[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
So Rain seems to have kept Sheila off her for now but she will be back; she does actually like Tyler but is it in a girlfriend sort of way?
Author's Response:
I think she's a little confused about that myself. I explained it in a previous comment you can search for it you feel like it.
Date: March 30 2014 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I hope you people enjoyed that chapter about the Sanders Siblings because It's no longer in my archive to re upload. Curse my obsessive need to have everthing follow a chronological order. I'll have to now completely rewrite the chapter and because I do not have a photographic memory it is bound to be different in pacing and feel. I'll try to have it done soon. Until then I guess the chapter you read resides in some pocket dimesion or something. I can only hope this chapter holds you over.........COUNTLESS UNPLEASANT EXSPLETIVES!!!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Wonderful chapter. Greg and Ramona are by far my favorite coupling in the anthology so far.
Date: March 28 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Also meant to comment on this earlier:
It was really nice to see a bit more of Amy in this chapter, and that she really does love her dad and isn't any threat to abandon him like her mother did. It was very sweet.
Date: March 27 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Author's Response:
Eh. I was more or less trying to be funny which I guess a failed at. -_-
Lol it's hard to convey sarcasm and the like over the internet :P
Author's Response:
Argh comedy be a harsh mistress.
Date: March 27 2014 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
See, now after reading these responses (and also taking it account some other things you've mentioned in comments before this chapter), I can't help but wonder if Sheila herself isn't crushing on Tyler and simply flirting in the most boorish manner possible and using the homework thing as a means of marking her territory. I can't help but view it as a potential tool for getting him used to what life is likely like for a normal person with an elevated partner: Support for the sake of support.
Or maybe I'm now reading a bit too optimistically into the whole matter.
Author's Response:
Out of fear of giving myself away. No comment. Stop reading into things!
Date: March 27 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Your responce makes me think you either A want Rain to be a giantess, or B assume she isn't so powerful she can control herself :P
I don't think Rain would kill Sheila, but sheila deffinitley needs to understand that just because she has more power than tyler doesn't make her better. However with her extra intelect from being enlightened you'd think she'd figure that out.
And im aware that Walter is the nasty one, im glad 3s are rare, giving regular people power like that is dangerous.
I won't take back a 3, but ill add a 2 to my choice ;)
Author's Response:
Eh. I was more or less trying to be funny which I guess a failed at. -_-
Date: March 27 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
"It looks like class 3 is winning for the moment so you might just get your wish although I don't think Rains gonna reach anywhere near 30 feet unless Class 2 does a come from behind. Thanks for the comment.....and Sheila's not that bad just misunderstood....Like Walter!
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She still needs to be taught a lesson :P. and i really hope things turn around for tyler. (and you can't blame a guy for wantin some gentle size stuff :P)
Author's Response:
The way I see it morally Sheila is nowhere near as bad a Walter. You know Walter he was incarcerated for ripping a man's arm off and possibly using his super speed to rip off twenty grand. At the same time Sheila's a symptom of the new world a girl who elevated fairly young and has a smug sense of superiority about that she'll probably pass on to her kids who will most likely be elevated themselves which in the end might be worse.
As far as her relationship with Tyler goes. It's like that friend you used to hang out with a lot as part of a group during recess in middle school. Then over the summer she got taller and grew boobs and you didn't so when high school starts she starts hanging out with the cool kids and your stuck with the one or two friends that stayed relatively the same. So now whenever you see each other she just sort of condecends to you because your not a popular as she is and even if they don't mean it they don't seem to understand what there doing is actually bullying you. Only you know she's a giant so it's like a hundred times worse.
Also if things keep trending like this poor Sheila's gonna be taught more than just a lesson. Anyone still considering thier vote maybe think about what Sheila wants. I'm sure she'd prefer to see the next sunrise.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
Class 3, Tyler needs a break, im honestly surprized hes not totally depressed in his life. A lover who is semi-all-powerful would help that i think(and not to mention probably super hot after an elevation). That and Sheila needs to be made to feel as helpless as she picks on the normal people.
