I approached this story cautiously as it isn't quite my type, but I have to say it's a creative twist. You did a great job having Gardevoir express herself despite the limitations on speech.

I definitely want to comment on your fantastic character design-- Blaire, Karla, Gardevoir, Rayner, Professor Sycamore, Erika, Charizard, Charles-- Honestly I might even still be missing some, the characters were very likeable! I especially enjoyed Blaire and Karla's chapters! (Though this may be my bias preferencing more human-like imagery :] )

A few criticisms-- Erika's name suddenly changed to Karla during Ch7 and Grammar/spelling errors were present although infrequent. There was nothing so severe that I couldn't understand the idea though.

All-in-all, great work! Hope to see more in the future!

Author's Response:

Omg i miss-typed there names xD im glad you caught that i never would have. Thank you for your imput I appreciate it. Also happy you like my story and i hope to please ^,^

Enjoyed the pokemon in control angle.  Hope we see more at some point, oddly entertaining.

Hi there, still an avid reader of your chapters and loving finding the new things people suggest you to try writing about or you go on and try for yourself c: I see you're honestly not afraid to try any fetish and I loved to death the anal vore portion you did when I requested a while back so I thought i'd try another suggestion. It doesn't seem like you do males but some male pokemon smothering something under it's balls or using a human to pleasure it with some anal or cock vore would be a cool thing to see, if not for the male bit, seems you always have it be a one person into the forest type of thing, maybe you could try experimenting with a bunch at once and see how a poke would handle all those running around from her c:

I wonder how Blair will react when she awakens and sees that shes not disguised.

And since they're near Snowbelle, how about some local Ice types, or maybe a ghost for halloween, or maybe both in one, like a Froslass?

Ey man, you're a good writer can you help me with a story? I can't write it myself cause i could only do two chapters and get writer's block. Plus thank you for writing this chapter.

Ummmmm, would you get mad if I asked you to do a non-vore bbw chapter based around a female snorlax? Have her dominate the trainer with her ass, her feet, and her "glory hole" if you do. Please (and thank you if you do it.).

Wow I loved this chapter. Good cruel way to get rid of the trainer

How often do you post these

Author's Response:

i try for once a week but ive had writers block recently so its been longer then that.

Good chapter by the way. I say your stories provide that touch of adventure and erotic element that does tie well with the unfortunate trainers/rangers getting into the wild side of pokemon. What can I request is use a different region this time for those individuals who aren't familiar with Kalos and Uvona. So that way its not always one setting with a different plot device. Again I am not questioning your creativitity, I am asking a little variety that's all. I just keep up the good work and go with it. I may have my 'personal' request but I feel it just going to be overdone to death. Once again great chapter.

It was more just a sort of interest thing. I'm a fan of male and female giants, so either's fine. Just had an interesting idea. Two pokemon find human and begin toying with him, but one ends up feeling sorry for him and wants to help him. To stop this from happening, the other pokemon shrinks that pokemon down, and toys with them both. Either that, or some ridiculously small micro sizes. Maybe some scat at some point? Sorry for this sort of idea spam, I'm sure you have things you'd like to be writing as well