[Report This]Date: March 03 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Please tell me the next chapter is about Bobby! What a cliffhanger!
Of all the outcomes, of all the hot women he could be with, he ended up in the trash die to his hesitation. Haha.
I wonder how do we move on from here though.
Does Bob find a fork and hikes to the top, and finds a supermodel eating at a nearby table?
Does Bob get taken out to to the dumpster, but cuts through, falls into the feet of the girl taking the trash?
Does Bob gets completely sticky in there, that he stays there until the garbage truck takes him to the local dump and a girl steps on it?
Does Diane freak out and demands the waitress the location, she finds the trash can ans Bobby is saved?
Does a teen carelessly drops her iphone into the trash can sticking to Bobby and this teen pulls her phone out with a new prize?
Does the waitress remember she felt something and checks the trash to find Bobby?
Does Valerie witness the whole situation and finds Bobby?
My challenge to you, midnight, is to have a new chapter not based off any of these ideas. (unless you already wrote it).
Good luck. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Well, you had my wheels turning there, THEN, you said "NOT" to, 'use' those ideas? ;XD Thanks!
Ha! Bobby will get outta there somehow, I'm just not sure yet... how?
Date: March 03 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sandra will be participating in this history? I love her! :)
Author's Response:
Yes, Sandra will be back. I can't say for sure, when... She's reall-ly a complicated woman.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2014 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
An unaware ending! Gotta love it! So far this one is as good as the rest, and things could get very interesting from this point on. As for Mark...gotta feel a little jealousy over his current position!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dude! Yeah, Mark and Tony thought that they were going to get lucky at the pig roast. They bit off a little more than they could chew thou' with these two bio-techs, and now, their the ones that are praying that they will make it out of there alive!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
I will wildly guess that the hot waitress with the black tights will find him at the last second.*
*And, you'll notice I didn't say "bet," as I don't believe in on-line gambling. Even if chapter 10 does prove me right! ;-)
Author's Response:
I'll bet that 'Filo Beto' woulda made a bet on that one, Cary... XD
[Report This]Date: March 02 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome stories! I just read 1 - 4 in one go. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Wow, Thanks a lot! I'm glad that your enjoying it, stay tuned for a wild ride Lilis!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! I hope Mark was not actually swallowed and instread just saw the swallowing action in front of him. It really makes Chloe's point on who is in charge.
This chapter did not feel that long even though you mentioned it. Perhaps, I was just completely into it. (Thumbs up!)
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Next chapter will continue right where this one left off, so... (hopefully Chloe didn't really swallow him alive?)
[Report This]Date: February 28 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome update! Really sexy chapter. When you think about it, those two guys practically lost the rest of their lives just so two selfish girls could get little boy-toys...Its a little sad. I'm glad your exploring this more on Bobby's side of things, it adds a sence of realism to these stories. We on this site are all macrophiles so this kind of situation would be awesome for us, but I doubt too many people in the real world would be happy.
I don't even know if I, myself would be happy in this scenario if it was gonna be for the rest of my life! <<Something Bobby and I have in common since he was a gts-lover too until his life was turned into a real world gts story and he realized all the dangers and consequences of these things in real life. I don't even know why I started thinking about all these things all of a sudden. Anyway, great chapter, really liked it!
Author's Response:
Well, happy or not, their lives will never be the same again. The realistic value, of the visual aspect, is really difficult to write, I think. When the story constantly reminds the reader of the fact that everything around them is enormous. A constant fear of being crushed, or squashed by the hands of a giantess with very little concern, if any at all, for them. Can take the reader right into story. Give a little, from each perspective and try to take it up a step every chapter...
Thanks for the comment Gadget, I'm glad you liked it. I've been thinking about these things for many years, and it never gets old, my friend!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
A shrunken men-age a quatre?!* That's got to be a first.
*Rough translation: "party of four."
Author's Response:
'Tis a first for Me! thanks Cary!
Date: February 25 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
I did think about Sandra but I was thinking about her time with bobby not jim. I think that its unfair to say that sandra would treat every little man the way she did with jim because she had a personal grudge with him! Here, though, Jen is treating an 'innocent' this way! I dont think that jens little man did anything to warrant what hes getting here...
Author's Response:
Well, Sandra didn't want to hurt Bobby, mainly because she wanted to chose her own prey for herself. If she couldn't have victimized Jimmy, she would have most likely just picked the next available man that came into her web. As far as Jen goe's, she's just like a younger version of her mother Diane, she's really playful and sexy with her playmate. But, when he tried to escape from her, he forced her to show him who's in charge. However, she's not going to actually hurt him(Okey Dokey?) she just doesn't want him trying to escape from her anymore.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2014 5:14 PM Title: Ch. 7 'Tony and Jen'
I could tell Jennifer is trying to remember her dreams of a giantess since she first met Bobby. She wanted to do so many things to Bobby, but now she can with little Tony. I wonder what Chloe is gonna do with Mark after she got her ideas from Bobby as well.
Tiny Tony and Mini Mark.
