Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2014 11:41 AM Title: Prologue: chapter 1: The Nightmare

Whoa, this is really good Nick!  Love the idea of an all girls school, (or should I say all Giantess school!)  Nice start, although... you've done what alot of others have done on their first go at it...  (I, myself included) 

Break up the text into smaller blocks....  'White space is your friend',  and it's alot easier to read, Dude! 

Great writing, can't wait for chap. two!  ;)