[Report This]Date: June 23 2014 11:32 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
God just when I think I know the extent of her power there she goes with some sort of godly power. Spawning dead primitives to toy with? Epic. The way she killed them too was well written. It wasn't just mindless slaughter, there was thought out into it and a message given.
I've said it before and I will say it again, best story ever. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Oh there are many more scenarios similar to this one that I've planned to write about. This place she's in has quite some interesting tools to play with and torture tinies. Along that I plan to expand on her personality and past, as well as Matthew's and their relationship with each other.
And I'm glad that I've been able to get across the message as you've put it. This wasn't mindless slaughter indeed, it was a controlled expertiment just to show the ways she can manipulate tinies, how she can kill with such subtle acts.
Thanks for the review! :)
Date: June 23 2014 11:14 AM Title: Chapter Four - Stairway to...
I have already read 70 stories here. I can say this is the most intriguing of all, and as you, english is not my mother tongue (I'm spanish). You have my admiration, I hope someday I can write something of this level. This chapter, particularly, left me totally amazed.
Hope to see more soon!!
Author's Response:
Practice. There's no better way than that if you wish to improve your writing. Practice and reading too of course, there are some great writers here, but I mean novels in general too. If you read my first chapters of Broken Sky that I've written in the beginning of last year, you'll see the progress that I've made so far and it's certainly not hard to achieve it. You just have to write. :)
I'm glad this story is living up to its expectations!
Date: June 22 2014 7:14 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
wow this is a really good story. Pleass write more!!!
Author's Response:
I certainly will, thanks! :)
[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
*insert picture of M. Night Shyamalan here*
WHAT A TWIST!!
Such an unexpected turn of events to give the main character such a detailed and sophisticated background. I felt that the way you fleshed out the main character was a brilliant idea. His past experiences combined with his admiration for this killer of a women will undoubtedly make for an intriguing read.
Additional praise is rewarded for adding a 'gentle' side to the giantess. Most people either make a giantess 100% cruel or 100% gentle, however by tossing this ridgid dichotomy out the window you have succeeded where scores of authors have failed. You have managed to create a cruel/gentle mix.
Looking foward to this one Ifcfan. I may have to step up my own game now because of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, I do hope that the rest of my giantess writing 'career' doesn't turn out like Shaymalan's post-Sixth Sense directing one. :D
Going for a detailed and sophisticated background for my main characters has always been my primary goal in this story. I want this to be kind of a 'psychological' story dealing with the mindstates of my characters as much as their actions. I plan to explore those sides much deeper in future chapters.
And I'm glad you've picked up on the gentle side of her, it has got everything to do with how she views the tinies, how she perceives her own status and how her past has shaped her personality, which you'll see when I get to it.
I'm glad that you think I've done a good job with this. Honestly, I don't think I've ever experienced such a rush of reviews for a single chapter. I must be on the right track I guess!
Date: June 03 2014 10:17 AM Title: Interlude #1
Sweet, that drawing was a great choice! And I really enjoyed exploring his mind in this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
[Report This]Date: June 01 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Oh this is very interesting. She's no killer? I am very interested now since she is trying to prove him wrong.
Author's Response:
She definitely views the killing parts differently, but even she is under no illusions about whether she is one or not. I'll be exploring the different view points in greater detail in the coming chapters!
Date: May 31 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Nice twist in this chapter. Maybe we'll see these two become a team.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be an interesting 'team' for sure. :)
Date: May 31 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Interesting development with Matthew. I'm looking foward to the redhead's [violent] demonstration.
Author's Response:
I have something special planned, but I have to add a little flavor to it first. Hopefully I won't delay it more than a week.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2014 12:21 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
That was a great development chapter. So Matthew is kinda like a Dexter...Awesome!! With that kind of mentality he and the giantess could make quite a duo. This is turning into my favorite story in the violent genre. Thanks for the contribution, and I can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it so much! And I'm really excited that you could spot the similarity with Dexter. Matthew is certainly a lot like Dexter, but he's also a blend between him and a different character from another similar albeit less popular show. I guess I'll have to leave you guessing who it is as the chapters roll by! :D
Date: May 30 2014 7:54 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
So the evil duo finally pair up...Despite him having doubts you can tell hes gonna end up a willing participant.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Gadget! It's going to be interesting for me as a writer to try and pull off such an asymetrical relationship of two 'killers', especially since both will have different urges that drive them to do so.
