[Report This]Date: May 09 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Are you dead or just taking a break?
If the latter when will you be back, and can you give us a warning next time you take a break?
Date: May 07 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ava is an expert hacker? Hm, ok. That was a bit random. I was not expecting that. Good chapter though, I enjoyed it.
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Tasha did in face want to have Crystal under foot,
You mean: fact
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You want to have to stay here anymore.
You mean: won't
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have been a hell of lot worse
You mean: a lot
Author's Response:
Random things aren't meant to be expected lol. That's why their random....or was it plannrd....nobody knows but me.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
On the bright side, after that shithead Ryan is killed in the most satisfying and humiliated way possible, you've established enough of a universe to make a sequel if you feel like making one eventually.
Seriously, is it okay to say that Ryan ia a worse person than Adolf Hitler? Because Hitler at least indirectly helped fix the world economy after the Great Depression, and was kind to dogs.
Author's Response:
Lmao, wow Ryan topped hitler? That's a pretty big feat to accomplish. You have to be real low for that one. Also @tinyguy their spring break started when Jaden got there....I'd say it's around Tuesday now. I'm trying to stretch it a week but that may be too long....well see though.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome job once again...
A suggestion, maybe if all the stuff with Ryan is getting to be too much, there could always be a bit of a break, maybe showing how Jaden gets on at his new school, kinda like ultradude's stories?.. After all, Alex said Jaden would meet more people., and spring breaks gotta be over by now. Or are you saving that idea for a sequel depending on how this all ends?
PS/ 100 + reviews on you're first story is amazing... Should defenerlh keep writing after this story's over
Author's Response:
To be honest I was saving the high school drama for a sequel....but like you said it depends on how this ends.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
Why the emotions? WHY?!?!?! Damn you, brilliant chapter as always, and can you please somehow make Ryan crueler? Have him kill both Tasha and Crystal by inserting Crystal into Tasha's vagina and fucking the vagina, afterward killing Tasha of course!
But in all reality, I've basically never been able to actually remember the names of any characters from most books or might movies, your story has some of the most memorable characters!
Author's Response:
You're a violent one aren't you lol and thank you for the compliment, I try to make my character as memorable and real as possible. Although, I must admit, I didn't think they would get so much of a buzz as they have been getting.
[Report This]Date: May 07 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was so much more heart wrenching than the previous chapter. Man, I haven't felt such feelings since Nomad but it was stronger in the latter. Even so, well done.
Really turned Tasha from a sadistic horny bitch to someone more likeable. Having a violent talk with Ryan? Is she strong enough to even put the fear of God in him.
Jaden and Alex are still better off than in the last chapter and it is nice to see the two of them bond.
Now that you have updated yours, I wonder where Darien is with the sister story?
Author's Response:
Lmao I'm waiting on that myself.
Date: May 06 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
I agree with your last statement. Thus must have been a hard chapter to write. I may not be a writer but as a reader I thought it was great. I also think it's cool how he is small but still durable. And maybe someday Ryan will Geri a taste of his own medicine.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Got a little X-rated there at the end, in my opinion, but since this is giantessworld.net, it's not X until a penis and vagina officially combine, I guess.
This was a pretty good chapter. I think I like Tasha a little more now. Maybe. She's still pretty murderous. Still don't understand why Ryan has to stsy alive for sk long. Nor why Jaden being a half-Mega would change anyone's perception of him in a negative light.
Although that means he's the only person to be able to infiltrate the facility and steal the anti-Mega formula, force him to drink it, and get him to finally die horribly.
Touché, JTC. This is now the best chapter ever.
Date: May 05 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
The section about Tasha seemed really random. It's a nice chapter but I didn't think the transition from sadness to sex was realistic. It seemed a bit rushed given how upset Jaden was.
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you know were supposed to be friends
You mean: we're
Author's Response:
I figured in the form of writing it must have been, but I've been that upset before in real life so to speak....well not death death upset but it is possible to transition that way. Depending on who you are the person your dealing with.
Date: May 05 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not really everyone else gadget, most authors still don't. Just you, me, JohnnyScribe, Openhighhat, TinyDann, DX might but it will probably be for a Titan story. Then there is vgiv to round up the cast. Not many.
Date: May 05 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
I dont think this story really needs the pics. I mean if you want to its fine but dont feel obligated to do a bios just because everyone else is.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Another amazing chapter, this one was one of the best, and most chilling chapters yet! Why must you always send chills down my back? Is the nerds story going to become more prominent to the plot? Where are our promised images?
Author's Response:
Postponed lol I'm really picky when it comes to bios
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, just wow. Jaden is a failed experiment? Guess he belongs here as much as the rest of them do. Alex and Ava were overly harsh on him, like they said, should have waited until he was ready.
Alright, Tasha is not as bad as she seems but if she were really good, she'd think of a way to beat Ryan to death.
Date: May 05 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
What about the pictures of all the characters tho?
Author's Response:
May have to hold off the pics a bit longer. I'm picky when it comes to making bios and right now I can't seem to find a picture that I believe best fits the character.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
This was by far the best chapter in the entire story, nuff said.
Date: May 05 2014 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was an interesting turn of events. I was not expecting that. Nice work.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
PS: for the 100th review of this story, I will join in... KILL RYAN!!!
&, as another reviewer said, I would like more dirty scenes in there :)... Hoping that insertion tag you have gets used :D
Author's Response:
Every tag I used will be in lol...I know everybody wants it, I just had to built it up a bit
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow.. Loads to take in in this chapter... Would be great if you put pictures in
Author's Response:
Ok I'll post them up come next chapter so everyone can get a good look at who were dealing with.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tasha in league with Ryan? I imagine a lot of people would be. I don't know what'll happen just that it will be painful.
Also, poor Crystal! One parent dead and now knowing that she will die as well!
Kill Ryan and kill Tasha! I am sending my giantess in, she is twice as big and much deadlier than Ryan.
Author's Response:
Ryan has made it to alot of people's hit list. Jesus, so much passion and fire in the giantess community.
[Report This]Date: May 05 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Kill him. Kill him now. I don't even care about the plot, Jaden's secret, or Tasha's similarly psychopathic behavior. The fact that this asshole's very existence has ruined the lives of everyone he has ever met in what I assume has been the last decade, makes me angry. Seriously, the mere mention of Ryan by the characters pissed me off immediately.
Also... I don't remember who Tasha is. Is she s new character ir were we introduced to her a while ago. Can you refresh my memory then? Also, she might have to die depending on how close she is to Ryan. Cause if his evil spreads, all who touch it must die as well.
Author's Response:
The hate is strong with in you...my son.