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Reviewer: bustyshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2023 6:14 PM Title: Pariah (first draft)

Wow! I’ve loved the main story for years but never read this OG draft! Really interesting. Much more vicious and less maternal and it’s definitely interesting to see the original revenge nature of the tale realized. FANTASTIC alternate ending as well. Loved it.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 11:24 PM Title: Pariah (first draft)

 

I would read this story but after reading it when u first put it out I cant read again. Im sure its a good read but last time I read this story i felt weak being a man and i resented women for awhile lol. Knowing this story to be more cruel is to much for me. My guess is the story is a 10/10

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