[Report This]Date: September 18 2016 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow this story really blew me away. Chapter 5 was truly amazing, even compared to how good the first four were it stood out. The vivid descriptors used, and the amazing concepts were all executed flawlessly.This is definitely one of my favorite stories, I hope you put this talent for writing to work again one day and share it again here.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how a story like this slipped under my radar, but it was a nice treat to have a full 5 chapter story available all at once.
I'm not done with the story yet but it's already looking like one of my all time favorites!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Keep going with it and let me know what you think
Date: September 08 2016 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful! Best story! Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad that you came back for chapter 5. I've been waiting patiently for a very long time and feel like the wait was worth it. Your descriptive narratives really paint a picture for the reader and I hope that you continue to write more stories. All the best.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! Now that the baseline canon is established, If I end up writing more with these characters it will likely be in shorter "check-in" style stories. Gives me a bit more flexibility to avoid getting stuck in all the non-sexual continuity stuff that chronological chapter based storytelling writing calls for. I'd also love to see other authors take a crack at spin-off stories if anyone is keen to!
Date: September 03 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see this story updated again. A wonderful chapter, just feeling it's a pity that it's ended so early
Date: January 29 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
This might be hypocrital of me to ask this, but I earnestly enjoyed this story. Are we going to get another addition?
Author's Response:
Hi Azra - I took a bit of a break but I'm back onto working on the 5th (and probably final) chapter. Will try not to keep you waiting too much longer!
Date: September 19 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! You are very talented! I keep checking back here in hopes that an update will be posted! I feel like I have re-read this story over and over. I hope you haven't given up on it! Thanks for writing!
Date: September 14 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yes
Yoy can make the mother and her daughter sharing his tiny form inside their panties
Put him in the crotch area and go to work without no one knows
Also his sis the same and force him to lick ass pussy while farting
Date: August 31 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Just the perfect plot. I want that it continued to develop also slowly but quickly in terms of writing new chapters. =)
Date: August 18 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story! I love it! Continue to write please and don't delay continuation
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
As a foot guy, I'm still enjoying this sordid tale a lot. I love how the mom is so horny at using her little boy as a tiny toy. I hope he regrets his actions and is used as a pet for mommy's stinky body parts. I hope feet get used a bit, too, and hope his life is eventually snuffed out, as well. :)
[Report This]Date: August 17 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
it's interesting to see a butt domination story in which the sub shamefully enjoys the torture. i like it. i also hope it stays mom-oriented, but that's just my preference. not big on sibling stuff.
Date: August 17 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Isnt she projecting? The biggest pervert of them all, calling someone else on their perversion?
Date: August 17 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm am so glad you've come back to this. This story is just fantastic, the tension and escalation of events is perfect.
Of course I was so hoping she'd use him in her little session, without her knowledge, but I'm almost glad she didn't too. Better to drag these things out and let the anticipation mount like it is. Excellent.
Date: July 14 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
the incest thing isnt my cuppa, but everything else about this story hits the mark. all the focus on ass, and gas, and that she derives pleasure from doing it to him and he gets off on it too, but is scared. please, please continue. hope they work on him together, or invite another big ass giantess to fart or shit on him.
do wish he was smaller, like less than an inch, but this aint a pizza store.
great writing!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've read through this a few times now. Great setup. Can't wait for the good stuff.
Date: June 20 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I've returned to this storyh frequently. I really hope your still willing to add to it, it's one of the best i've ever read.
Love your writing style, the pacing and escalation is perfect. The foreshadowing is beautiful too.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am working on Chapter 4 but I've been very busy and I like to take my time and get it right. More is coming!
Date: May 10 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not to be petty, but do ignore the advice of ShrunkenMazrerunner. Aside from being rather self-centred (fitting your diction to suit his tastes - and as an Irishman I rather enjoy seeing arse and especially bum do the rounds here a bit) it can be damaging to your creative process to arbitrarily place qualifiers on your own writing style. Just let the magic flow out of you. And don't worry if it takes longer than you thought to write a chapter - as my profile will attest, I've had more than my fair share of that problem - your quality will stand by you.
Good luck on the next chapter, I'll be eagerly anticipating it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the backup. I've got to say, your story is one of my absolute favourites and I re-read it regularly. Chapter 4 is on the way but will take some time yet!
Date: April 01 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really nice story! Hope we will a new chapter soon :)
Author's Response:
Cheers! New chapter soon-ish I promise
[Report This]Date: March 13 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great idea, terriable 1st chapter. There are two main reasons I say this. First, it's not in frist person. I perfer being the charater not hearing what they do. Second, diction. I think it's safe to assume you're of British decent, becuase it shows in your writing. Saying things like "arse" and "bum". I, personaly, find those types of words distracting. Saying "ass" and butt" is easier and will make more sence to everyone. Anyways good idea, bad presitation of that idea.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Not sure I can really agree with your criticism - it's not fair to tailor all the language to a purely American audience , particularly when I as the author am not an American. Nevertheless I've taken to mixing up the asses and arses a bit anyway. Hope you enjoy the next chapter when it hits.