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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2: New

Oh I thought you were going to continue the first chapter, so this is like an anthology?

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Date: February 17 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement

Interesting way to describe love.

Author's Response:

There going to have a rather unconventional relationship.

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Date: February 17 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement

hmm, interesting. I look forward to learning more about this "new world"

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Date: February 17 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement

So does she really love him or is she saying she is in love because she can control him and his money? I have a similar idea but a more light hearted tale but with my story taking up all of my writing time now, that story would not happen for a long  time. 

 It seems promising so I look forward to seeing more.



Author's Response:

This is going to be and interesting relationship. Especially from Liana and how she views Jack as a nomral husband. She loves him just not how you might exspect.

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