i don't usually read gentle type stuff but i like this. good job with it

So it starts now but I am confident they'll find a way to stop thr entity from using Jessica as a weapon of mass destruction.

So this is where we will see the evil mind controlled Jessica eh? I guess they don't quite remember the events of the last arc but they haven't quite forgotten either, those memories still somewhere inside foggy as ever.

You reminded me that they're planning to erase Tucker's memories at the end of the 30 days.  If what Dawn said was right, it'll do him more harm then good.  That and the condition of his life BEFORE Jessica.  You'd think a company as advanced and thorough as Park would interview and do a psych profile on him.  They'd realize that he's better off on Home with Jessica.  Let's hope those subconcious memories and budding romance will get them to advocate him staying.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I did read about the cube, but just saying that since this arc is barely starting it can't really hold a candle to how exciting the Dawn arc was, especially towards the end.

I'm sure the arc will get better, its just right now its still mellow.

Ah a new mission on a lifeless planet? What could go wrong? Also, I am writing out the first chapter, will email it to you tomorrow so you can take a look before I upload it.

Aww, forgetting things! That kind of makes it seem like this whole episode was for nothing! Ahh, well, it was still fun to read.

Touching stuff, guess I better start work on my part. So she does remember what happened to her, should make things interesting.

 Oh my oh my, our heroes are literally running out of time. Dawn may not be much older thanks to her genes but everyone else will die. If Tucker dies before Dawn goes back then she will cease to exist.

  Also, she should be horrified to be so big, people are smaller than her thumb and her regret at causing Dr. Crilly so much pain shows that she isn't evil, just like her breakdowns before when she cried over not being able to see her father.

  Hope she can come to her senses and go back to her own time. Perhaps only Tucker can do it. I think I might have said this before but I'll say it again, this is much better than the original. 

 One last thing. The little side story I'm working on, I am targetting a June release. I have a habit of making stories go on for too long and for this one I want to make sure it doesn't drag on for too long. 

I like this remake, more conflict and therefore more action,  Dawn may be in the wrong here but I kind of like this new Dawn. Smart girl, using her powers to break out of the cell. 

  Jessica must have been one cold distant mother based on what Dawn says and feels about him but I suspect Jessica had no choice but to let Tucker be. He went back and that's it, company policy prevented her from returning until it was too late. 

  I would like to meet this Graham but if she continues this rampage, she will never meet him ever again as the universe destroys itself. Tucker will have to be the hero of Home. Speaking of Tucker, he seems to have discovered how fortunate the biggest heroine of all has decided to be his friend and how lucky he is. 

  By the way, is it possible if Jessica were to find out what is happening on Earth in Limbo? I think it might be better if she did know about it. It would help...this thing that we have.