[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 10:33 PM Title: Her own little world
Come on Gerome, don't even try to get away. As I find myself saying frequently
GG, Well Played
Author's Response:
hehe, the tinies don't really stand much of a chance do they.
At the very least Gerome made a good effort.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2014 9:40 PM Title: Freedom and Responsibility
Amazing story!
And yes, you defintiely hit the seductive nail right on the head!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reviewing AntBoy94.
I'm glad my aim with the metaphorical writting hammer has remained good. I was unsure if I could still write seductive stuff after so much time away from this kind of thing.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2014 1:40 AM Title: Her own little world
At least she had fun.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, everyone will have fun soon. Well... except for the tinies, they kind of get screwed.
Date: February 15 2014 12:03 AM Title: Welcome To Maria
Exelent progress. I just like to sujest(and thus is just an idea) one of the girls got ether druged ir drunk that the desid to have sex with one if the other girls. And all asisted by your resently minitursed prison. Ceep with the good work!
Author's Response:
I like the way you think. We'll see.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2014 8:34 PM Title: Her own little world
Another tantilizing episode, A.W.! Gerome's hunger leading him right into the clutches of the buzzed-up Chelsea... Somehow I hope he survives though. His nose, rib's and arm all broken... but, he's a pretty resilient lil' dude! The L.S.D. trip was pretty discriptive, too. especially her faltering reality, as she compares her fantasy world to the actual real life world! Great detail! Expertly described.
She did climax nearly as quick as she felt his tiny body, so maybe he wasn't drownd within her soggy gusset? Oh well, there is plenty more left to go, practically an endless suppley! ;`) Lovin' this tale, Dude!
P.S. You might have to drop the 'Amateur' part of your penname...
Author's Response:
I'm so relieved to hear that the LSD scene worked out, I was unsure if I had gone a little too surreal. Now about Gerome, I'd hate to spoil this, but he is not dead. If he ends up dying, it will be because of Maria.
I've grown rather fond of the 'Amatuer' part of my name lol. However, now that you mention it, I could use a more appropriate name. Tinyone234 once told me to change my name to 'Adept Wordsmith', so maybe I'll do that.
First I have to figure out how to change my name though.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 8:46 PM Title: Freedom and Responsibility
Okay, this is really getting interesting now. As I read through this chapter, after you mentioned the tiny men being literally right underneath all those sorority girls feet, the thought of all those miniature men, 'Boxed up' and trapped, held prisoner by this morally respectful giantess, and yet lurking 'unknowingly' right above them roams a a a few hundred more young giantess' that could possably, at any given time, just stumble onto them...
I can't wait for the next intro-giantess... maybe she'll have to have a tinie of her own too! ;`)
Author's Response:
I apologize for the late reply, I have been very busy in RL. Before I start I just want to say that this story has been a real pleasure to write and I'm glad you're enjoying it Wildcatman. I look foward to reading your opinions on future chapters.
Anyways, I find the concept of all those people just waiting to be found and used exrtremely exciting as well. There will be a lot of interaction later on in the story between some of the many residents of the sorority house.
Also I'm glad that the morally respectful gts is appreciated. There is just so much opportunity with characters like Maria. I could make her snap and go on a killing spree, or cause something to force her to take drastic action and then make her justify it. Who knows, she may just go insane from the pressure and slowly abandon those lofty morals of hers. I may just make her stay strong and end up being the saving grace for the prisoners.
Only time will tell. I haven't decided which way to take Maria yet.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2014 7:47 PM Title: Freedom and Responsibility
Good stuff
Author's Response:
AdamX you have been one of my best supporters and I want to thank you for that.
Date: January 14 2014 11:36 AM Title: From One Cell to Another
Oh man, cynthia is a great character. I can sense many good evil gts scenes coming from her, nice work! Maybe she'll have to snuff out a prison break:)
Author's Response:
The idea of a prison break never occured to me. I may just have to try that now.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2014 3:53 PM Title: Welcome To Maria
Excellent again AW! And a sadistic story at that! Exactly my cup of tea as you might well know! :D
I really like the concept, though I too am courious as to how the prison shrank in the first place, or why. But I guess that it might not even be important at this point because that might not be what the story is about, I'm still not sure if there's an actual plot, or if this is just a story that will explore the characters you've introduced so far and their relationships with eachother.
I really liked Cynthia's character. I'm guessing that her sweet, cheerful nature is just a front, a facade that helps her hide her painful past and protects her from hurting even more. She must really feel relieved to have such an opportunity to fix her emotional pain of her past.
My favorite parts were definitely the paragraphs where you described her disregarding her two sex toys without much thought, then getting up and straddling her victims, having her cum dripp down onto them. It just exemplifies the power she holds over them so well, especially after she callously raises her foot over them and the reaction it causes.
