[Report This]Date: June 09 2017 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great Story! Hated the ending though. While I fully expected Keyla to die, it seems the world set up would put Stephanie in a position of woeful violation of testing parameters by removing the suit.
I demand justice for Stephanie's murder of Keyla! (Though I do wish that she had been able to recover and grow back to a normal size and receive the poetic justice of being given the rights or Mickey once he was shrunk down, but that's all in the past at this point.)
[Report This]Date: January 24 2017 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 9: Only to strike out
Wow, poor Keyla, what a way to go. I gotta say, I was really pulling for her to survive somehow. That said, you did an outstanding job with this story. The amount of detail you went into, and the character of Keyla were top notch. Thank you for writing such a great story, I look forward to seeing more Micro Inc. in the future.
Author's Response:
I honestly tried think of ways to save her but with the heat seal tek idea I kind of wrote myself into a corner. Trying to keep it realistic she wouldn't have lived.
Thank you for all the feed back! I'm glad you liked the story. I read all the reviews and it makes me happy people have such high praise. The story did a lot better than I thought it would. Thank you again for reading
On a side note: Not sure who the next one is going to follow or maybe I'll do a compilation of character's.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nice to see you adding again, it's been awhile. I was just thinking about this story the other day, and was hoping you hadn't given up on it. Glad to see you didn't. The heat seal was q pretty cool idea, nice to see there's a last chance kind of thing, for emergency situations. I hope this isn't the last we see of Keyla, though she doesn't seem like the type to quit so easily.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Consort In Peril
Another great chapter, I really enjoyed it. The current storyline is very interesting, with Keyla being used for filming unaware scenes, definitely a cool idea. You left it on a cliff hanger, so I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6: Consort In Peril
Very curious to see what happens next, great stuff.
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 6: Consort In Peril
Nice chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 5: In with the new.
Great stuff, looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5: In with the new.
Welcome back, I was really missing this story. You've been doing an excellent job so far, no doubt about it. I really like where you're going with the story, you've definitely got me hooked. Personally, I wouldn't really want to see Keyla die, she's a great character.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Out with the old.
I'm glad to see that you didn't abandon the story. The time between chapters hasn't hurt your writing any, it turned out great, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you're going to continue the story with Keyla and new people, I'd love to see more. I'll also be looking forward to seeing Jasper again some time. Keep up the great work.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see this continued! Great concept, Jasper is my kind of Giantess.
Would have loved if Jasper had decided to abuse Keyla out of her suit, obviously she couldnt go as hard but I think it would have been a great power trip for Jasper.
Great stuff!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Exposition anyone?
Wow, missed this story too, glad to have found it! I love durable concepts, makes for a lot of fun and the fact that they can be killed is a nice touch and keeps you guessing as to what might happen.
Awesome stuff, keep up the great work!
Date: September 24 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Definitely love what you're doing. I wouldn't worry about stage fright, the story is doing great.
Date: September 24 2014 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: Exposition anyone?
There is nothing sexier than someone who knows exactly what they want.
[Report This]Date: September 24 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: Exposition anyone?
Great stuff!
[Report This]Date: August 18 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 2... Finally.
Just finished chapter 2...
Oh lawd this story dun' given me the vapors. *fans self*
<3
Date: August 17 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
How small is Keyla compared to Jasper? Does Jasper even feel Keyla below herself?
With the suits mentioned invisible mode there could happen some unaware situations...if the others suits features malfunction (evasion and stuff)
Nice idea, keep writing :)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is a great story. Not sure how I missed it being posted, but I saw when the second chapter was added. I love the whole concept of the serum and the suit, very cool idea. I am curious about Jasper's appearance and size, you told us what Keyla looked like, but not Jasper. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!
Date: May 01 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good concept. I wonder if Keyla enjoys pain. Try to space out the paragraphs.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
This has just been added to my favourites, Violent and Butt, two of my favourite tags. I hope you continue writing this story, I'd be a total hypocrite to criticise authors that don't finish stories as I've three that are just lying around...
But yes, more. Please. Now!
Thornton