Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to the Resistance

It's sad to see Lindsey go, but you made her death very useful to the story.

Author's Response:

Thanks. It will come back to haunt more than just Sanders.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2014 6:09 PM Title: Prologue

And so the deaths begin...Shame about Lindsay, she's the resistance member I liked most. But man if she can't turn any situation in her favor! Even her own death was exploited by her to enrage Sanders! And did Pyrra show sadness for Lindsay at the end there or was it that Sanders mood that affected her?

Great chapter, depressing (but that's this story's tone in general), but a really good chapter that not only moved the plot forward but had some Sanders character development too!

Author's Response:

Indeed she can. I actually didn't plan on offing her so early, but it felt right. As for Pyrrha...maybe....

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 7: Distrusted, but Needed

In terms of their being condescending, to Jacob, back in the first two chapters? They're inseparably identical.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 8: Enemy Mine

So Jacob was that resistance member that Aviel captured. I don’t like Jacob, though. Even if his reasoning for attacking Pyrhha was justified (hint: It wasn’t) he almost fucked up their plan to save hope and would have gotten hundreds of people killed to satisfy his own need for vengeance. Absolutely pathetic. Even I wanted to punch him in the face for attacking Pyrrha.

 

Author's Response:

Indeed he was. To be fair to Jacob, it was kinda in the heat of the moment type thing and he did recognize it was stupid at the end. Not justifying him at ALL, just saiyan.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2014 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 7: Distrusted, but Needed

Heh! Derek sounds a lot like Jacob did, back in the prologue. Guess he's finally realized it's not as easy as he thought, practicing what he preaches to the rest about "sacrifice!"

And, I think that kind of hypocrisy goes double for Swanson.

Author's Response:

Its always easier to say to do something than to actually do it. That said, Derek, so far, seems to be willing to carry out the mission so he is walking the walk. Doesn't mean its easy for him, though.

 

And what did poor Swanson do? He never mentioned anything about sacrifce in his speech to Jacob. Or are you getting Darius and Swanson mixed up?

Reviewer: Macro_Rebecca Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2014 11:00 PM Title: Prologue

Date: April 18 2014 10:59 PM Title: Prologue

I might have missed it in my little binge read (My tablet is terrible for long term reading), but how do the giantesses view tinies? On one hand they are 'defending' them, then using those not in the cities as experiments.   Otherwise a great read. I like stories that aren't just smut, and the story progression and the world building is great!   Look forward to seeing more!

Author's Response:

It varies from giantess to giantess.

 

Some are like Isabella and view tinies as people and themselves as soldiers sworn to protect them. Others, like Lutice, view them as nothing more than their playthings.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2014 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: Escape to Danger

OK! That was strangely anti-climactic. Darius doesn't believe Sanders' story, which seems to indicate that maybe he didn't know she was psionic, after all! Then, again, Sanders didn't recite the catch-phrase that was supposed to be indisputable proof she sent him to Darius. As for Scout Lindsey's report; is she working for the Society's alpha female...or Slutice?

Author's Response:

err....Actually, Sander did say it WAAAAAYYYY back in chapter 2. Its the only reason Darius and Derek even started to listen to him.

 

And Scout Lindsey is a Phoenix scout, not a Society scout. She was mentioned way back in Chapter 2 as well.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 6: Escape to Danger

It's so funny that his best friend through thick and thin has been a catgirl, the very beast of his nightmares!

I really like the bond between them: Sanders has also saved her life a couple of times now. Whether that may be ONLY to use her or because he actually cares about her remains to be seen, but it's still heartwarming.

 

Author's Response:

Indeed, I wanted that to be sorta ironic. The one thing he is deathly afraid of is the one thing that has save his ass.

 

And if you like it so far, you will like it the rest of the way.

Reviewer: KazumaR1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Shrink Device

Lol very sexy chapter

I’m going to go ahead and agree that even if Lutice is having her mind controlled or had her mind altered by the society, I doubt that it caused her to be this freaky. She must’ve been a little off kilter even before she became a swords member, I think.

Also since the society can easily grow and shrink people and objects with the shrink gun, the potentially fatal method they currently use to shrink ex society members must be a way to dissuade society members from actually doing it. 

 

Author's Response:

That is assuming that report was telling the truth...

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2014 6:39 PM Title: Prologue

Damn dude, this chapter was chock full of content! In one chapter we got: character development for both Sanders and Lutice, an epic fight scene with the odds stacked against our hero, more information into the tevhnology the Society posesses, and an excellent smut scene!

My only complaint is that we dont get smut more often, you write it so well! I have nothing but praise for this chapter, I think this one definitely tops even the best chapters in the first story!

Author's Response:

Yeah... I try to get it in, but I don't want to shove smut in for smut sake. Doing that tends to ruin the scene and make it less impactful AND makes for a jarring experiance. Kinda odd to go from life and death struggle to AND THEN THEY FUCK.