Reviewer: steveg17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2018 3:41 AM Title: The Game

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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 2:49 PM Title: Shower Part 2

Hmm. I was not that into shower scenes either, but this was a very good scene. I enjoyed it.

In chapter 1, you mentioned that the mom and one other family member will kill on sight. So is that a hint of an upcoming unaware scene? Sounds like it.

Other than that, I would love to meet the other family members.

Author's Response:

You'll meet the others in the next chapter or two. Also who said the mom would REALLY kill on sight? Couldn't they just be saying that to scare poor Andrew? Guess you'll have to keep reading to find out. However I don't know how long till the next chapter will be posted. Hopefully soon.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 9:01 PM Title: The Game

I hope he finds a dead end. Then he returns and the mom catches him. Or maybe she doesnt catch him, but there could be an unaware chapter.

Also, I recomend spacing out those large paragraphs. Its easier to follow that way.

Lastly, in chapter 2, there is a spelling error in the beginning of the large paragraph. You wrote guess, but I think it should be guest.

Anyway, this is a very interesting story and I cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2014 9:23 PM Title: Finding light

Interesting idea though if I may be so bold maybe each member of the family could have a different kinky way of doing things to tiny men let you explore many different ideas. Also, would it be askin too much if one chapter, just one chapter could be a sexy giantess shower scene with a tiny man either watching or being used? Those scenes really push my buttons.

Author's Response:

I've never been a fan of the shower type chapters, but I will see what I can do. Just as a warning that chapter ma be late in the book.