Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

Weird how Laura is now officially the "good guy", in such a sence that she even threatens the little people with "Jenna" as punishment for disobeying her! In all honesty I'm a still sour that Jenna ended up the way she did, I thought she and Laura really balanced eachother out nicely.

And alhough Laura is less prone to killing for no reason, she's far from "good" and really only cares about the village as a means of producing food for herself. I will say that I can kinda see WHY Jenna turned cynical like she did, almost EVERY character we've been introduced to so far is either looking out mostly for themselves (and not giving a shit about who they kill) or just a flat-out terrible person!

This story is still on my read list, despite having no gentle gts, it's interesting.

Author's Response:

Daisy was a "good" character right until the end, wasn't she. I don't know why, but the good one's keep dying in my stories. But hey, Vengyr and Xardas are still alive and Dexter turned out pretty "good" aswell. I just can't write from the perspective of a good person, because I do not know how such a person thinks. I might need some help with that...but aren't the evil ones that much more fun?

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

This isn't as thorough a review as I would've wanted but I'm strapped for time...

I cannot wait to see what Janna has in store for the raiders and Nagash especially after Dari escaping her. A pissed off giantess who's possibly horny is headed straight for them and I cant wait. The scene of how Dari escaped the giant man and killed him was awesome but I really enjoyed how Janna was just toying with her until she stabbed her a second time, luckily she was teleported away just in time to only aggravate Janna even more. But most of all I just loved the idea of Laura having her own town where she reigns supreme. And Bistal(believe that was her name) had to give her an orgasm for surviving being swallowed lol. That was cool. But what's astounding is that she achieved this outcome not once but three times for the horny giantess with freshly shaved pubes(yet another great scene). I was almost hoping Laura would make her Forman and squash foreman(live his name btw) and his family.
Now I think Janna is a true goddess(for all intents and purposes she is) and she believes this as well which makes it that much more sexy. The beginning was boring but completely necessary. I really like this new Dari character.(which means she's more than likely dead come next chapter lol)

What an amazing story. And I for one love long detailed chapters.
Also hope Janna takes Daisy as well as Nagash as her personal pets/slaves but kills and or maims the other raiders.
Would personally love to see a scene where Laura's tiny town(Lauraville I love that btw) has her citizens paint her toenails as well as Janna's.

At any rate truly spectacular chapter and story. I cannot wait for more.


aaron
PS I wonder if more will come through the portal? But the idea of having to return them or the world blows up is kinda cool.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Holy shit. Simply amazing. I loved this long action packed chapter. I'll give you a more thorough review when I have spare time but this story has taken for the better in my opinion.

aaron
PS wish I could give you more stars. And for what its worth I absolutely love long chapters and I commend you for that(long chapters don't seem to be appreciated here for whatever reason).

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2014 4:35 AM Title: Prologue

Wow, man! Seriously! A 30k-words chapter! O_O

Haven't read it yet, so I really recommend you to break it up into 5k pieces and post them individually, 30k is like a third of a fullblown novel.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Cant say im not disapointed with the way Janna turned out...She seems kinda worse than Laura now. I think both Janna and Laura are just making excuses to justify their behavior, they havent even tried anything else besides demanding food and/or eating people!

The best part of the chapter was Vengyr: both evil broads deserved that asswhoping! Now that both giantess have gone sour, I eagerly await badasses like Vengyr that can actually fight back against them!

Author's Response:

I have rewritten that scene a thousand times over until I liked it. Originally I had Lares kill him, sneaking up to him from behind while the giantesses faught each other. I guess that would have worked aswell but I wanted to tie up all lose ends connected to Ludwig and move on.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

so via treachery we've got two giant monsters instead of one, hopefully Ludi knows what he's gotten himself into.

Author's Response:

I dare say he doesn't :)

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 12:39 PM Title: Prologue

Janna's really taking a turn for the sadistic there.

Author's Response:

True. I was going against changing her character but then it turned out this way. Her intentions are still pure though, still wanting to help the little people by putting 'good' Sir Ludwig in as king. I think at some point she is going to find out that she is making a mistake.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 4:24 PM Title: Prologue

Oh... that scene with Laura and her twenty beauties... Awesome!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2014 12:53 PM Title: Prologue

Well I guess when your hungry you'll do whatever it takes to clear your concience and eat to survive. Im referring to Jenna eating the man who stole the pig.

Anyway I liked the Laura bits too, especially the insertion.

Reviewer: lfcfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2014 2:08 PM Title: Prologue

Nice, now it's much easier reading this.

It's interesting to see how this relationship between the two pans out and which paths the girls take.