Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story, please don't end it abruptly!  Take some time off and come back to it when the muse strikes you.  What I want to see is for Bob and Carly finally have that serious talk that she seems to be avoiding.  I honestly think that they could make it work if she started actually listening and taking him seriously. 

An idea for a plot twist occured to me reading this chapter.  And might be a good way if you feel you must wrap this story up sooner rather then later.  It appears that his metabolism has changed if the alcohol is any indication.  The serum that shrank him is still somewhat experimental.  His life span has probably been greatly reduced.  Jennifer probably couldn't know that since Bob is the first human shrunk and not killed right away.

 

Of course I still hope for the good outcome.  Will read more as you release it.

Author's Response:

Thanks Riczar!   That's what I really needed,  SOME INPUT!  Much appreciated...  I'm not thinking of ending it, abruptly.. just feeling like it was kind of losing steam with the reviews.   The possiblitys that you've presented could be quite true.  The life span of most living creatures, that are so small like he has suddenly been reduced to, inevitably could come to light, his tiny heart would beat a whole lot faster, and his metabolism would be conciderably faster too.

I've already finished roughing out the next two chapters, but I have to polish them up a bit first before posting.  You've definitely given me some fuel here!  I might have to change it up slightly...

Thanks for the imput, that's what keeps me wound up ! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 10:51 AM Title: Ch. 11 'The Nightmare Begins'

It would serve these beeyotches right if the chant made him normal-sized, again.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

The question now becomes: are Carly and Jennifer so buzzed that they won't notice if Chloe yields to temptation and "pulls a Sandra" with Little Bob?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Personally, I would've opted for abduction by Ms. Cornpopper. But, I suppose it's too soon since his "liberation" from Sandra. So, on to chapter eight! ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

"Can you say, 'overcompensation,' Carly?
I knew you couldn't. Mr. Rogers was just frigging with your mind!"

Author's Response:

Carly's just in 'Panic-mode'.    Her husband's been kidnapped from her twice...since he's been shrunk, and she's going to be very,'very' over protective...

She hasn't once, had a chance to play with him, not once!   But, that's about to change~ ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, yeah! Sandra's definitely rounded the bend this time.

Author's Response:

Awwl, she's just a big kitty... 'meow'

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

It looks like Jim is about to give some more new meaning to the term "body-work."

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Apparently, Sandy didn't like Jimmy dating the "competition."

Thanks for uploading these newest chapters before the New Year. Have a Happy One!

Author's Response:

Yeah, Sandy's a little 'jealous' and now, as a giantess, look out boy - she's a Maneater!  :)

Thank You very much, Cary!            And-  Happy New Year to you too, my friend!