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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 12 2023 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Great erotic start to a potential multi-chapter story. I see you're writing again. Perhaps that means a continuation of this promising start?

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Whatever happened to this one? This initial chapter was fantastic.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

This is written very well. I really got into it, although I don't actually care for the idea of being eaten alive, everything leading up to it is pretty great though!

I'd like to see more, this prologue got my attention...

Look forward to the continuation, Firefly!  ;`)

Reviewer: 360fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Very nice dude. Really enjoyed it.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you did!

Reviewer: codeman83 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Wow this was very good! Hope to see more of it, and will there be details on how she shri ks her victims? 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm very glad you liked it. More will be revealed soon!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Well done.  Just the right balance of description and mystery.  I'm very much looking forward to spending more time in this woman's head.  And in her abdomen. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Olo! I'll try to make sure that you will be able to do both very soon.

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