And I was just reading your story! Quite a lot of things to catch up to for me, will have to put in a review later!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter Two - Obedience
*evil laugh*
Shese so direct in everything she does. Not even a little hesitation.
Also props on having a red haired giantess; gingers don't get enough love these days.
Author's Response:
As I've said (maybe not here, I think it was in gts city), I really wanted to step it up on the 'violence' and 'sadism' aspects of this story. For that, my giantess has to be in a certain state of mind where she doesn't hesitate unless it's deliberate.
And I've struggled to decide between having her undescribed in appearance again, or give her a face this time. Since I went with the latter, I thought a ginger would be cool, something you don't often see here as you pointed out.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter Two - Obedience
This. Is. Awesome. I love me a good cruel, uncaring, unjust, sadistic, torturing, evil, violent giantess. I’m not into the toilet stuff, but that scene where redhead made the smaller brunette drink her piss, I was all like “dood that is fucking fantastic!” Never seen that before in a story and I think it really illustrates what kind of a psychotic giantess we are dealing with. I wouldn’t want to be tiny around her, that’s for sure.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Gadget! It means a lot to me that you like this! I love your stories and after I've recently went through all of your old stuff again and got inspired to write a GC story of my own too in the near future as soon as I consolidate this one. I hope you'll take some time to continue Brobdingnag Holidays again in the near future! :)
And I'm not much into toilet stuff either, but I do love the humiliation that comes into forcing people to drink your waste, like they're not worth enough to deserve drinking water.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2014 12:29 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
That was a deliciously twisted chapter. I was wondering if Matthew would be picked out, glad to see I wasn't disappointed! I am definitely curious as to where you will take it from here. Now that they are getting some private time, Matthew and the giantess could get to know each other :). Looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Yep! The idea is for them to have a certain kind of relationship that you don't often see in GTS stories.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter Two - Obedience
Loving this. It's so unusual for a violent story to have a character that isn't some groveling, sniveling mess of a person. I definitely look forward to more of this story.
Author's Response:
Wow, this was fast!
I'm glad you like it, and yeah, I like my giantesses to be composed, meticulous in their actions. :)
Date: May 16 2014 9:00 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
This story has me craving more! It has an excellent hook and tons of potential. I'll be on the look out for updates!
Author's Response:
I hope I can write stuff that lives up to it then! Thanks Sporadicx! :)
Date: May 14 2014 10:06 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Psychopath meets sociopath. Not something you see very often, and I'm definitely looking forward to more of this story.
Author's Response:
But, is there a difference? ;)
I'm glad you like the idea! But i'll try to go deeper than just superficially describing them such... I hope!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter One - Order within chaos
You have a way of writing violent scenarios that is very appealing. I can always count on a good read when I see something from you. This chapter was a good starter for the main story. I can see how the giantess could develop a kind of "partership" with Matthew. That's just a theory of course, only time will tell. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment! Always appreciated.
And as you've mentioned, it's going to be an interesting partnership as you put it. I'm aiming for a relationship that I haven't seen done here around, so, stay tuned! :)
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 6:52 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
Good intro. Got me pumped for what is to come.
I do hope that the killings will get more personal. Theres nothing like a cruel giantess getting to know her captives then brutally murdering them in fitting ways.
Btw. We writers meet in the Egiantess.com chatroom every sunday at 9:00PM eastern time. You should come. :D
Author's Response:
There will be both of them. Chapters with victims she's been keeping for a long time, but others where hundred namless people die for her pleasure and all that. It'll kinda be episodic after the first few chapters, each dealing with different scenarios.
My main objective in this story is to try and experiment at creating interesting characters and scenes, advance as a writer basically.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 6:47 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris
"This is basically going to be torture porn" my cup-o-tea.
Author's Response:
Oh, hey, I forgot to respond on the review above to the Egiantess thing. Sorry I missed it yesterday since I only logged in today to check this, but I'll try next time, even though I'm from Europe and it means you meet at 3:00AM here.