Date: April 25 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter Three: An Unbreakable Toy, and a More Delicate One
how tall is she?
[Report This]Date: February 24 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter Nine: The Aftermath
great ending to a great story! :D 10/10
Author's Response:
Thanks! I put a lot of work into it after the first one bombed.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2014 12:12 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
Much, much better ending! Now THIS is the ending this story deserves!
Author's Response:
Thank you man! I thought it came out well also.
Date: February 23 2014 11:07 AM Title: Chapter Nine: The Aftermath
This ending is better then the first one, but still seems kind of weak. I liked the almost omninous way you had Allison survive in the last one. Like she could return some day. Remember, the shrinking formula was untested and rushed. It was nice for Mark to learn a lesson from this, but it just rubs me the wrong way that he would subordinate himself to Chuck and become a hero. It might seem better if he became an anti-hero, or a hero with an attitude. I just think you wrapped it up a little TOO cleanly.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. Especially about Mark subordinating himself, but I had a reason for this.
*Cough* Sequel *Cough*
Date: February 21 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
Not gonna lie, that ending was kind of anti-climatic and felt rushed. I liked the beginning of the chapter but there were so many other things you could have done here to make this chapter amazing. As it is, it feels meh.
Author's Response:
You know what, your right. I feel the same way. But have no fear, I will re-write it, and it will be glorious!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
Good story so far bro! :D Just one thing. Why in every Giantess story is the military retarded? I mean, These are guys who know what they are doing. I doubt they would send tank to the feet of a giant woman. And no chopper would fly within arms reach of her....But thats just me. And Im a geek that way.
Author's Response:
I get your point, and it is a very good point. I just didn't really want to focus on that part. It would be easer, and the story would move a lot quicker, if they were stupid.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
Hey, about the Allison and capitalism thing...Dude, just pretend you did in on purpose...It'll make you seem deep and thoughtful XD!
Good chapter, I eagerly await what appears to be the conclusion to this tale..
Author's Response:
Dude, i am deep. Didn't you catch all the symbolism? Red meaning death and stuff?
Again, just joking. But thanks for the review, always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
I think my favorite of the 3 is Mark. The way hes regretting his actions like this makes him an interesting character...Especially since he was so hell bent on taking over the world not too long ago. Its almost as if his idea of destruction was far cleaner, censored almost...like those PG-13 destruction movies where you never see the people getting crushed to bloody chunks because the camera always cuts away at the last second. And now that hes seeing all this death and destruction first hand, hes realizing just how ugly it is. Really liking this character compared to the douchy good superman Chuck and the evil, cruel Allison...Good stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
You know, when i first started this piece i didn't een want Mark to have that big of a part, but as i went along i started to like him. I'm glad you like him to!
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter Four: Battle Over Sanstown
next chapter When?
Author's Response:
You want a new chapter? YOU GET A NEW CHAPTER!!!!
Date: February 02 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
I'm not sure who I want to win more now. the hero? or the villian.
I'm hooked though lol.. I wanna know who wins :<
Author's Response:
Its so nice when people get what your trying to do!
Anyway, thanks for the review, always appreciated.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter One: The Birth of Evil
Good story so far. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!