Though I'm bit disappointed we didn't get to see how she used the five others she got later from the shoe box. But that's just me wanting moaaarrr!!!
And I do hope we get to see more! :D
Author's Response:
As it turns out, this is also my cup of tea lol.
As I said to Wildcatman, I am unsure at this point if I will reveal how it the prison was shrunken. The force that shrunk it in the first place is not a force that will likely show up again in the story, so like you said it isn't very important.
Cynthia's cheerful nature isn't quite a facade. She is naturally bubbly and cheerful, but she has some serious emotional and ethical issues that need to be addressed. Her character is based off the idea of someone who was hurt badly and never quite got fully over it. Its also why she can just use people like sex toys because she considers herself a victim and that everything she is doing is justified.
I am a bit proud of the cum drip part. I thought it was a nice touch.
And don't you worry Mr.Ifcfan I plan to explore all aspects of the sadistic genre before this story ends.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2014 11:17 AM Title: Welcome To Maria
Cat, you've never read any of Amateur's stories? Shame on you! They're all fantastic!
This one is no exception ;)
Author's Response:
You are the wind beneath my wings DMG. Which reminds me I have to read that new story you wrote.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2014 1:28 PM Title: From One Cell to Another
To begin with, I have to say, that this is actually the first time I've read anything of yours... This caught my attention, as I quickly scanned the warnings that you placed in the summary. Ha! 'thoughtfull technique'...
The Idea was a little bit radical, (as in overly unbelievable) Shrinking an entire Prison?
Curiousity, lead me on and I got completely caught up in this story! Your spelling and writing skills are nearly excellent, and the discriptions are very well done.
I thought the Idea of having some of the toughest, meanest, bastards possible as these college girl's victim's was a brilliant contrast of power!
I'm really excited about this story, and look forward to the following chapters!
Just one question though, will the mystery of the shrinking prison ever be revealed, at anytime during the story, or will that be something that will lead us into another story that will eventually follow?
Great stuff! ;`)
Author's Response:
Well It seems I've made quite the first impression. I'm actually a little nervous in writing this response. :)
The idea for this story just came to me one day as I was watching a crime documentary. I thought to myself, "you know what death row needs... a giantess" and BAM then it hit me. The power of contrast that you mentioned is what I personally love as well; these guys are the baddest of the bad, true psychopaths, and now they are at the mercy of a couple of stressed out college girls.
In response to your question, I will have to go with a maybe. I may turn it into another story, or just leave it unspoken. Frankly I'm unsure at this point.
Anyways, thanks for giving my stories a try Wildcatman I hope you stick around.
[Report This]Date: January 10 2014 7:10 PM Title: From One Cell to Another
A solid not unexpected turn of bloodlust.
I do however commend you giving the typical blonde bubbly sorority girl such a heartwrenching backstory...then turn her into a stone cold killer.
Well played.
Author's Response:
Gotta love the classics with a little twist you know.
Anywways, I decided to give Cynthia a realistic motivation to go on a killing spree and not just because this is a sadistic story.
Its a little exaggerate, but I feel like it works in this case.
Thanks for reviewing again AdamX
Date: January 05 2014 8:56 AM Title: Welcome To Maria
Wow this looks great, can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Thank you codeman83. I'm glad that your eager for more.
Date: January 05 2014 2:48 AM Title: Welcome To Maria
Very excited to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Well lets hope I can maintain that high level of enthusiasm.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2014 2:17 AM Title: Welcome To Maria
Definitely an interesting concept, looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
I dare say I'm rather proud of this idea. It hasn't been done yet as far as i can tell, and I have a practically unlimited supply of tinies to throw at the giantesses. Anyways thanks for the review AdamX I hope to hear from you next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2014 8:48 PM Title: Welcome To Maria
I like this. Great story. And I love the size of the people.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thank you aaron. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter, and I hope to hear from you on the next one.
Date: January 04 2014 7:40 PM Title: Welcome To Maria
This is a very cool premise here. I like that it utilizes two points of view of the inmates and Maria to give the reader a more expansive image of what's going on at the time. Though some may be bothered by the violence/discrimination, as you said, it'll certainly add to the realism of the situation and characters to have those elements present, so I say go wild with those kinds of things. It'll be interesting to see where you take this, as it's a very solid start you have here.
Author's Response:
I've been experimenting with multiple viewpoints for a while and I think I found a system that works, so hopefully I'll be adding the POV's of other characters as the story proceeds. Also I think a lot of people will definetely be bothered by the racism/violence. After all this is a story about a prison, and what kind of prison doesn't have race based gangs, and discrimination.
Its a fine line with these stories from what I've been told, so I hope I don't end up crossing it.