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Reviewer: romantist egalitarian Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 2:02 AM Title: Prologue

I hope this a prologue to the heroic epic of the brother, whom with a small band of characters succeeds where pompous might failed! Perhaps filled with romance, sorcery, swordsmanship, cunning, daring, and perhaps even a Wyvern or better, dragon, along the way to sing tales of later. The Giants felled by mortal hands empowered, dependent to cunning and skill of such with conflicting volitions.

Reviewer: wordUP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 8:32 AM Title: Prologue

So glad that you've decided to continue this wonderful series. Without exaggeration, this is my favorite in the entire story archive, starting with the first "Princess of Vandan". The environment, character development, and description of everyday life make these tales special. Thank you for sharing your talent with us when you're able and I hope you continue this genre stand-out series.

Reviewer: UnskilledGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2016 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Nice chapter! More often please. Or try to. :D

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

*porn groove plays in the background*

foxtrot, uniform, charlie, kilo

(stick the you know what in the you know where) 

Reviewer: bbw liebhaber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 4:25 AM Title: Prologue

Malaka when ideas for new stories seek a look into my challenges.

Reviewer: bbw liebhaber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2016 12:15 PM Title: Prologue

Malaka their history is really great and I hope to read more.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 10:18 AM Title: Prologue

Yes, Belena and Sylvie may be the most powerful individuals in the kingdom but they aren't good enough to bring down an army of ogres. They're scared and not exactly equipped for war. I just hope the boys can come up with something to help them. 

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Woo hoo! Great to see this story back. I hope you are able to continue it.

It seems like a bad idea for all of them to go to Elgon. Who will govern the kingdom in their place or take over the rulership if they're all killed? They don't seem to be thinking this through but I look forward to seeing what happens.



Author's Response:

They are not thinking clearly, perhaps, but this is an unprecedented situation and no-one is sure how to act, Lord Henick is remaining behind to 'rule' in their place (I guess I could have mentioned it in the story, but I was kind of in a hurry when I wrote it! I might add a few explanations to the chapter at some time in the future).

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 10:38 AM Title: Prologue

Thanks for updating! I've always like this series. And nice chapter!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Whoa! Shit just got real! Also, these are some pretty unconventional royals, going out to war themselves and all...And they are extremely overprotective, the giantesses would rather fight themselves than send their own soldiers. But then again when a single gianntess can slaughter an entire conventional army on her own it makes sense. But this time with other mini giants there, they actually face some stiff dangers. The citizens of Vandan must really love the royalty who is willing to put their own lives on the line instead of risking those of their citizens! Anyway great chapter, I love this story and hope for regular updates!



Author's Response:

Well, yes, the giantesses are the only ones who could realistically beat the ogres in combat. But if Valerie had been there, she would probably have sent in some human troops as well, to deal with the army while she dealt with the ogres. She would also have called up troops from the more distant cities in the kingdom, just in case more were needed, even though they might take some time to get there. Belena isn't Valerie, however, and she is not at all experienced with these kinds of situations. But she will learn in time.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great it continues. :) When fighting giant ogres, speers and arrows with heavy poison can do the trick. Belena is making a mistake. 2 giants vs an army of ogres 3/4 their size.

 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Belena is wrong, she could fight an army of local ogres but not ones a hundred feet tall, more muscular than she is. She wouldn't last long and this will teach her that being queen means using all of the resources, not just sending yourself into battle because you don't want to risk casualties. 

I sense Valdan and Lorek will be captured, Argo will be very keen to exact some vengence on Belena's husband. 

Also, great to see you back!



Author's Response:

Yes, she still has a lot to learn about ruling and protecting a kingdom, which is why she believes that maybe she's not the right person for the job.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

Giant ogres, evil prince Argo, new giantesses. Exciting.
It's also interesting to see how the relationship is between Belena and Valdan, Belena and Sylvie. Those three have almost nothing in common. ;)

 

Reviewer: amsting9023 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 10:38 AM Title: Prologue

Interesting set up for the next story. I'm nervous now that there's a big threat to the Vandanians.  I'm scared that the story is going to get darker, maybe someone we love will die? Loved the wedding chapter, the vows funny enough actually made me tear up, so heartfelt and sweet.  Yeah the next chapter was definately not PG, but so what? It's nice spicing it up a little. Man, I am a sucker for strange fantasy romances, particular giantess and human love.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

I hope its a male giant and not one that goes around destorying and hurting people.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 3

Ogres maybe but another giant would be interesting, especially if it is male. Good to see you writing again, hope the next update isn't as long a wait!



Author's Response:

It won't be as long a wait as the last one, but will still be a while. Under a lot of pressure to get a lot of things done at the moment, but I'll make some time for writing.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

It's a shame this story is going back on a hiatus, because I really like this one so far. I'm enjoying the set up a lot. All I'm saying is please hurry up!!!



Author's Response:

I'll try!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 2:08 AM Title: Prologue

Super excited to where things go after this! Will this mean that the children could potentially end up pitted against invaders?

Always been a huge fan of this series and the updates are worth the wait!



Author's Response:

Yeah, the kids are gonna have to deal with a lot of things on their own.

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, very sexy chapter. You're right, much more R-rated than your usual stuff but you did a nice job with it. I can't even imagine the amount of self-control that would take for Belena.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2014 7:13 PM Title: Prologue

Oh Belena, I really love watching her and Lorek together. They are such a cute couple. Lorek and Valdan may be in trouble, can see Argo kidnapping them as revenge against Belena. Hope they won't be  too helpless in this story.

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