Date: February 15 2015 5:16 AM Title: Separation
yup so cute, but this story needs some drama. bring elena back!!!! lol
Author's Response:
Drama will honestly be a little scattered, as this is mostly for light fun stuff. Though I do have some more drama-y stuff in mind! Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2015 9:48 PM Title: Careless
Dawww. So cute.
Author's Response:
Figured I could provide just a little of that on VDay. Thanks you for the comment.
Date: February 14 2015 9:35 PM Title: Careless
Cute chapter! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Happy to do so, thanks for commenting :)
[Report This]Date: December 09 2014 9:25 AM Title: Wake Up
Oh, "Care Bear"!!! I get it now.
Date: December 09 2014 9:05 AM Title: Separation
Due my basic english, I need to clarify this: Did howard come in claire bedroom via beta sized walkway above her bed and he then jumped?
Date: December 09 2014 6:07 AM Title: Wake Up
What the heck are you doing Ackbar? You can’t have children in these stories. This is a site of sex and debauchery. You aren’t a pedophile, are you?
Joking aside lol….
Ultra sweet chapter that might have given me cavities.
Date: May 28 2014 3:08 PM Title: Play
Okay, now I'm all caught up on your canon. It seems like people were all choked up over that first chapter, though if you know me, you can probably guess I was smiling ear-to-ear the whole time just at the prospect of you having to soldier your way through writing something so intentionally heartstring-tugging. It was a nice origin story for one of the main character families, so to speak, of your series. It also raised more questions for me, so now I've got ammo for our next forum.
Good work on the second chapter as well. The contrast between the two sections was welcome, and I appreciated the tenderness of the general scenario of a Beta child and Omega adult playing together, which you hadn't yet showed in real time.
Also, couldn't help but chuckle at this line from the first chapter after the to-do I made about it: "I hope you stay safe, Howard. I hope you find some measure of stability, moving forward."
And that's how you know it's an Ackbar story.
Kidding aside, great stuff here, and an excellent way to keep fleshing out your world.
Author's Response:
If I didn't know better, I'd say you were determined to catch me in something else :P
Probably one of my general reasons for starting this story is honestly being able to fit these interactions in. I've mentioned to you that Corey being bedbound in Consequences is a hugely frustrating thing for me, and this lets me bypass that a little bit while still using familiar characters. It'sa fun, useful thing.
Gotta leave my signature somehow :P
Glad you've continued to enjoy my stuff. Hopefully I can keep putting it out with school going on >.>
[Report This]Date: May 17 2014 10:12 PM Title: Play
Chapter 2's uplifting nature definitely helped soften the crushing blow of the first one. Looking forward to more.
Date: May 12 2014 8:26 PM Title: Play
Good chapter. I love how you depict the interaction of such dramatically different sizes. It's done plausibly and really enhances the gentle and controlled qualities of the Omega characters.
Date: May 11 2014 5:49 AM Title: Separation
you really are an amazing writer
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 3:37 PM Title: Play
Love your Omega storys.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 11:21 AM Title: Play
Well, this probably wasn't the best of your stories to start with, given my lack of knowledge on the Omega Universe. I'll read Tough Love next, which should give me a better idea of the size roles.
I immediately hated Elena. You don't abandon your child because he inconveneinces you. She showed regret, but that appeared to be more about losing Howard.
Having read the second chapter, it's good to see that Howard and Corey have a much better life. If Elena had kept them, then it probably would've been more out of obligation than love, and she would've grown to resent them.
Looking forward to more!
Date: May 10 2014 9:10 AM Title: Play
Uh oh! I'm sensing marriage proposal. You're probably much nicer than me so I'm sure there's nothing to worry about, especially since we already know the future outcome...but you never know what could happen. Good luck Howard.
Date: May 10 2014 8:27 AM Title: Separation
Aww...Timeskip!!
Oh well I can't blame you, it does help move things along. I can't wait for Claire to come in, I wonder how she and Corey got along this early in the game.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 5:39 AM Title: Play
I really like this chapter, but now I'm curious what the in-between chapter was. When I started reading this one, I thought a chapter went missing, specifically the one where Howard meets Abby. Oh well, can't wait for Claire to pop up soon.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 5:11 AM Title: Separation
A very good chapter. Its best to write what you enjoy. I would however like to see a continuation of the first chapter. Howard and his son, 2 refugees washed onto the doorstop of the Center. What kind of help does he get? How does he meet Abby and how do they fall in love with eachother? Nothing that needs to take a novel to explain, but a series of stories showing their progress. I would guess what was in those pages that you discarded. Till, I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 4:13 AM Title: Play
Oh man, it's like you ended this chapter right there just to tease me. I was so close to getting answers too.
Oh well, it's nice to see Corey happy and spending quality time with his future mom. (Thankfully the only mom he's ever known, or will remember. )
Date: May 10 2014 3:48 AM Title: Play
As a fan of micro this pleases me and as a fan of gentle this pleases me even more. The bitter taste of last the last chapter has been wiped out with this one. I don't really care if Omegas have powers if it leads to interactions like this one. As for the chapter itself it looks like we skipped quite ahead into the future if Howard is ready to pop the question. Nice to see a happier Abigail as well. Judging from the way you describe her smile I'm going to assume Claire has the same smile. Also a nice brief mention of Ashely and Melody's father. So a beta husband and alpha husband. Does Jenna have an Omega father? I'm not sure how common it is for Omegas to prefer having a smaller partner.
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Gonna have to agree with SpookyTaco about the writing style. It's very pleasing to the eye and encourages rereading.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2014 3:18 AM Title: Play
Nice to see them getting along after the last chapter.