Sandra is cruel, Diane is caring, Jennifer is playful, Carly is random, and Chloe is next.
Thats a lot of giantesses! This is going to be a wild ride!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom! Well, actually... every woman on the entire planet, would be an actual giantess for Bob, Mark and Tony. It's the three of them that are miniature men!
~an entire planet of giant women,.... would be pretty awesome huh?
[Report This]Date: February 25 2014 3:41 PM Title: Ch. 7 'Tony and Jen'
"And, he thet to work with a thong in hith heart."
Sorry; couldn't resist. ;-D
Author's Response:
R.O.F.L! "*.*" That's frickin' HILARIOUS, Cary! I Love IT!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2014 1:59 PM Title: Ch. 7 'Tony and Jen'
Jennifer is one scary lady! The way she shifts from deathly serious to cute and bubbly is astonishing! So far she seems the strictest of the gts's. Jen sure was quick to set the ground rules in addition to making subtle death-threats, wasn't she? A far cry from the playful sweetness of Diane...I'm interested to find out how our other 'new' gts will handle her new little man. So far you've made all the giantess's in this series unique and quirky in their own ways—they certainly feel different from one another. Great chapter midnight, I'll be looking forward to where it goes from here!
Author's Response:
Wha... you can't mean that Jen is scarier than Sandra!~ remember Sandra? Jimmy commited suicide because of her.... Jen's not even close to that deviousness.
Chloe's up next, so we'll see how she doe's with lil' Markie-poo. Thanks for commenting/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Definitely a cute mental image; Little Bobby and the "giant" panda. LOL!
And, the scene with Carly breaking down in tears (though, still w/o fessing up) was suitably poignant.
I can only hope that Di doesn't succumb to temptation and share her son-in-law's new existence with the dinner companion.
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary! Next chapter will only be Jen and Tony, getting 'somewhat', reaquainted? ;)
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
You know what, Im glad that these dialogue chapters are here setting up scenes in the future. I guess I was a little too anxious for some action.
For this chapter, I always enjoyed it when someone tries to hide something, but the other character already knows. Carly's stuttering is sure hinting that her mother knows the secret. Diane played it beautifully.
Author's Response:
You have to restrain yourself Tom! Try taking some deep breathes, and counting backwards from one-hundred. "0.0" - LOL!
..... thanks for commenting/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice update! That scene where Diane and Carly are both talking to eachother while hiding information from one another was excellent...So much tension going on here! Im eager to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thanks Gadget! I must admit that, just the idea of Diane being 'secretive' about keeping him to herself, is pretty exciting! When I proofread this chapter, it got better and better each time I read it... I think that Diane makes a wonderful gentle giantess. Although, a bit of naughtiness on her part really takes it up a level!
[Report This]Date: February 22 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, yeah! Di's _definitely_ not reuniting them, just yet.
Author's Response:
Thanks Cary! - you can look for her to say something just like that in the next installment-; "*.*"
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
I reread it after the corrections and I gotta say, Bobby seems to be really fond of Diane. And for good reason...the lady really knows how to keep herself in check. I feel bad for Carly but she IS the one that did this to him and hasnt exactly treated her little hubby with respect or care, since. SO YEEEAAAHH...
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, Bob's fond of her, she did rescue him from drowning and other than that little mishap in her panties, (which she definitely 'repaid' him for) she's treated him like a 'little king'. So, yeah, Bobby really likes his giantess mother-in-law, as for Carly, that's kinda like you said before, "You don't know what you've got untill it's gone".
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lots of descriptions, but not much action.
I felt like something was going to happen, and then the chapter ended.
Author's Response:
I am trying to carry out a storyline here. Not every chapter will have a sex scene. Dianes not a nypho, or a cruella type giantess, she's a real sweety, and if something happens with her, it will most likely be because she had no other choice...
The nature of the beast is slow and smooth. Makes for a much more meaningful effect when it seems more realistic, don't you think? :)
[Report This]Date: February 21 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bob needs to get back to Carly! :) Noticed less spelling errors. However, I’d recommend that you use ellipses less often. They are good for hesitation or faltering speech/thoughts, but that is about it. Rather than repeatedly implying to the reader that you have more to say (when the sentence already seems fairly complete), best to just use a period.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I guess I just like the way they tail off at the end of a sentence... Ha:) I also have a problem of 'unconsciously' tossing in apostrophes at any given time, I had to constantly focus on that to break myself of doing it. I would just 'hit 'S 'S at the end of everything with an 'S' on the end. I get so wrapped up in the content that I was just so focused on the mental image of whats taking place in the story, that those little things like that would just 'automatically' happen.
I've needed that spellcheck for a while, was just putting it off because of the distaction it would cause while writing. Although, now that Ive got it, maybe I'll get even better. :) Thanks Spooky!
Date: February 21 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Did you copy/paste this chapter 3 times over on purpose?
Author's Response:
Ha ha! , Had to edit that again, sorry... been screwing around with cut/paste, google docs spellcheck, and trying to keep the story going as well...
It's a learning experience, I can say that! :P