Date: May 02 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
NBA, really? You know what, I love video games. No full fledged review when an game series that has been milked by EA since the start of the Madden series, and those clowns resized they could make a quick buck by releasing a hand assed game annually is on the story.
Ubisoft does the same, but they work harder on quality.
Love the chapter. Play Far Cry, ALL ASSASSIN'S CREED's, and Splinter Cell.
There is a massive amount of realism in this story. Ads to the affect of being in the text.
Author's Response:
Lol I know but when I have yet to see a girl play sports games. Which is why I chose it. If a girl can beat you at sports, then she can beat you in just about anything in my opinion.
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was an awesome chapter... Been waiting to see this side of Alex.
Interesting cliffhanger at the end with Ryan.
Still linda wondering when we'll meet more regular sized people besides Crystal and Jaden. My guess is that it's when spring break's over
[Report This]Date: May 02 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Have to say, this is probably one of the best stories on the site. You take time to set up characters and make then truly relatable. And from the sounds of it, none of them are one-dimensional either. They all have a level of depth that's easy to sacrifice for a more smut filled story. I applaud you and your writing style and I'm looking forward to future chapters. (You should also know that I only review a story when I really like it, so this truly is a compliment from me ;) )
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
Happiness? Mending relationships? Taking things slowly? I'm not used to humanity in my giantess stories.
Again, I really like this story, but now I have no idea where it's heading. All I have are two hopes for the story.
1. Ryan must be killed, sent to the Phantom Zone, depowered and/or killed. Violently and torturously.
2. Please. Please please please. Please no love triangles!
That's all I got. Enjoy your five star rating.
P.S.: You know in your heart it to be true. Ryan MUST die. That's his fate.
Author's Response:
Can't promise you anything simply because.... I like both girls.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
This was great... Wonder how far they'll take it in their relationship before this story ends?
Author's Response:
No one knows....Not even me.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
This chapter was highly descriptive, and the imagery was amazing, however I think it would have been better for you to have done one of two things, make it so that Ava would be the only one able to remend the friendship, or made it so that, in order to break the tension, Jaden would ask her to place him in one of her parts for awhile, jokingly of course. He would have to be smiling as he said it. Other than that this chapter was OK, not the best, but after all the tension we just went through how could it be an amazing chapter?
Author's Response:
I thought about brining Ava into it or dragging it out a bit longer, but I felt like I had put both of them through enough for now. Plus I wanted to start building on all three of them as the story moves along. So the readers can become more in tune with the characters.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
This story is amazing it's almost sad to read how sorry she is towards him for how she acted I have a feeling it won't last tho :p
Author's Response:
Lol! Why would you say that! A gentle giantess is all the rage nowadays! Lol!
Date: May 01 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a cute couple they are!!! I can't wait to see they two be together . Lol
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Here's to better times! Jaden and Alex should get alonf fine.
Author's Response:
Cheers my friend cheers.
Date: May 01 2014 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC Agree. If giants/giantesses start going all over the world(out of the town/project, even if it's for peaceful reasons, things will certainly be interesting. That's wjy, depending on how things end, it'd be cool to write some kind of sequel a few years later, similar 2 ultradude
Anyway, back to this story.. With so many plot twists, and your great writing, can't tell what the hell's gonna happen next. So pumped to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Their actually might be a sequel the way things are going....that's the only spoiler I'm giving away....Well I said MIGHT. Well I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. I think it's sonething everyone wanted to see, so I hope I pull this off right.
Date: May 01 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Stubbornstain.... Not sure if that'll work, but If it all ends peacefully, and all these countries are left over with more giants than antidote, could definitely see giant communities spreading around the world, maybe an idea of a sequal ?.. Something like ultradude's stories, but with your own touch?
Just an idea
Author's Response:
Not only that, but you also have to take in to account that's despite them being giantess, their not adults. Alex and Ava are both 18 and 19. Jaden is 18 Ryan if anything isn't any different. The only thing about Ryan and why is in the position he's in is because his parents worked for the government and he was the first mega that ever surfaced. So it's only natural for him to run things in that particular environment. Not only that, but say that they did run off to another country, whose government also operates behind closed doors. Whose to say it would be any different? In situations like this there will always be somebody trying to be in the position of power and take over. Which is why I can understand the concept of a giant woman being powerful and dominant, but just off killing any and everybody she sees because she has no soul.
Date: May 01 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Why does it take a fatality to wake everybody up? Surely if things were that bad Ava and/or Alex would defect or protest. They could go towards Canada like the escapee slaves of yesteryear did. And, I’m sure the Chinese or the Russians or some other country would give them a home.
Here:
Ava smile knowing that everything would be alright now.
You mean: smiles
Author's Response:
It wouldn't work
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC: Agreed. Ife stopped trying to figure this one out. Lol.. Just know there's gonna be tons more plot twists
Author's Response:
Exactly. :) Im sure this story will have you guys on the edge of your seats.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
@JTC: Agreed. Ife stopped trying to figure this one out. Lol.. Just know there's gonna be tons more plot twists
[Report This]Date: May 01 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love the chapter and the character developments.
But all this chapter makes me think off is how Ryan's going to die. Cause let's be honest. His sole existence in this story is for him to die painfully. You have written a completely irredeemable character.
My guess is either in battle against the Chinese mega, or near-suicide mission into the factory to get the mega antidote. Or both.
Author's Response:
Lol never try and figure out a story ahead of time. Just because you may see a pattern or the set up may seem noticeable doesn't mean it is.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay, another chapter! This one was everything I expected and more, each time Ryan comes into the picture I grit my teeth in anger! I wonder why he wants the information on jaden, maybe it's to hold him down, or maybe it's to kill him, or maybe it's so that he can become a mega for either a final fight or to get Jaden to join him, the possibilities are endless however I hope for the final fight, can't wait until the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Ryan sure seems like complete jackass, especially since he runs the project/town. Hope things work out for Jaden... But something tells me that won't happen for a while
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
How is this guy supposed to be stopped? He not only holds incredible physical power but has an entire military behind him...I'm still not sure how such a nutjob was put into a position of power but I guess there are plenty of nutjobs in positions of power in real life so it makes sence.
Great story, I'm liking where this is going.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ava should not have called Ryan, she just made things worse. Alex needs to really make it up to Jaden, that poor guy is going to suffer now that Ryan has set his sights on him.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
You keep surprising me by making your writing better with each chapter. Again, love how your style is less of a "mass-murder" immediately kill everything in sight kind of style. I'm more of a mouth/tongue play man myself, so all of the licking and descriptions of how interactions between jaden and amys face close up are stellar. Also, in regards to my request for my challenge, what could I do to make it more clear? Again, love your style and think it would get out everything my imagination has in mind into story form. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.
Author's Response:
Lol, I know what you mean. I'm not into the mass murder kill millions of people and think it's sexy. Not even really into mindless killing at all. Despite a woman being huge, I just refuse to believe that she just go completely psycho and murder someone. But I'm glad you and others enjoyed the chapter. I'm also in light vore and mouth play. Mixed in with butt and feet. So I'm just adding as I go.