Date: July 16 2014 5:17 PM Title: Intro
Damn. After that latest chapter, if I were the father I think I'd snap and either commit suicide or try to kill my daughter when I had a chance. I know that sounds extremely twisted, but given the circumstances of what has occured over the course of this story, I think a mental/emotional breaking point would be reached after all the abuse, humiliation, and punishment committed day after day. And now that the one friend he had left has turned against him, there appears to be no way out of the hellish existence he finds himself in. It seems pretty clear that Kyra has NO intention of letting any semblance of normalcy return after what she's done.
I'm guessing a tragic end (death or slavery of some kind) at the end of this story. That being said, it is very well written and antagonizingly addictive. It keeps the reader on edge.
Author's Response:
Glad you're still enjoying it. I'll admit I do enjoy creating a sense of total futility and helplessness, it's probably why I write such long stories since it keeps getting better and better for me (well, I do get a little burned out with it sometimes, like by the end of Pariah for example). But in general in my stories you won't often see things go better for a male character once they start going bad.
But this story will be winding down towards a conclusion relatively soon, so hang in there and, as always, thanks for reading and reviewing :).
Date: July 15 2014 9:09 PM Title: Intro
As you can tell reading all these comments I think you've just about reached people's limit for dramatic tension. We need to start seeing some kind of end game coming. Some insight into what Kyra is planning and why she's doing this to her own father. She's managed to take away everything from him and now finally his only friend. This is a well written story and I keep reading mainly to see what's going to happen next. Is this going to go the way of Pariah and he's going to have a bad end, or do you have something special in mind (hopefully something nice to compensate for all he's lost)?
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'll admit this story could have been shorter but I kept getting carried away with scenes (Actually, the story might have turned out even longer if the constant height change hadn't kept things moving along!). There's not a whole lot left now, though, just a handful of chapters to go.
Date: July 14 2014 9:37 AM Title: Intro
I have to say overall this is a good story. At first I loved it but then what started as discipline and become more like torture. But even though I don't think he deserves that much punishment I still keep tuning in to find out what happens next which is why this sorry is good. I just hope he someday has sine type of happy ending if possible.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I can't say whether or not you'll like the rest of it but stay tuned and thanks for reading :).
Date: July 14 2014 8:27 AM Title: Intro
Hello,,
it is really nice story I liked it . I hope you keep on and more humilation on jemmy. I enjoyed whole chapters and kyra role and has full control. 100% like it and it is my favorite story thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like it. And yes, Jimmy will definitely continue to be humiliated :).
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 12:20 AM Title: Intro
They say he's just a child yet they willingly try to abuse him. Theses women need help and james needs to run away and give kyra a scare that might make her change. Or maybe if he make the sacrifice and starts acting more like a real boy they'd be nicer.
Author's Response:
That's a good point about treating him like a child yet abusing him. It did cross my mind when rereading the story (i.e. if he's a child then he shouldn't be fully accountable for misbehaving and should be tolerated rather than abused, maybe). Anyway, I did go back and tweak the verbiage at the end of the previous chapter, but just a small change really. All I can say is that they maybe still implicitly acknowledge that he still has some non-childlike quality to him and so he shouldn't be exactly treated like one.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2014 11:27 PM Title: Intro
I'm also in agreement with the last few posts, while naturally this sort of gts isn't exactly my cup of tea the main difference I see between this story and Pariah is that Nick was an unlikeable bastard who received disproportionate retribution.
But what does it for me here is that you naturally sympathize with Jim and he's quite frankly a butt monkey being put through hell and there's hardly any struggle to speak of as far as him being able to effectively battle back. I could bear that if this was a short story, but for as long a story is this it's like watching an extended beatdown in a fight and I'm just waiting for the referee to call it off or someone to throw in the towel.
Don't get me wrong though this is still a great story with tremendous intricate detail especially for it being the first one you written.
Author's Response:
Yeah, like I just told the last reviewer, I probably could have reduced the amount of torment without hurting the plot progression. It always surprises me a bit though when I hear people sympathizing with my male characters (especially surprising when I heard that about Pariah but also here). All I think about is ways to humiliate the male characters in these stories, and it never crosses my mind to feel bad for them.
Not arguing with you, though; it's just a personal prefence thing and I find it interesting to see people's reactions.
Anyway, thanks for reading.
Date: July 13 2014 10:47 PM Title: Intro
I agree...that was a real hard chapter to read. I like the slow shrink and everything. From the daughter getting bigger...the friends....and Im assuming the the young girl will tower over him soon enough, but wow that left a burn in my stomach. It make me wish for him to just get away or to even die just so Kyra can get a ultimate burn of loosing a father and in her twisted mind a son. At least in Pariah the man sorta had a choice and was too....enticed to follow logic. This man is getting the shit list everyday. I wont be surprised if Kyra planned this for some twisted logic she has.
all in all I pray for a happy day and a happy ending for him. I dont think I can take another Pariah ending.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I never intended the story to go on this long originally, but I found out that I didn't want to see it end so I just kept thinking up new ways to torment him and putting them in. From a plot perspective, though, I can see how it might come across as a little much.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2014 10:37 PM Title: Intro
Well if all hope is gone, then maybe its time to dare Kyra to do her worse and verify that she doesn't give a shit about you. That's been the hardest part to swallow in this story. Does she dislike him so badly to treat him this way. I'm now wondering if this story is going to be like your last one. The woman comes out practically unscathed (and improved) while the guy is completely ruined, if not dead. I'm going to cross my fingers and hope for some kind of turn around to end the torture. The story continues to be compelling and a good read, though not my cup of tea as far as the fetish goes ( I like nice).
