Date: February 01 2016 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hi there Nom De Plume,
I think I know whats going to happen... Rebecca is going to shrink!!! I think she is also going to get some of Vincent's powers. Is my guess somewhere close? Am I correct?
- From a fan
Author's Response:
Now wouldn't that be interesting! I won't spoil how the story goes. Sorry for the lack of updates, but I hit some writer's block plus I don't have a lot of free time anymore. I do have the plot planned out and haven't forgotten about Susanna and Vincent, though...
Date: October 27 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi there Nom de Plume,
You are a great writer and this is a really good story. I hope this is not the end.
- A fan
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've hit some writer's block. Well, I know where I want to go with the story, but I haven't settled on a way to get there. I've picked up the pen recently...it's just a matter of time and effort. Hopefully I'll get another chapter out before the end of the year! (No promises, though...)
[Report This]Date: April 04 2014 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Did we just gain a glimpse of the origins of Vincent and his powers? This reminds me of other fantasy adventures, and I get the feeling Rebecca just tumbled into something that will have a profound effect on her. They are really getting good in terms of story.
Author's Response:
Ah, but that would be telling! I will say that what happened in this chapter is just the tip of the iceberg. Startling revelations are to come!
[Report This]Date: March 22 2014 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very glad to see you writing again! There's a thin line between brave and stupid, and Vincent is right on it, isn't he?
Author's Response:
It's good to be writing again! Vincent is...well, he's learning. Sometimes ignorance looks a lot like courage!
Date: March 19 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Darn it, Sketch took my Batcave joke!
Good to see this story back. I look forward to learning what Vincent has discovered. Nice display of his powers in this chapter. It's fascinating that someone so small and vulnerable is also quite powerful in his own right.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pixis! One of the purposes of this chapter was to help me flesh out and put on paper all that Vincent is able to do--so far! This was helpful for me, as well as a reminder to readers. More powers will come in time...
[Report This]Date: March 19 2014 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like Vincent just discovered the Bat Cave.
Good to see you continue this story. Sorry I haven't left a review before now. I'd actually fallen a couple chapters behind when you took your break. It's an excellent sequel, and I'm glad to see more of Vincent, Susanna, and now Rebecca.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've been rolling around ideas for this idea for several months. Sometimes the best thing to do is just write with an idea in mind and see what happens. That's kind of what I'm doing right now!
I'm hoping to write a chapter a week. If I write more, I'll still only post one a week. This will give people opportunities to stay caught up.
Date: December 23 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter, one of the better vore scenes I've read. Too many writers have things happen quickly and don't take the time to describe the details. You did a good job describing Vincent's adventure and surroundings. I liked that the few seconds in Rebecca's mouth seemed to stretch with many thoughts crossing Vincent's mind at once. And the gale force winds of her snoring were a great image.
[Report This]Date: December 22 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Those two are ludicrously adorable.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Because of that screw-up, I'm done reading! :P
Seriously, I really enjoy this short series, and the way you've made the action flow from the characters, rather than trying to shoehorn them into scenarios. Nothing has happened yet that has made me think, "Oh, well, he's trying to get Vincent swallowed here." You have a handle on your characters, and that makes the story work.
And if I may offer a bit of advice...if you find yourself at a crossroads after chapter seven, ask your characters what they want to do. They probably know. I know a lot of times I've found myself fighting writer's block, it's been because I've been trying to force characters to go in a direction they didn't want to. I can't guarantee anything, of course, but it's worth a shot.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I did want to add to my earlier review -- I am deeply appreciative that you haven't made Rebecca into a cliched evil sister. I think there's every possibility she could be a complicating factor for Susanna and Vincent -- quite a serious one, in fact -- but it's not because Rebecca is hiding out, cackling with glee at the possibility of tormenting the tiny.
Of course, I expected no less of you, but still, it's nice to see you meet my high expectations for you.
Date: December 20 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like how matter-of-fact Rebecca is about things. "Straight down my gullet with you. " She's going to be fun, I can tell.
[Report This]Date: December 19 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think Vincent has learned a valuable lesson: Don't start eating the food of a drunk giantess unless you're keeping a very, very close eye on her.
Date: December 18 2013 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very excited that there is a sequel to The Glade. I loved that story. A wonderful mix of fantasy and gentle giantess themes. Susanna's sister will no doubt add interesting complications to this one.
Loved the opening scene of Vincent riding and surfing on the leaf. It reminded me of a scene in FernGully.
Author's Response:
Thanks Pixis! I think you'll like where I take Rebecca. Without spoiling too much, she's going to act as a brash foil to Susanna.
And you get a gold star for the day for referencing FernGully.
Date: December 17 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
You've set things up very well. And d'aw, Susanna moving to be closer to Vincent. So sweet.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well. That's an interesting beginning.