Reviewer: xmandavid Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2015 9:13 PM Title: Prologue

When are you going to start Act 3.. The suspense is killing me!

Author's Response:

Just did.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 29: Hope's Flight

Traitors in the Resistance???

Holy Shit!

If you wanted to find a way to guarantee my continued readership into 2015, you succeeded.* Have a Happy New Year, dude!


*You might also have succeeded at making your way onto my Top 10 List for next year. ;-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 28: Aviel

Posted this on gts city so I thought I might as well post it here:
What a chapter!!
First of all, holy shit Derek is dead.. Quite possibly the most honorable man in the Phoenixes, he will be missed.(just when I was starting to like the guy too) But I did appreciate the way he went out. I also especially loved the size related details you had in here be it when Gabby was running towards Aviel and looking up or when Aviel repositioned her foot causing havoc for Derek and Gabby. I really liked the humor you've added with Gabby's dialogue regarding Derek(Slab Manrock being my favorite lol). Was glad that Pyrrha found his body so that they can give him a proper burial, it's the least they can do for him( feel really sad for Jacob but also poor Kimberly who doesn't show a lot of emotion but his gruesome death will no doubt devastate her unless she's already numb to it all).
I'm kinda surprised that since Aviel has indeed gone beyond salvation she didn't try and trick Sanders into giving her the "legacy". Was honestly hoping she'd catch him so that she could interrogate him later... Wow, still can't believe she is officially a bad guy. I was hoping against hope that she only acted the way she did because she was never alone with Sanders but now that she was and this is what she did...(killing around 20 people plus Derek) I also am surprised she didn't recognize Gabby in the bottle with her HUD visor(or whatever its called) but maybe that's why she tried to pick it up when she thought Gabby was still inside... Was shocked at the amount of carnage she caused with so little effort(like when barely sliding her foot crushed poor Derek and sent him flying, also can't believe she didn't recognize him either... Or if she did she didn't say although I find that hard to believe)

And the confrontation with Aviel and Sanders was exactly what I was hoping for. From the way she stood over him like Lutice did them both, to the way she tried to catch him in her giant hand. Also when she was trying to demand the legacy getting nowhere with Sanders except when she threatened to crush the remaining resistance hidden in the rubble.(loved the dialog throughout this entire chapter to be honest)

So now that they were going to hightail it back to Miranda's house for her daughter and maybe some supplies, Flonne heals Aviel and she comes charging at them from around the corner like a bat outta hell. Holy shit. And her shield is back at 100% while they have to wait for the air cannon to recharge... I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Zanderas you are the man!! And you say we have more surprising coming up?!

aaron

Reviewer: Hubble Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 28: Aviel

Finally, the confrontation I've anticipated for so long...

I've got a lot of questions in my mind after having read this chapter...

Is Aviel not the slightest bit astonished that Sanders is still alive and achieved this much?

Is she secretly enjoying towering over Sanders now or doesn't she allow herself any pleasure on her trip of revenge?

And will we ever get told what happend during the events of Act 2 from Aviel's and Flonne's perspective?

I hope Aviel manages to capture Sanders so they can have a long, deep and private talk with each other!

I can't await the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yes we will see Act 2 from the Society's perspective. And that is the only question I will answer.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 12:37 PM Title: Prologue

 don't get why Sanders wanted pyarr to go to pick up Jimmy and co before coming back to save soldiers hidden in the rubble. those were closer to pyarr. can someone help if i misread due my basic english, please?

Author's Response:

Because they had the computer with Manchent's plan on it. Without that, the plan the group made after learning the truth would fall apart. Put simply, they were more important and needed to be saved ASAP lest it fall into Aviel's hands

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 27: Need a Hero

You sure made up for lost time!

I loved the three-for-all between Pyrrha and the other two cat-monsters. Reminded me of the daikaiju clashes I used to watch on Old Channel 9, out of NJ, every Thanksgiving weekend!

But, what I loved even more was Gerard having to eat his words, for once. There might, indeed, be "some truth" to them. But, let me hasten to point out that that simply means there is no truth to _all_ of them.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 27: Need a Hero

This chapter is the absolute highlight of Act II for me! Amazing stuff, especially considering how pissy I was that the chapter wasn't a continuation of last chapter with Aviel...

The battle sequences with this chapter were very well written, I could imagine what was going on to a crystal-clear picture! I almost felt like I was watching a movie in my head while reading this...

It was crazy that everything that COULD go wrong, seemed to go wrong this chapter but somehow they scrapped by. And Jacob was a complete badass this chapter, no ifs and buts about it, he deserves all that praise and more!

And lets not forget the other super-star of this chapter: Pyrra! Not only was she intelligently following orders whilst simulataneously making her own judgement calls (finishing off that bitch near the end), but DAT ending!

Leeme add too that I really feel like Catgirls have the potential to be incredibly powerful, almost rediculously so, with a little strategy and intellect. I'm kinda nervous thinking that Pyrra was JUST an earlier prototype of the smart catgirls.

Not gonna lie, I kinda expected it to a degree, with the whole Fionne stuff in the first act, but nevertheless, it was a showstopper of a revelation! Especially considering Samantha seemed to know this person!

Also, this chapter highlights the typical Society members overestimation of their own abilities, (they really are just overgrown bitches with fancy sheilds), the two giant gals this chapter were just asking for it!

To me, it really seems that the TRUE danger of a giantess is not their size but the fact that they have those sheilds, if it wasn't for those, even a single resistance member with some good rockets could take one down! I really think what the resistance needs to focus on is getting past those sheilds, once they're gone the giantesses are really just large, easy to hit targets for rocket launchers and the like...No shrinking tech needed.

Now as for Sanders and the rest of them...I'm actually a little nervous that you gave us this huge victory while leaving the others for another chapter. And making Jacob actually likable this chapter...ugh. I'm getting chills. You're not planning of killing off Sanders and replacing him with Jacob now are you?

To say that I'm nervous about Sanders and them, is an understatement...Anyway I'll leave it at that. Great chapter Z. This one was nothing short of a masterpiece!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2014 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 26: Truth: Bringer of Despair, Harbinger of Loss, Ignition of Hope

They say knowledge is power. The question, now, is: will Aviel want to even gain this knowledge now that she has the physical power Isabella was always afraid of her craving above everything else?

Reviewer: Recoveringlurker Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

I worded my last review terribly. I didn't want to spoil anything but there are many hints to another truth in the recordings.. Especially with Henry Martin and a "Couple that used to work in the CDC". Along with the details of the terrorist attack that killed Henry Martin and orphaned a child. I can only hope sanders catches on to all that. Then perhaps Aviel can be convinced she is fighting for the wrong side.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 25: Truth and Hope

Whoa.