[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wholly shit, that was one stretch of hell, you sent shivers down my back! The imagry was amazing in this one, thanks for the butt part by the way, I can't wait for the next chapter, each one was supberb, but this one takes the cake!
I feel so bad for Jaden, nearly cried for him, I wonder how Alex and Ava are going to fix him after this.
Author's Response:
Your absolutely welcome. I was planning on putting it in there at some point but wanted it to be special. I'm trying to answer all fetish needs as well as mine lol.
Date: April 30 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love how your story & Whos the Bigger Peeson have such similar plot lines, yet the writing styles make each one feel so different. You two ever considered doing a project together when you're respective stories are finished ?
Author's Response:
To be honest we haven't talked lol. I wouldn't mind collaborating though.
Date: April 30 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
A giantess story with depth, you don't see that everyday. Looks like Alex realized she's becoming the very thing she hates so much. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome premise for the story buddy. Really enjoying how you are building everything up so far. I didn't expect Jaden to have such a messed up past, makes me feel for the guy, especially considering what Alex is putting him through.
It's gonna be interesting seeing how Alex handles what she just did. Also I'm looking forward to seeing Ava's reaction :)
Keep up the good work, definetly watching for this one!
Date: April 30 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
I wondering if Ava was going to come back. She took rather a long time and at first I thought you'd forgotten about her enitrely. I suppose you wanted to add in all of that gruesome stuff.
Author's Response:
It's the way I have it set up. I had another plan on Ava actually making it back but decided to go this route instead.
Date: April 29 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
PS: Agree with whoever said that there should be more normal sizes characters... Maybe they'll come in later when the spring break is over and people are back from vacations?
Author's Response:
Again in due time my friend in due time.
Date: April 29 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Pretty dark, but an awesome addition nontheless... After seeing what Haden went through, I'm not sure I want to see what'll happen to Ryan if he winds up shrunk
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. Just wow.
I forgot that Jaden had a shitty life too. This was a surprisingly powerful chapter, despite how played this has been. Props. I like character development. This story is getting fun.
Just... um... please don't put a love triangle between Ava, Alex and Jaden. Those are so tired.
P.S.: Can you add another normal-sized character soon?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, although I can't promise anything on the triangle part. Actually I wouldn't even call it a triangle. It may be a square by the time I'm done or maybe a single couple....who knows I sure dont. This has been a free fall from the beginning....or has it been?
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad she's starting to see how much of a terrible person she's been...In many ways she's no better than her boyfriend. I guess the fact that she feels bad at the end makes her a little better.
It's still up in the air whether she would have killed him in her rage fuelled trance or not if he hadnt relapsed. Towards the end it looked like she was gonna go through with it, or at least break some bones. As some people have said he was nearly chomped in half!
That spasm of his possibly saved his life. Great stuff, I really like this story!
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Defiantly one hell of a chapter well one of many so far, I think this is the first story iv felt the need to review almost every chapter lol one amazing story I love how she's only just stared to show some humility after almost biting him in half :p
Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Lol I thought you were the cruel type.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Two stories, two giantesses coming around. Now Alex must be the one to bridge a rapidly growing divide between the two.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am in love not only with the plot but the style of writing you use. You use all of the right words and make note of the perfects things within each characters minds, and the scenes themselves. I am looking forward for more! And if you could, I would love if you would respond to my challenge titled "A Slight Miscalculation". If you have the time or interest! I am in love with your style and I feel it would be really cool to see what you would do with that prompt. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review it really meant a lot to me sense I'm trying to better my writing and test it in different areas. Also, since this is my first gts story I don't know if I'm able to actually draw up the full picture of what your challenge is asking for. After this story is over or close to being over I might give it a 1 or 2 chapter shot and see how it comes out.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter was slow, but entertaining, good job once again!
In the next chapter can you add some butt action? At least if that's the way the stories going.
Author's Response:
Just wait and see what happens next chapter :)
Date: April 28 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Glad to have se of my questions answered. Can't wait to find out what happens to Jaden
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. May the next chapter have mercy on his soul.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
He needs to live for five minutes but those will be five hellish minutes. Pity him, he hasn't done anything to deserve it.
Author's Response:
We all feel his pain :(
Date: April 28 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't like cliffhangers. They're annoying. A nice chapter though.
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making sure she doesn’t hurt him.
You mean: didn't
You're writing the story in the past tence.
Here:
Who knows, if you’re up for it I can chew on you all the way Alex place.
You mean: Alex's place.
Author's Response:
Oops, we'll I'm trying lol.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
So are the megas/super giants/whatever the only men who are Alex's/Ava's size?... Still don't quite get that
Author's Response:
I'll explain it in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Not too often do I see a story where they introduce a character I immediately want dead and ACTUALLY tell us how to kill him right there!
Anyway, what chapter is he going to die in? Please don't string us along for a very long while. Only one twist, because Ryan doesn't deserve to survive due to his wits, charm or luck.
Also, you answered my question on how the government's doing all this. Props, I should have thought of that.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, a lot to take in. Ryan is well...I hope Jaden shrinks him with the pill, guess he knows why Alex is so terrible. Essentially they are living in a military camp. I am shocked.
Now we need to see how Jaden helps Alex. Only way he can be friends with her.
Date: April 27 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're welcome... I find whenever I write, whether It be an erotic story or not, I can't usually have anything pre written.. It throws me off somehow.
Still, ver impressive that you write such long chapters each day