[Report This]Date: October 21 2021 3:00 PM Title: Finale
I'm gonna be honest, this story was pretty heart-wrenching and a tad hard to read, right up until the Meet Stewart chapter.
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Finding out that the morality system of shrinking was not actually set in stone and was just a widely-accepted theory was not only interesting world-building, but knowing that Rob just got unlucky and was not a victim of an unfair system was weirdly reassuring to me. And while even though you mentioned that Jaz was not everyone's favorite, she was definitely mine, and I was so glad with how the story ended.
Above all, I'm glad that you worked through your dark period and finished this story. Even if you might not be completely satisfied with it, I certainly enjoy it nonetheless. Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: November 10 2019 11:27 PM Title: Finale
This was AWESOME
Idk why, but I ever knew that the choosen one was Jaz, not a suprise to me tbh.
Well, the only suprise was the 2 of them dating, well, a lovely detail after all.
Hope to see more works with this gentle air or... I'm kinda searching a story like this where the mc is more like... ultra depressed, i thought about all the situation, and in some point, I think even if I like it for all the kink stuff, I would go some depressed...
After all, great history man! :D
Date: June 27 2014 7:36 PM Title: Finale
I always kinda knew it would be Jaz. Because she always seemed like the "best person for the job" (read: only person for the job). I never really swung any which way. I still kind of wish we got to learn why Rob's shrunk, and whether or not he could change back.
Oh well, glad this roller coaster of whatever is over. Good luck on your next series.
Date: June 27 2014 4:25 PM Title: Finale
You are good with these stories. I am hoping for other excellent story to see. I will miss one this tough.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 1:10 PM Title: Finale
Great first story, I loved it.
Though surely you'll make an alternate ending where he ended with Kristen...right? ;-;
Author's Response:
ACTUALLY I am considering doing alternate endings. If I do that won't be for a while though. So for now this is whatcha got
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 1:02 PM Title: Finale
Excellent surprise ending! :-D
Thanks for sharing this.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 12:25 PM Title: Finale
I'm glad he ended up with Jaz. Of all his interactions, hers was the most fun.
Author's Response:
Yeah I had a lot of fun with her.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 11:06 AM Title: Finale
A pleasant end to a story that kept us guessing who the "Best Friend" was. I'm pleasantly surprised that it turned out as well as it did and that their relationship isn't as master and pet, but as lovers. I think you did a pretty good job for your first gentle story and you only got better as the story progressed. Maybe you'll write about Alicia from England to show what she wanted to do with a micro person (not advocating for a mean giantess. Maybe she was a nice person after all).
Date: June 27 2014 10:54 AM Title: This is My Story
A fantastic ending to a great story, I can't wait to read more stories from you.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2014 9:57 AM Title: Beach Time
A very touching interlude. Although, I do have to wonder if the Synchronicity Sisters actually do know more (about his future English boss) than they are letting on.
Date: June 26 2014 9:52 AM Title: Meet and Greet
That was a Fantastic Four reference, btw.
LOL!
[Report This]Date: June 26 2014 6:08 AM Title: Beach Time
I'm interested in this Alicia Masters character, but I'm placing my final bet on...
Wait, I'm not placing my bet on any of them. I have absolutely no idea who is going to claim Rob. You've been stringing me along since May. I'm sick of it.
And for all those people who didn't vote for Jaz, since she's clearly the best candidate, shame on you. You're all racist. Except me. Cause I'm black. And I feel she's too much of a Mary Sue.
I want the story to end with Rob returning to his normal height, hooking up with Kristen, because he's still shorter than her, finishing college and becoming an advocate for shrunken human rights.
Unfortunately, the answer will probably... all of them.
Author's Response:
Sorry about that lol. When I started this story I expected it to be three maybe four chapters. Not 28. If it feels like I've been really stringing you along just because then sorry. But if you're read this long then I also thank you ^^
[Report This]Date: June 25 2014 4:28 PM Title: Beach Time
Hmmm you're still taking bets, yet the story is still implying that he's off to england. Does that mean there is still hope that he wont? My vote is still for Jaz assuming he stays
[Report This]Date: June 21 2014 9:20 AM Title: Meet and Greet
I wonder why she only wants micro-sized people. Good or bad person? O:
[Report This]Date: June 21 2014 9:06 AM Title: Meet and Greet
"Alicia Masters?!"
I sure hope she doesn't treat Rob like a puppet. ;-)
Date: June 20 2014 7:02 PM Title: This is My Story
I'm a little disappointed that none of his friends stepped up to volunteer to take care of him. I have the same feeling he has, that Alicia in England doesn't want him for companionship. The difference between he and Warren, is that Warren has a wife that will take care of him. Rob can't stay with his family and as far as I can tell, all the nice things that his friends said aren't amounting to much in the end. I hope I'm wrong and could still be in for a surprise.
[Report This]Date: June 20 2014 1:27 PM Title: Meet and Greet
My vote is for Jaz. I've been hoping that she'd be the one he gets assigned to. Alas that doesn't seem like that is going to be the case now.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 5:20 PM Title: Meet Stewart
So, Rob's shrinkage is _not_ an isolated incident. Then, I will have to guess that the initial wave of size-reduction, among the criminal classes had some other source besides mere coincidence. Perhaps, even illegal testing of some biochemical weapon secretly developed by the U.S. government!*
*You'd be surprised how many people still believe it was some kind of illegal missile test that downed that jetliner, off Long Island, circa twenty years ago.
[Report This]Date: June 17 2014 4:47 PM Title: This is My Story
I'm very fond of this story, and all of the things that go on in it. My girlfriend is into macrophilia as well, and though she hates this site, I convinced her to read this story because it's a thought provoking, and frankly heart-wrenching scenario. We had a talk about what we'd do if we were in his position, and it was a more serious, feels-y talk than I thought it'd be. So because of that, I'd like to see him end up with Kari- Love and dedication trump all.
/rant
Author's Response:
0.0 Someone read this and found it thought provoking and heart wrenching???????? Well I will be damned. I hope your girlfriend enjoyed the story as well and glad you both got a good conversation out of it. I will say this though. Whether or not Kari is involved in the ending. There is always the chance for love in the end.
Date: June 17 2014 1:05 PM Title: This is My Story
I'd like to see Rob end up back with Kari I really like the two of them together.
Author's Response:
That would make for a sweet little way to top things off. Mayhaps