Date: March 27 2014 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The start
Very good chapter!! Much better! And keeping it long.. Thanks :) can't wait for da booty action lol
Author's Response:
thanks :D and its comeing up soon :D
Date: March 26 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The start
I like the idea of this story and how it's going so far... Putting spaces and making paragraphs would be good.. Also "butt" action in this story would be nice if possible....please??!.... So far this story is very very interesting and I would love to keep reading it... Also I would like it if you kept the chapters long! :)
Author's Response:
ok thanks a lot man :D I will put some in for you sure might not be in the next chpter but it will be soon. And yep I will make sure I do the spacing and stuff :)
Date: March 26 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: The start
Love the concept but agree on spacing.
Author's Response:
thanks and ok I will do :D
[Report This]Date: March 26 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: The start
Interesting story. i recomend spacing your paragraphs.
Author's Response:
willd do man :D
Date: March 26 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: The start
You should read My Bestfriend's Pet by Asterisk.
Author's Response:
I have. its good :) I dont think its to close to this? I mean there are lots of storys our ther along these lines :)