Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Agree with the response to my last question... I'm the US, as well as many other large and powerful countries/institutions, there's a lot going on behind closed doors... Probably should take what only 1 person in the project is saying as a gain of salt, and like you said, they were just getting into how they're friends ex acts, so ya, maybe not so reliable.

Also would be curious as to if these are pre written or not... Either way, they're all very well done.. Twitch each chapter, the readers always get something answered, but it only then dices deeper into a whole hosts of other questions... Great suspense.

Also, like I said, I've always liked the mixed size world stories, and followed the Adam and Ashley/giantess high series (wasn't a member though, so didn't get to review :( )... I have to say, after reading this, as well as Who's Really The Biggr Person Here (Alex reminds me a lot of Amy in that story) it puts Adamand Ashley to shame, for sure.

Author's Response:

I enjoyed ultradudes stories as well and I'm also a fan of "Who's the bigger person here." To answer the question is this story prewritten...it isn't. I actually woke up this morning with idea in my head and typed it out. Just pure imagination and motivation. Also, I do appreciate your praise for this story as it is my first and I wasn't actually sure if I could write one of these. Let alone add the fetish part into it. I'd say that I've actually surprised myself the most.  But I do thank you though. Your compliments and criticism means alot. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok... Makes sense... And can understand y they have so many luxuries in the town if multiple countries are pumping money into it.

Author's Response:

Also, I want to apologize for the typos in my last response.  I am currently replying to reviews from my phone at the moment. There is something that I wanted to point out to all readers. When dealing with government nothing is necessarily factual. If that was the case, then we wouldn't be second guessing our own government in reality. Now taking upon the explanation that Ava's character gave, you have to understand that she is only saying what she knows, experienced and what she is told. Which in fact, may seem to open the door to more questions that she may not have the answers for. Also, remember this is only the fourth chapter and I've just basically given this story a backbone as to why a character mentioned in the first couple of chapters acts the way they act. 

I do appreciate the questions and criticism, but I don't want you to forget what the main focus of the story is at this point. Also, that even dealing with the U.S. In fiction is just like dealing with the U.S. In reality. We never really know what the country is thinking and why the government does what it does. They just do it and throw an explanation at us and we take it for what it is. You can never make a government so simple in fiction, because they aren't in reailty.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

The interactions between the characters in this chapter seem really believable. You seem to have put some thought into it. Your dialouge is better than most and must be commended. I can sense a lot of different emotions between the characters. I definately felt a connection.

You say, or rather Ava says, a mega can only be killed by another mega or by being shrunk but I know this can't be true. I'm certain radiation would kill them because it would damage their cells permenantly. If they don't die from radiation poisoning (which has been used to murder people in the past) then they'd get cancer. A cure for cancer is close, and the effects are gradual, so death by radiation poisoning is much more plausable. If he's smart (and I'm already assuming he will be the one to kill Ryan) then he might be able to rustle something up using everyday objects. Like that Boy Scout who was building a nuclear reactor in his parent's backyard. He salvages radioactive materials from old Radium clocks (the radioactive Radium is glow in the dark) and old Smoke Detectors which contain Americium.

Radioactive materials would be hard to get, so if he wants a way to kill Ryan using household objects he could find a way to extract the cyanide from apple seeds. Alex could put a load of cyanide in his drink. Also, nothing should be able to survive a nuclear bomb. So there's certainly more ways then the two listed.

Secondly, although I really like the story, I think the justifications for giant people seems a little off. Surely it's much cheaper and more sensible to design robots. A robot will be able to travel through radiation in the case of a nuclear explosion. A sentient being would not as they'd die from radiation poisoning.

There may be more mistakes but I've picked out a few I saw:

Here:

He made sure he held onto a few strands of her hair as she walked just like she instructed. 

I think you mean: indicated

It's not an instruction.

Here:

She smiled as she her shoe covered foot landed on the pavement, 

You mean:

She smiled as her shoe covered foot landed on the pavement, 

I think the rest of that sentence could be made better but I'm not sure.

Here:

Pretty much so, everyone around here pretty much gets along,

You want the comma before "so".

Here:

Ava smirked at him for a moment and then lifted her head off her hand. 

You mean:

Hand off of her head

Here:

So even giantess likes Hello Kitty.”

You mean:

So even giantesses like Hello Kitty.”

Here:

and by the time anybody had notice, 

You mean: noticed

Author's Response:

Thanks for picking up the mistakes that I overlooked.  I'm not nearly as good as I would like to be , but I try to better myself as I write . As far as the killing part is concerned...There are still secrets, just Ava gave up what she knows...Doesn't mean that's all of it....Also, not everything is all that black and white...We should know that. 

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Another really good chaper, really easy to picture everything that's going on :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm really trying hard to get you guys to see the overall picture of each chapter while the story moves along. 

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

Alex is a bitch, Ryan is a sociopath, Ava is friends with a bitch, and Jaden Smith is a terrible actor. And how did the government do all this with 14 trillion in debt!? This story sucks!!!!

This story better get... better!! As it is, it only gets four and 9/10 stars!!! Clean up your act!!

Author's Response:

Oh I promise it'll get better, I wouldn't want to disappoint anybody.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just thought of something.. Up until this point, we've only seen giantesses.. Maybe Ryan's the only giant in the town/project. If that's true, and Alex's just broken up with him, that'd explain her taking out her anger/longing for a guy her size on Jaden... It'd also explain y ryan is trying 2 get her back & always calling her... Knowing she'll come crawling back to him if he's the only regular sized man. Something tells me Jaden still won't have to worry about Ryan himself, but the anger he's causing Alex.

My other theory, Ryan hasn't seen Alex since she was a giantess, but they've kept in Contsct, & she doesn't want him to see her in her new form.

My final question, will we ever find out why the goveremt is turning people into giantesses?

Author's Response:

In due time my friend all in due time.

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thought about it more... Something tells me Ryan's normal sized, but Jeden won't have to worry... It'll be Alex doing all the worrying... Maybe Ryan won't be such a bad guy... That is, to everyone but Alex and Ava... Idk, just random Thoughts I've been having

Author's Response:

Lol really? is that your final answer?

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

It certainly is and now we know why. Is Ryan a giant or is he normal sized? I just hope he stays away from Jaden, Ryan might see him as competition and do worse things to him.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm sure they can make something work eventually, right? Seems strange that they'd still be using the games consoles of today at a time in the future when they can make giantesses. I'm starting to think Alex is the one with the fetish.

Author's Response:

Well yea, but its only like six years ahead and the 360 and PS3 were out for about that long, before they decided to make something to new, so its kind of the same concept. Also, about Alex....Wait and see, you may be right or you may be wrong. Only time will tell.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, Alex really has it out for him. I can only hope things get better for Jaden or he won't live long. Nice first story by the way!