Date: April 29 2014 7:18 PM Title: Intro
The fact that she isn't getting medical help for her father tells me that maybe she knows why he's shrinking and regressing to childhood. Since the father isn't working, how will they survive when the savings runs out? She's either gone insane and not thinking of these things, or she's worked out some way to keep the money coming in. I look forward to someday knowing what the real story is with the daughter. As usual, the story is well written, but a bit darker then I'd like. I look forward to reading more!
Date: April 29 2014 7:18 PM Title: Intro
The fact that she isn't getting medical help for her father tells me that maybe she knows why he's shrinking and regressing to childhood. Since the father isn't working, how will they survive when the savings runs out? She's either gone insane and not thinking of these things, or she's worked out some way to keep the money coming in. I look forward to someday knowing what the real story is with the daughter. As usual, the story is well written, but a bit darker then I'd like. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Eh, things will work themselves out sooner or later ... hopefully you don't find the lack of resolution too distracting so far; I pretty much wanted to stretch out this part of the story as much as possible while I could, so some of these plot things take a while to progress.
Thanks for reading :).
Date: April 29 2014 10:48 AM Title: Family Restructuring
I don't normally review things chapter-by-chapter, but I think the fact that these entries are so long is giving me more time to get invested in the sickening ongoings. I thought the role reversal bit at the end was an interesting turn. I hope that doesn't dominate their relationship as things go forward, though it's a sensible addition to the myriad ways this man is losing his grip on his life. The lady at the mall seemed like kind of a jerk for not much reason, but I understand that was to give motivation for Kyra's reaction afterward. As usual, you manage to squeeze a lot of tension out of something as innocuous as being forced to try on clothes. Also, the ways Kyra can occasionally act sweet with the sole intention of further warping her father's mind are great (such as how the chapter ends when they go to bed). That's definitely my favorite way to see interactions take place between characters like this, because it's so subliminal, and you handle it so effectively.
Author's Response:
Actually, the "mother"/"son" role reversal pretty much does dominate the story from here on out. For me, it doesn't get much better than that, in terms of writing material. Sorry if you don't like it as much ...
Glad you like Kyra's 'sweeter's side though, and how it serves to only mess with his head even more. A different reviewer mention Stockholm Syndrome and I think that's a pretty apt way to describe it.
Date: April 29 2014 3:05 AM Title: Family Restructuring
I really don't know whether I'll keep reading this story. On one hand, it's definitely well-written and this chapter was pretty good (for me, the last one was hard to read). But on the other hand, I severely dislike re-indoctrination through trauma in my story's. Putting a character through the wringer is fine with me, but not when it causes his personality to warp. Reminds me too much of Stockholm Syndrome.
Honestly, I had the same problem reading Pariah. It wasn't until the protagonist of that story started to lose his intelligence that I started to stop liking the story. It became less of a domination fantasy and more of a horror story to me. Of course, I finished it anyway, but I stopped enjoying it.
I can't rate this review. It'd be too biased to rate properly, but if I do give it a five stars as the story technicqlly deserves, I'd feel personally wrong. Anyway, keep up the excellent work; this story isn't for me.
Author's Response:
Fair enough. You might find some of the remainder of this story agreeable enough then, but other parts you probably won't like.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 1:18 AM Title: Intro
All I want to say is so so great! Your story just match all my favorite topic. Love ur story so much. I have expected there will be any AR parts in this website. It's so cool to let them change role especially daughter become mother and dady transform into a little boy!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! Yeah, I agree, it's so hard to find the kind of AR I like, especially on giantess sites like this one. Which is why I decided to write my own story in the first place :).
Date: April 22 2014 2:16 AM Title: Intro
So is the stories dynamic going to glaze over money for the time being, after all the mentions its garnished throughout the story? Because I don't remember kyra having a job, and I'm pretty sure the house,as well as kyras living style are pretty expensive. His savings probably won't hold out for another week at kyras pace, and it seems like his boss wouldn't accept his behavior either.. Any hints to this area of the story, or will it be to far into the future for it to really cause worry?
