Reviewer: tostitos Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Given that we are focusing on this woman, is the event happening outside someone she knows?

Or perhaps this is one of those stories where she is causing it, somehow.

I'd like to see more.

Reviewer: KefkaR Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

More please! Really curious to see where this is going.

 

Set-ups like this, I tend to love it when the person knows the 'thing in the dark'.  :)