[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
3 mostly because Tyler's surrounded by enough 2s already.
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Class 3
Date: March 27 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Class 3 if Rain can be made into a giantess. If not then Class 2.
Author's Response:
Yeah I plan on exploring more class 3 non sense in the upcoming Sanders Siblings chapter but in my mind they'd never break thirty feet.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
Oh, I was wondering if we'd get the chance to see someone elevate, and this is a wonderful situation for it.
As tempting as voting for Class 3 is just due to curiosity over what sort of abilities you have in mind, I don't feel I can deny poor Tyler the opportunity to look up at yet another woman in his life. So Class 2 it is.
Outside of that, great to see another update on this. Every day I hope for one. You have a wonderful little work going on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you that means a lot considering I look forward to you updating your stories especially Omega.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
This story mixes the subtle (or not so subtle, sometimes), superiority of the women and elevated men with true emotions in a way most authors don't seem to be able to accomplish. In this vein, it shares a lot in common with some of the best stories on this board. This chapter continues the tradition. Wonderful!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment, rating, and support.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: What Defines Them
Wow you said this chapter would be boring dialogue. It seem to have plenty of drama to be a good chapter. But since the next chapter will have chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas, and some. I can't wait.
Author's Response:
If I can find a way to add chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas without it being completely ridiculous I will! Until then I recommend Dr. McNinja the webcomic I stole that joke from.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Liana doesn't fuck around does she? She is brutally honest and uses all forms of intimidation to get what she wants. It's sexy, I like it. I think the fact that she hasn't physically harmed him goes a long way. It's much more interesting for her to intimidate, reason with, or even seduce Jackson. KUDOS, i'm loving this story!
Author's Response:
Liana is a master of many forms of manipulation and she is unashamed in using them to control her tiny hubbie.
Date: March 08 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: What Defines Them
Jackson got problems either way, maybe after a few attempts on his life he will see the benefits of having a giantess for a wife when she swats his attackers aside with ease. Also, that might bring them closer together.
Author's Response:
That's the idea.
Date: February 23 2014 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Interesting story, please continue
Author's Response:
Continue I shall!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Forgot to add a rating!
Date: February 23 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter
This is a wonderful series. Can't wait to see more about Jack, Greg, and Tyler and the ways their lives work with powerful women all around them.
Author's Response:
I can say it gets interesting.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter
Ah was confused by the Erica/Emily thing until I read the comments, I see it's been edited since I read it too. Really loving the many new characters and the connections between them. I think the only isolated characters so far are Greg and Ramona.
On Mary being more open I believe lack of sleep and a very scary brother might have a hand in that.
Author's Response:
Ramona from chapter 2 is the little sister Mary had considered calling in chapter 3 so there's a bit of a connection there as well. As for the Erica/Emily thing let's all pretend that didn't happen. And if your the type of person who says NO! Erica now exists for the few hours she was in the story i as the author decree that Erica is just Emily in a parrallel universe where everything is exactly the same as this one except that her name is Erica and on that very day she went and got it legally changed to Emily. Now everything's solved. :)
Date: February 21 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I was wondering about that Emily/Erica change, I decided that they were different characters since Mary seemed so much more comfortable vocalizing her complaints here. Still works great, and I love the idea that Emily stuffs Mary into her cleavage when she doesn't need her.
Author's Response:
Thanks you again! As far as Mary is concerned the idea is she's not exactly "on the clock" so is more okay speaking out of term.
Date: February 21 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter
Loving this series.
Very fun chapter, I really like how your elevated characters aren't overtly evil (except maybe Emily in chapter 3). They're just a little full of themselves, which is more than enough to make the non-elevated's lives pains in the ass.
Author's Response:
You have no idea how important this comment was to me. You know why? I accidentally renamed Emily from chapter 3 Erica! Which is only okay it you don't give a shit about continuity. So yeah Emily from chapter 3 this is her family....suprise? Anyway thanks for the comment and I hope my mistake didn't ruin the story for anyone....Also I'd like to think Walter's a bit of a jackass, but who knows maybe he's just misunderstood and needs the right women to come along and change him.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5: Runt of the Litter
You could spin this chapter off into its own story. Teenage years are hard enough, but to be part of a shrinking minority or normal people could make it harder. It might be nice to see his school life or hanging out with friends. Maybe he has a normal girlfriend that elevates suddenly and having to deal with the awkwardness of relating to each other or deciding whether to continue the relationship or not. But regardless, these stories are pretty good and you should definitely continue.
Author's Response:
We will be returning to Tyler soon and see what it's like for him at school. Maybe he has a girlfriend maybe he doesn't? Maybe he has a crush on an elevated girl? Maybe an elevated girl has a crush on him and can only show it buy bullying him so he doesn't move on to a normal girl? Who knows. I could see this as kind of a spin off but I'm afraid I might run out of ideas. We'll see. Anyhow thank you for the comment.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: Cold Morning
Really enjoying the series so far. The different interactions between various couples and family has been quite interesting. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response:
I appreciate your support.
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I appreciate your support.
Date: February 20 2014 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I more meant in chapter 3 I was unclear on where the large & small character were located in relation to each other. If Mary was on the ground looking up to Emily, or if Mary was on a raised plane putting them equal elevation.
Author's Response:
OH. I thought I'd made it clear that Mary for the most part was on a end table so she was maybe waist high to Emily. The door she left though is cut into the wall the table is pressed against. It was specifically installed for Mary's use. You'll see more interesting retrofits in later chapters The idea is that the world is in a transitional period and a lot of architecture is being retrofitted to accomdiate the new significantly larger populous.
Date: February 20 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3: The View from Below
Great chapter.
My only criticism is that I'm unclear on physically what is happening in some of the scenes, how the characters are geographically located.
Really fun dynamics though, I very much enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
I think I get what your saying. The problem is once you fully commit to specific location or words like "Earth" you've locked yourself in to those perameters. Then you have to ask questions like if this is Earth. Is Obama still president? Is Rihanna an elevated being? These are good, fun questions just not ones I feel like answering. Thank you for the comment. You've actually given me a lot to think about. For now let's say it's a world similair to Earth but the names of places and locations are different.....Or am I totally wrong and your just confused about whether a character is to the left or right of another character.
Date: February 20 2014 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: New
Great chapter, I love the dynamic and am curious about this world.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the comment.
Date: February 19 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Don't stop now! By all means keep going. This story is interesting. I want to see more about the changed world!
I wonder how one deals with having a suddenly giant daughter or younger sibling? Especially if they were children. That would make for some interesting relationship changes.
Author's Response:
Don't worry there is more. Thanks for the interesting idea. Ithink I'll explore that eventually too.
Date: February 18 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Out of what, jail?
Author's Response:
Don't tell anyone, but yeah he was totally in fricken jail.