Author's Response:
Well, it'll be addressed sometime down the road, but maybe not in the most realistic fashion. The story kind of requires some suspension of disbelief in this area. At least Kyra hasn't bought anything more than little things like clothes at this point (unless I'm forgetting something else), and the father has a good amount of savings in his account which she has appropriated. Anyway, his work situation will be brought into the picture sooner or later.
Date: April 22 2014 12:03 AM Title: Intro
Not gonna say the father is completely innocent at this point, although his daughter's forceful tempting and teasing drew him in. But more importantly, damn, Kyra is one cruel lady. If I was the dad I woulda bailed long ago, see how that little hussy takes care of the bills without a moneymaker!
Other than that, I'm not gonna lie, this story can be hard to stomach at times...
Author's Response:
Yeah, it might have been more realistic for him to have decided to flee somewhere else by now. It's the kind of thing I might have paid more attention to if I knew I'd ever be posting the story online (which wasn't my original plan). Mais c'est la vie.
Date: April 19 2014 4:35 AM Title: A Day at Home
Why's Kyra so domineering and abusive towards her dad? He didn't do anything to her. This story's starting to confuse me.
Author's Response:
I suppose mostly she's just a petulant teenager who is letting her new power get to her head. However, I wouldn't say the father is exactly innocent in all of this, as he has indeed done some very inappropriate things (spying on her , sneaking into her room, jerking off on her clothes ...). He's not exactly winning any awards for father of the year at this point ...
[Report This]Date: April 17 2014 9:27 PM Title: A Day at Home
Thanks you for the long chapter, it takes away the pain from it ending.
But defiantly dramatic recent of events. Which is good, plus I don't have any criticism.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think the chapters will start to get a little longer on average now, as some of the scenes are pretty long later on. Thanks for reading.
Date: April 17 2014 6:18 AM Title: A Day at Home
Another good chapter. It was interesting to see the dynamics of their relationship altered after the previous night, with Kyra playing nice occasionally but still managing to get into his head, and your speaker coming to terms with the fact that he kind of enjoys their interactions. It did seem a little silly when he tried pulling the "when I was your age" card about her upcoming date, well after the point where she's clearly disregarded his opinions to the point of raping him. Maybe that's just how deep his denial is, though. Regardless, a fine job here. I've got no idea where you find the drive to make your chapters this lengthy.
Author's Response:
Yeah, maybe I should have written his reaction to learning Kyra's going on a date a little differently. But I do like the thought of him trying to retain what little he has left of his parental instincts by trying to speak up about it (even if he knows it'll almost certainly be useless). It kind of highlights how feeble and 'lost' he is in the absence of his normal fatherly identity which has been so quickly stripped from him lately. I did notice that it came out seeming kind of silly on a practical level when I looked through it again though.
Yes, that was a long chapter, wasn't it? It took what felt like forever just to read through it again myself -- I don't know how you all can keep up with reading it :).
Date: April 15 2014 3:30 PM Title: ... Never Go Unpunished
Love the twists and the Kyra takes charge. I also like the change to be addressed with Yes Maa'm. It shows respect. What will happen as he continues to shrink?
Nice work,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Much appreciated, thanks :).
[Report This]Date: April 12 2014 8:29 AM Title: ... Never Go Unpunished
You're a wonderful writer! :D Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: April 08 2014 8:24 AM Title: Perverted Deeds ...
Great chapter! Wish it were updated more often.
"The dad is the only source of income in the household. He is, and continues to be, the legal and functional head of household. He literally just has to tell Kyra that if she keeps forcing him to forsake work time for her own desires that he will get fired, or tell her that if she keeps spending all of his money, they'd get into monumental debt. Both ways results in a loss of money. If she's not an idiot, she'd stop. Roll credits."
