampages. Although I think that dichotomy is all perfectly in keeping with the nature of the fetish.
So all I can really say is just carry on the good work!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
combining magic, fantasy, gods/demons, and giantesses is amazing. You are doing a great job at setting up the story and worldbuilding while keeping the giantess stuff very much relevant. This isn't my typical giantess story, but I love what you have done. Love all the recent updates as well!
Cant wait for more!
Date: February 09 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
This was a great action-packed chapter! (^o^)/
Even if there was little giantess-action, it was really a pleasure to read it.
Furio is really a smart (and lucky) ass.. and now showed clearly how much helpful he could be for the 2 giant ladies.
Also, it seems that the massive girls finally saw how much powerful gods demons and mages can be.. Crap, I'm really eager to see what is going to happen now. :D
I can only imagine how much hard and time consuming must be to write a story like this, so thank you so much for not giving up in telling us this amazing Fantasy-GTS Novel.
[Report This]Date: February 06 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Christmas in Feb. Love all the new chapters. These newest chapters have been awesome. Cant wait for more!
Date: February 06 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh goodness, what a great surprise! 2 updates in 2 days!! (^o^)/
These 2 new chapters are awesome!
First we saw what's going on with Laura and now this terrific chapter with Janna.
Thanks a lot man!
Back in Laura's Chapter, I was really glad to see one of the "deities" of this world coming to fight against her.. even if it wasn't an actual god, it makes me think that gods are still around and that there are strong powers that the girls should not underestimate.
Though, the fact that she killed (quite easily) the demi-god, makes even more clear the magnitude of her power.
Yes, these collossal, beautiful, murderous ladies relies a lot in their physical crushing superiority.. but a little more brain would be better if they want to live longer.
For example, if instead of a narcotic, there was a strong poison in her drinks, Laura would be dead by now.. this should make her think that having trustworth allies could be a good thing.
As for Janna, she's really a living rollercoaster.. she goes from killing-machine to sadic-bitch and back to sensitive woman in no time.. ;)
Rondria.. :(. ...I have to say that, by knowing your style, I knew that a death among the "nice" people was behind the corner. XP
Crap, the moment in which Rondria dies is so unexpected and quick, that it hits the reader like a punch in the stomach. Great job in full "game of thrones" style.
Finally, even I'm very curious to know what's going on in Laurasville, but I can't wait to see what will happen when Janna and Laura will meet again.
Thanks for your huge awesome work.
PS: I know it's off topic.. but.. have you seen this: http://fav.me/daujqi4 ? :3
Author's Response:
Thanks, you've given me lots to consider! I'll look into your challenge as well, though I can't promise anything. Time is so limited and writing eats time like nothing else. It's like being on drugs. You start and all of a sudden it's the next day, you have work to do and haven't even slept. It's killing me. I've actually gotten really sick over writing these chapters. It takes more of a physical toll than I think most people would expect.
You're right about that scene with Laura. I don't think Swafnir expected anything like that happening either.
You're right about Janna too. She reminds me of Joan from Mad Men in a vague way. There's very few people she holds dear and those she protects. The others she is very indifferent to, distant, even cruel.
If you ever want to do any artwork based on this please feel free to do so. I'm a great fan of your work.
Date: February 06 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no! Poor Rondria. And poor Furio too. This will clearly change him forever, but the question is whether it will have any lasting effect on Janna. What she does with the giantesses will be the first indication of that I guess. Or perhaps just that cutting last line.
And two new chapters in one weekend as well! The one with Laura was just as harrowing and I'm desperate to see Thorgun get his comeuppance. He's clearly affecting Janna's mind for much of the chapter, but I had hoped Furio would be able to help when he arrived with Janna. But perhaps not now...
The writing in this story continues to transcend the requirements of mere fetish fiction. Given the themes involved I'm imagining that at some point one of the girls is going to learn magic, but the best thing about all this is how unpredictable it all is.
Even if that means favourite characters dying unexpectedly…
Author's Response:
I do so love your reviews, but you're nearly always wrong in your predictions. Furio is catatonic right now, but I tink he'll be fine. Remember, there's a whole lot of shit going to go down.
[Report This]Date: February 05 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
Whoa! It's weird seeing a monster like Jenna showing even some semblance of human empathy for someone else. I don't know why but despite how cynical I am about this story I really DO enjoy it, so don't think I don't. I have a love/hate relationship with violent gts. I think it's sexy and erotic but at the same time I usually hate the characters so much that it can even end up ruining my enjoyment of a story. I know, I know, what a contradiction no? Anyway this is still a favorite for me, violent gts and all!
Date: February 05 2017 12:29 PM Title: Prologue
Jesus dude almost 300,3000 words? You could write a novel.
Date: February 05 2017 12:10 PM Title: Prologue
Hey there buddy! I've been reading this amazing story for a while now and I have to say I love it! The way you turned Janna into a more gentle giantess at the beginning of the chapter to a rather cruel and voracious one was brilliant and dare I say, sexy. Thorwal attacking Laura was a nice twist to it. You really know how to keep the reading on the edge of their seat and your writing is top-notch and very descriptive. Keep it up! ;)
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 24
It brings a smile to my face whenever one of these evil bitches suffers even a little bit, so I definitely enjoyed this one! Great that there are still forces in the world that can put up a bit of a fight against them.
Author's Response:
Do not gaze too far into the abyss, my friend.
Date: February 02 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lately I'm coming here quite often waiting for an update to this epic story.. and I'm glad to be the first to comment on it. :)
Furio and Rondria seems to have accepted Janna's temper quite easily and I can see her having a lot of fun is helping them in their "mission".
It's a win win for them.. at least until Laura and Janna will be back together. ^^;
PS: I really love this story, Thank you so much for your amazing work. :)
Date: February 02 2017 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
So great to see you back, and even though this chapter is short it still manages to hit a number of interesting notes.
The development of all three characters is fascinating, with Janna now wiping out large villages without a care and joking about killing children, and Rondria apparently becoming inured to the constant slaughter.
Furio is clearly very unhappy though and I'm very interested to see how he'll develop, and whether he'll try again to impose his morals on the group.
Great stuff and I eagerly look forward to more. Including, hopefully, Janna catching up to those giantesses.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Masterpiece is back! :D
[Report This]Date: November 06 2016 6:25 PM Title: Prologue
Hi just wanted to say that i really love your story and encourage you to keep writing it!
I really enjoy how the girls try out different roles and explore their options within the fantasy world. While it is sometimes hard to understand how their morals work, both girls are memorable and different which is really nice.
Although i (and everyone else, i suppose ^^) like it most when you write about the two girls you managed to create an interesting storyline with the other characters, too.
I also wonder what happens at Lauraville atm - if you don't intend to jump back in time from a narrators perspective to cover what happens there i would imagine that the situation there will have significantly changed the next time it gets covered (e.g. when Laura/Janna return there). It seems like a bit of a hole storywise - which is understandable as everyone wants giantess action (i hope i expressed myself correcty and you can actually understand what i mean).
Anyway, thanks a lot for the story again :) i keep checking for updates way more often than i should ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Lauraville is in suspense. Life is dragging on since our giantesses left and the food shortage was resolved. There might be mundane stuff going on, cheating, people running away, maybe some crime, but nothing out of the ordinary. Even Nagash still keeps herself restrained. But something big is about to happen that is going to be very important. We'll have to wait a while longer to see how that turns out though.