Author's Response:
I'll admit, I didn't put much thought when writing this story as to why Kyra would treat him this badly. Mostly just for her own amusement, I guess. But thanks for reading, anyway.
Date: July 12 2014 2:49 AM Title: Intro
Great storya281;
I want you to write a story of a big, violent father slowly shrinking and little, weak daughter slowly growinga281;
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I've had a few story ideas kind of like that, but we'll see if I ever choose to write one of them. I usually prefer writing about innocent guys being placed in unfortunate/unjust circumstances, but having a guy deserve what's coming to him might be a possibility as well.
[Report This]Date: July 08 2014 3:06 PM Title: An Evening Visit
still awesome. i normally like to read about smaller sizes but you've made this a really fun read.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're liking it :)
[Report This]Date: July 07 2014 8:35 AM Title: Intro
Brilliant Story, wasn't sure I was gonna like the whole slow shrinking aspect but it is brilliantly done. I find that I am now completely hooked and looking forward to your next chapters with great anticipation. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to find out what happens to little 'Jimmy.'
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hadn't intended at first to stop this last chapter in mid-scene like this, but I didn't have time to finish it and it's a long scene too. Anyway, glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2014 10:51 PM Title: Intro
Another nice chapter as always, I also really appreaciate the length of them. Can't wait for some more sexy antics between our two main characters though. Also, out of curiousity, do you even plan on doing a bro/sis story of the scenario similiar to this story and Pariah?
Author's Response:
Thanks. And while father/daughter is definitely my favorite, I enjoy brother/sister stuff too, so I'm sure I'll write some stuff in that vein eventually.
Date: June 26 2014 4:11 PM Title: The Babysitter
Hate to say it but, he's getting what he deserves. Jimmy always pushes his luck and whines so I'm excited to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Glad you said that. I found it interesting how James is mostly innocent in all this, yet at the same time he does certain things to push his luck and brings the punishment on himself in some ways too.
[Report This]Date: June 25 2014 10:20 PM Title: The Babysitter
Wow, what a bitch. Not even Kyra was that bad.
Glad there was a update, with a even bigger cliffhanger then last time.
Author's Response:
Yep, the babysitter was pretty bad, wasn't she?
Date: June 12 2014 11:16 AM Title: New Surroundings (part 2)
Love where its going. keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
Date: June 07 2014 4:33 PM Title: New Surroundings
I'm curious how many chapters long this thing is going to be. One thing I'm particularly enjoying about this is that I just can't get a good read yet on where it's all going to end up for these two.
Author's Response:
Good to hear. I think predictability can be good sometimes when you're looking forward to something happening and it builds anticipation, but too much predictability is probably a bad thing so I'm glad I seem to have avoided this. As always, thanks for reading.
Date: June 07 2014 3:35 PM Title: New Surroundings
How small will he be getting?
Author's Response:
Sorry, I'd rather not give spoilers.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2014 1:42 AM Title: Intro
Oh jimmy you fool there's always a right time for things and you never pick the right time. Love this story, but i find my self rooting for jimmy less and less. Man up jimmy or you'll never stop shrinking buddy. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Well, who wants him to stop shrinking anyway ... :P
[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 7:08 AM Title: Intro
Now for my review (: I will say from the start that I normally hate stories that involve shrinking slowly I have always found them very difficult to get into as nothing ever seems to happen no matter how many chapters I read.
Your story however is unlike any other progressive shrinking story that I have read rather than getting chapters and chapters of boring nothingness I get a wonderful dynamic father daughter conflict as the father shrinks. You describe things so well through the entire story which is something that gets more and more rare each day.
Lastly I will say I can belive the the personalities of your charcters something that I always find very important. It is always a better story when you can relate to the characters I think, anyway keep up the excellent writing.
-Chloe
Author's Response:
Thanks. I agree about the need for a good progression in character dynamics over the course of slow shrinking; I think certain authors are really good at this and have certainly influenced my own writing, but if a story doesn't do this I get bored also. For me the shrinking is pointless unless it leads to something new and different in the characters' relationships with each other.
Anyway, I'm glad you've enjoyed this story despite it being outside your normal interests. Hope you continue to enjoy the rest ...
[Report This]Date: May 31 2014 9:39 AM Title: After Work
Nice wrestling match, WWA or whatever that fake wrestling is can touch what Jimmy went through.
Can't wait for the next chapter as Jimmy keep dwindling in size. Anyways I think in the next chapter, that Jimmy is so worn out from his fight, his body has to work harder which shrinks him like 5 inches and pounds. Just a suggestion, if not keep doing what your doing.