I love and at the same time hate the feelings i get reading parts of this story told by normals. You evoke this feeling of helplessness in a world that is suddenly too big for them. I really hope each of the normals winds up with a happy eneding, hopefully tyler's involves a 30~ish foot Rain who's a class 3 elevated and that people stop picking on him. (and so we can get a sexy gentle size related chapter later? I cant imagine he'd be opposed to being smothered effectionatley with giant boobs :P)
Author's Response:
It looks like class 3 is winning for the moment so you might just get your wish although I don't think Rains gonna reach anywhere near 30 feet unless Class 2 does a come from behind. Thanks for the comment.....and Sheila's not that bad just misunderstood....Like Walter!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
I have to vote Class 3 here, just because I can see a cool Supergirl vs. Giganta thing happening then. She can hold her own against a Class 2. She gets her dream of becoming Indiana Jones, and she and Tyler have to figure out what her new powers mean to their relationship.
Author's Response:
Cool, Class 3, but don't let her wanting to be Indiana Jones sway your choice because there's only one Harrison Ford.
Date: March 27 2014 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Ah, just saw your clarification. I had thought Ramona was a super powered Class 1.
I'd vote Class 3 in that case. I'd be more interested in Rain maintaining her normal size, but adjusting to the physical perfection and super powered superiority seen in Ramona.
Author's Response:
Cool Class 3 the mystery catagory sort of. WhoooOOOoooOo.
Date: March 27 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Okay I'll add some clarity.
Class 1: Physical mutations: wings, extra arms, modest size increase under twenty feet. glow in the dark hair
Class 2: Giant or Giantess it's that simple for now anyway.
Class 3: Crazy mystery superpower nonsense like invisible rapist hollow man or super fast thief convict. Or incredibly clingy flying super girlfriend.
Hope this helps :)
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Class 3, but still grows to the now "average" 15 feet. We don't want to destroy all of Rain's dreams now do we?
Author's Response:
Hmmm. interesting.
Date: March 27 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
Fun surprise, I was looking forward to a new chapter. This was a fun dynamic, and as always I love the way your chapters have specific scenes/stories to tell.
I'm most interested in the super people you've introduced, such as Ramona from Chapter 2, so I'll vote for Rain becoming a high powered normal sized level 1.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
3 mostly because Tyler's surrounded by enough 2s already.
Author's Response:
Class 3
Date: March 27 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Class 3 if Rain can be made into a giantess. If not then Class 2.
Author's Response:
Yeah I plan on exploring more class 3 non sense in the upcoming Sanders Siblings chapter but in my mind they'd never break thirty feet.
[Report This]Date: March 27 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Friends Like These
Oh, I was wondering if we'd get the chance to see someone elevate, and this is a wonderful situation for it.
As tempting as voting for Class 3 is just due to curiosity over what sort of abilities you have in mind, I don't feel I can deny poor Tyler the opportunity to look up at yet another woman in his life. So Class 2 it is.
Outside of that, great to see another update on this. Every day I hope for one. You have a wonderful little work going on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you that means a lot considering I look forward to you updating your stories especially Omega.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
This story mixes the subtle (or not so subtle, sometimes), superiority of the women and elevated men with true emotions in a way most authors don't seem to be able to accomplish. In this vein, it shares a lot in common with some of the best stories on this board. This chapter continues the tradition. Wonderful!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment, rating, and support.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: What Defines Them
Wow you said this chapter would be boring dialogue. It seem to have plenty of drama to be a good chapter. But since the next chapter will have chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas, and some. I can't wait.
Author's Response:
If I can find a way to add chainsaw nunchuk wielding sumo ninjas without it being completely ridiculous I will! Until then I recommend Dr. McNinja the webcomic I stole that joke from.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrangement
Liana doesn't fuck around does she? She is brutally honest and uses all forms of intimidation to get what she wants. It's sexy, I like it. I think the fact that she hasn't physically harmed him goes a long way. It's much more interesting for her to intimidate, reason with, or even seduce Jackson. KUDOS, i'm loving this story!
Author's Response:
Liana is a master of many forms of manipulation and she is unashamed in using them to control her tiny hubbie.