[Report This]Date: September 11 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not sure if you even use this anymore but I would love it if you continued its a great story
[Report This]Date: October 04 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story so far keep up the good work.
Date: March 24 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Make it so the start dating if you use that I'd sure get a laugh out of it cause no one ever uses my ideas
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww, she is falling for him! However I don't think he would get together with her so easily, theirs is a tough one, assuming if they even get together.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww, she is falling for him! However I don't think he would get together with her so easily, theirs is a tough one, assuming if they even get together.
[Report This]Date: January 06 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
That is a pretty sweet moment there, Adrian and Anna bonding over his mud covered body and how hilarious it is to her!
Date: January 06 2014 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Just a note because it's driving me nuts: the two instances of "wizened" should read "wisened". Wizened means to be wrinkled with age, while wisened means to be given wisdom.
I'm a stickler.
[Report This]Date: December 29 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wait there's magic here? I did not see that coming! Well it is a good addition, glad to see their relationship has improved, hopefully it gets better over time.
Author's Response:
There is a touch of magic. She doesn't have butt-load of it like, say, Harry Potter or something. There is a finite amount that she is born with that, through practice and manipulation, she can do many things with. It is a legacy from her maternal grandmother's side.
Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: December 17 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really loving this story, this chapter or the last one got me hooked.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear that. :)
Date: December 17 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Rampage? So a giant or giantess will reach a human city then! Anna has been fine all this while, this Adrian fella on the other hand...not even close!
Author's Response: Yeah, Adrian is rather whiney. Haha but that's just his character. He may shape up later with some smartening up. We'll see! And yes, we will have a tall person in a human city. ;)
Date: December 16 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Anna isn't the nicest GTS ever but she's certainly not a bitch, at least so far...She has no obligation to help this man, and yet, while she may act indifferent to his plight she HAS helped him quite a bit. This woman is FAR from being a bitch, the real bitch is Adrian!
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for the feedback. Anna is supposed to come off a bit frigid but not a total bitch. Thanks for the review!
Date: December 12 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
I know he's traumatized and all, but if he wants any help he'd better stop acting so... Ugh.
Also, the uncle's human wife. I'm assuming they didn't have any sort of traditional intercourse, at least, not without tragic circumstances.
Author's Response:
He is a bit of a prick, isn't he? Haha As for the uncle's wife, a little more is told about her later. She doesn't appear in the story, but is mentioned a few more times.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story so far, sand I can't wait to read more.
Also are you going to continue some of your other stories. Like (A Charmed Life)?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for the other stories, I would really like to continue them. Right now, though, the muse on them is missing. Also, they need a major overhaul to be up to date with my current writing style. Maybe over this Christmas break I can get some writing done. ;)
Date: December 08 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
He should be afraid. Very, very afraid.
Author's Response:
Haha! He should be. But will he? ;) I'll post the next chapter in a few days.
Date: December 08 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
It's nice to see you back. I was wondering if you'd ever come back. Though I've never roleplayed myself, I've seen some good stories develop from roleplays, though I can't remember any others off of the top of my head. I really like this part for some reason: "From the shrill scream, she had expected a female to make its way from the plane. Instead, it was a male."
I'm glad I added you as a favourite. Will you be updating your other, currently unfinished, stories?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! As for my other, unfinished stories. I'm not sure. I would like to continue "A Charmed Life" but right now I'm kind of dry on muse for it. But I had so many great ideas for it, it was just a matter of getting to the point I could do them. Plus, the story is so old that it really needs a total overhall to catch up with my current style of writing. And I almost never go back and edit my writing, which is one of my biggest flaws. >.>;; But, who knows? Maybe muse and inspiration will strike one day and I'll get it overhauled!