I noticed that as well and it bothered me too. I feel like this needs to be addressed before chapter 10 because this is a big plot hole indeed.
Also, how small is he going to get? It says Dwarf: 3-5ft but I'd like to see him become handheld or fit in the palm of her hand(I don't like micro so I hope he wouldn't get that small lol).
Author's Response:
See response below. Not sure I'll make the chapter 10 deadline or not ... Also, I don't usually like characters that small (hand-sized, I mean) so I'm afraid you're out of luck here.
Anyways, thanks for reading :)
[Report This]Date: April 07 2014 7:55 PM Title: Intro
I hate being THAT guy who complains about faults in the logic of shrinking stories, but I've been reading for a while and this needs to be addressed.
First I have to say that this story is pretty good and, little mikey, you are an excellent writer. I really like the story itself and is by no means bad. But the biggest problem with a story is a very big plot hole.
The dad is the only source of income in the household. He is, and continues to be, the legal and functional head of household. He literally just has to tell Kyra that if she keeps forcing him to forsake work time for her own desires that he will get fired, or tell her that if she keeps spending all of his money, they'd get into monumental debt. Both ways results in a loss of money. If she's not an idiot, she'd stop. Roll credits.
Whatever. I guess that's just me. I'm the type of guy to rationalize fantasy stories. I guess I just do that when a story's good enough for me to insert myself into.
Author's Response:
I understand your concerns. I guess it never really bothered me though. What I mean is, I would rather allow some departures from reality if it makes the story hotter. And, to me, her making him miss work and making him fret and worry over that is hotter than the alternative of him getting his way and leaving his work life untouched.
I address the issue of his job status before too long, though. I agree, it would start to be too much of a suspension of disbelief if it continued on for, say, more than a week or so. But I'm OK with a few days, personally, if it facilitates more enticing situations/interactions between them.
Not that the 'solution' to this job status issue is all that realistic either, but we'll get to that ...
Anyways, sorry if this is a difference of opinion between us. Just trying to explain where I'm coming from here.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2014 10:33 PM Title: Perverted Deeds ...
How tall and big is Kyra? And how big is the size difference, just a little confused on that part. Besides that nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Looking through my notes ...
Kyra is 6'2" and around 155-160 lbs, pretty skinny for that height (BMI of around 20).
I give James's height at the start of each day in the story, i.e. Wednesday: 5'2". Usually it's the top of each chapter. But he shrinks 2 inches per day and so now he's 5'2" and ~110 lbs (I have him starting at 6'6" and 220 lbs, with his weight decreasing proportional to his height cubed, if you're wondering). Horray for math!
If you're looking for more physical comparisons between their respective heights, I can try to put more in as we go. i.e. right now at 5'2" to her 6'2" his head probably just reaches her shoulders or thereabouts.
Date: April 01 2014 1:06 PM Title: After School
I love the way he gets spanked back
Author's Response:
Thanks -- and good to see you living up to your screen name :P
[Report This]Date: April 01 2014 9:28 AM Title: Intro
I didnt expect him to submit this early in.
I really wonder how small you'll have him get until he stops. (if he ever stops)
Author's Response:
Yeah, maybe if I were to rewrite the story I would have made him put up a stronger fight for longer than he did. I still like how it turned out this way too, though.
[Report This]Date: April 01 2014 7:21 AM Title: After School
This story keeps on getting better. I wonder how far Kyra will take her sexual urges with her father?!?!
Author's Response:
Yep, stay tuned ...
Date: April 01 2014 5:37 AM Title: After School
Well, holy hell. I wasn't expecting to see pay-off like this so soon, given the pacing of your previous story, though it was a very pleasant surprise. Keep it up man.
Author's Response:
Yeah, when I picked up this story again after two years I was surprised myself by how quickly I brought that into the story, haha.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2014 9:41 AM Title: Under Control
excellent!!!
Author's Response:
thanks :)